LLL Week 8: Joe Boston (2-4) vs Sinning (0-5) OPEN FOR VOTES

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


2 No-Shows = Season Ban

NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
Biting results in a SEASON BAN
Recycle Once = DQ
RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

Edits:
First Person can't edit after second person posts their verse
Second person can't edit after first vote


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I'm rhyming lavishly..justice demands tax..I'm rhyming casually
I'm rhyming magically..lines of magic glee..if 'Bos fucks me over'.. it's his final fantasy..
I'm sin with words..I'm Zion..bitch hit the curb
I diminish curse, whipped with slurs..forget 'taking this average joe to school'..I'm taking him to work..(I'LL GIVE YOU THIS WORK! LOL)
I'm a essence play; coalescent roaming peasant omnipresent souls of message slay
Show the enders game...I'll hit 'Bos with a spinning kick'...like Jin at the end of Tekken Game...(KO!)
Devour your essence...I'm Zion...a mountain of weapons...fountain of heaven
I have the power of message...and I'll 'pile drive you from the towers of 911'...

Finish HIM...

Defeat kids with elite wit'...serene whim..and serene mystic sin..
you're so poor..if you were the rat in ratatouille...you'd eat shit...

JUST KIDDING ABOUT THE LAST FINISH HIM!!

NOW! FINISH HIM!!

I'm flowing well... flow compels the oceans shell..
you're such a wack heathen...if you'd devoured the '11th plague of egypt'..you'd go to hell..

FROM ZION!!

GOOD LUCK NOOB!! LOL!!

BTW, I'm Zodiac..

Hurry up and post you scrub...

Lmao check fuck boi I’m at work will post later

Right hand make his mouth leak, he’ll be lying if he’s not opposed to weak
The way I’ll leave his life in Jeopardy, they won’t give a fuck about James Holzhauers win streak
Think before you speak, those soft words are no fucking threat
Beat your ass snatch your Juls or I can bring you smoke equivalent to 20 cigarettes
His Chick tells me behind those ears are wet, during sex he fucks the wrong hole
Now whenever she leaves your balls blue jacket, while I shoot in her quick like a Columbus playoff goal
5 losses taking a toll on you, been told ya those forced multis are disappointing
Lines are such a fucking drag, we rather watch you die from illegal street racing
Pacing back n forth for a dub, called me scrub even whack at personal stabs
Zodiac signs are just a Cancer I’m just hoping one day he catches Crabs
I can follow from a jab to knock you out, or just shoot until I see the blood poor
Deadly weapons are my character you’re gonna be fucking asking what the Toy Story 4

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Originally Posted by Sinning

I'm rhyming lavishly..justice demands tax..I'm rhyming casually
I'm rhyming magically..lines of magic glee..if 'Bos fucks me over'.. it's his final fantasy..
i like the reference ff flexx
I'm sin with words..I'm Zion..bitch hit the curb
I diminish curse, whipped with slurs..forget 'taking this average joe to school'..I'm taking him to work..(I'LL GIVE YOU THIS WORK! LOL)
nice concept flowed well and wel executed
I'm a essence play; coalescent roaming peasant omnipresent souls of message slay
Show the enders game...I'll hit 'Bos with a spinning kick'...like Jin at the end of Tekken Game...(KO!)
solid punch, set up had good rhymes but should link to the punchline for a better more clever effect, still liked this tho
Devour your essence...I'm Zion...a mountain of weapons...fountain of heaven
I have the power of message...and I'll 'pile drive you from the towers of 911'...
supa hot fire, literally
Finish HIM...

Defeat kids with elite wit'...serene whim..and serene mystic sin..
you're so poor..if you were the rat in ratatouille...you'd eat shit...
lite
JUST KIDDING ABOUT THE LAST FINISH HIM!!
laughed
NOW! FINISH HIM!!

I'm flowing well... flow compels the oceans shell..
you're such a wack heathen...if you'd devoured the '11th plague of egypt'..you'd go to hell..
this didnt make sense to me idk
FROM ZION!!
wooooooord

GOOD LUCK NOOB!! LOL!!

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Right hand make his mouth leak, he’ll be lying if he’s not opposed to weak
The way I’ll leave his life in Jeopardy, they won’t give a fuck about James Holzhauers win streak
nice reference
Think before you speak, those soft words are no fucking threat
Beat your ass snatch your Juls or I can bring you smoke equivalent to 20 cigarettes
solid wordplay
His Chick tells me behind those ears are wet, during sex he fucks the wrong hole
Now whenever she leaves your balls blue jacket, while I shoot in her quick like a Columbus playoff goal
wordplay was funny, not familiar with the that columbus playoff reference tho
5 losses taking a toll on you, been told ya those forced multis are disappointing
Lines are such a fucking drag, we rather watch you die from illegal street racing
personal was funny, punch was just ok, drag wordplay coulda been done better idk how tho
Pacing back n forth for a dub, called me scrub even whack at personal stabs
Zodiac signs are just a Cancer I’m just hoping one day he catches Crabs
laughed
I can follow from a jab to knock you out, or just shoot until I see the blood poor
Deadly weapons are my character you’re gonna be fucking asking what the Toy Story 4
cool

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over all. enjoying battle on both sides. sin makes me laugh with his lines like carter deems or some shit. could use less filler tho, i think u can still keep the multies while linking all the rhymes, work at it sinning and ull be a monster. joe boston has obscure references sometimes, but the punches and flips are usually on point.

close match, i feel bad to give sinning anothing losing vote cause i actually liked the verse, just gotta cut the filler without losing those multis, good shit fellas

v/ boston

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Originally Posted by Sinning

I'm rhyming lavishly..justice demands tax..I'm rhyming casually
I'm rhyming magically..lines of magic glee..if 'Bos fucks me over'.. it's his final fantasy..

You really just need to stop trying to have alot of multies and focus on wording the punch. Alot of the best writers dont have alot of multies outside of the ending of the set up line and punchline themselves. Because they rather emphasize wording the concept to hit harder than rhyme in a flashier manner. You have it in you to do this, wish you'd drop this act. This is light at best for me.

I'm sin with words..I'm Zion..bitch hit the curb
I diminish curse, whipped with slurs..forget 'taking this average joe to school'..I'm taking him to work..(I'LL GIVE YOU THIS WORK! LOL)

for you this is ok.

I'm a essence play; coalescent roaming peasant omnipresent souls of message slay
Show the enders game...I'll hit 'Bos with a spinning kick'...like Jin at the end of Tekken Game...(KO!)

Again, this is pure filler set up up until the message slay. The punch is decent though, good job.

Devour your essence...I'm Zion...a mountain of weapons...fountain of heaven
I have the power of message...and I'll 'pile drive you from the towers of 911'...

None of this correlates to one another its pure filler. Should've atleast had a Nationalized tragedy theme in your setup to make this work.

Finish HIM...

Defeat kids with elite wit'...serene whim..and serene mystic sin..
you're so poor..if you were the rat in ratatouille...you'd eat shit...

nah whack

JUST KIDDING ABOUT THE LAST FINISH HIM!!

NOW! FINISH HIM!!

I'm flowing well... flow compels the oceans shell..
you're such a wack heathen...if you'd devoured the '11th plague of egypt'..you'd go to hell..



FROM ZION!!

So your a Black jamaican now? Mr. mestizo Mexico


GOOD LUCK NOOB!! LOL!!

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Right hand make his mouth leak, he’ll be lying if he’s not opposed to weak
The way I’ll leave his life in Jeopardy, they won’t give a fuck about James Holzhauers win streak

OK, better than sinnings opener.

Think before you speak, those soft words are no fucking threat
Beat your ass snatch your Juls or I can bring you smoke equivalent to 20 cigarettes

This was actually a good line, for you Joey.

His Chick tells me behind those ears are wet, during sex he fucks the wrong hole
Now whenever she leaves your balls blue jacket, while I shoot in her quick like a Columbus playoff goal

Idk this punch is worded weird, might be cause english is not my main lingo. Jack it/jacket ? Balls blue Jack it, while i shoot. Doesn't really make sense to me.

5 losses taking a toll on you, been told ya those forced multis are disappointing
Lines are such a fucking drag, we rather watch you die from illegal street racing

doesn't really rhyme, but i like where you went with this. A solid personal poor rhyming though.

Pacing back n forth for a dub, called me scrub even whack at personal stabs
Zodiac signs are just a Cancer I’m just hoping one day he catches Crabs

LOL fire

I can follow from a jab to knock you out, or just shoot until I see the blood poor
Deadly weapons are my character you’re gonna be fucking asking what the Toy Story 4

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Nah



Sinning is capable of being better than what he is presenting himself as. I seen his old battles due to Baron mind exposes him on Netcees. He seems to just enjoy trolling people with verses that are 95% filler with multies. Boston got this one just better bars overall.

v/ Boston

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Originally Posted by Sinning

I'm rhyming lavishly..justice demands tax..I'm rhyming casually
I'm rhyming magically..lines of magic glee..if 'Bos fucks me over'.. it's his final fantasy..
"rhyming lavishly, rhyming casually, rhyming magically" ..are you trolling right now?
I'm sin with words..I'm Zion..bitch hit the curb
I diminish curse, whipped with slurs..forget 'taking this average joe to school'..I'm taking him to work..(I'LL GIVE YOU THIS WORK! LOL)
not feeling, way too much filler here before your punch concept bro. "I diminish curse, whipped with slurs" like what the fuck are you talking about bud
I'm a essence play; coalescent roaming peasant omnipresent souls of message slay
Show the enders game...I'll hit 'Bos with a spinning kick'...like Jin at the end of Tekken Game...(KO!)
this has to be the worst set up I've ever read in a text battle verse. punch/concept itself was actually decent but good god that set up line tho
Devour your essence...I'm Zion...a mountain of weapons...fountain of heaven
I have the power of message...and I'll 'pile drive you from the towers of 911'...
everything is pure filler up until the last half of your 2nd line and I can only assume you said "pile" as a reference to piles of rubble that existed after the towers fell. Concept in itself perhaps had potential but execution was god awful
Defeat kids with elite wit'...serene whim..and serene mystic sin..
you're so poor..if you were the rat in ratatouille...you'd eat shit...
nope
I'm flowing well... flow compels the oceans shell..
you're such a wack heathen...if you'd devoured the '11th plague of egypt'..you'd go to hell..
nah

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vs.

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Right hand make his mouth leak, he’ll be lying if he’s not opposed to weak
The way I’ll leave his life in Jeopardy, they won’t give a fuck about James Holzhauers win streak
decent current event flip on a played Jeopardy concept albeit a bit simple
Think before you speak, those soft words are no fucking threat
Beat your ass snatch your Juls or I can bring you smoke equivalent to 20 cigarettes
it's Juuls but I fuck with this. Could've been worded more effectively tho
His Chick tells me behind those ears are wet, during sex he fucks the wrong hole
Now whenever she leaves your balls blue jacket, while I shoot in her quick like a Columbus playoff goal
no sir
5 losses taking a toll on you, been told ya those forced multis are disappointing
Lines are such a fucking drag, we rather watch you die from illegal street racing
pretty played my dude
Pacing back n forth for a dub, called me scrub even whack at personal stabs
Zodiac signs are just a Cancer I’m just hoping one day he catches Crabs
funny-ish but not a fan of saying "just" 2x in the punch like you did
I can follow from a jab to knock you out, or just shoot until I see the blood poor
Deadly weapons are my character you’re gonna be fucking asking what the Toy Story 4
decent flip

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I legit feel like Sinning is trolling people with his verses, because it doesn't make sense the way his concepts actually have potential to be cool punches here and there, yet his set ups and wording is THAT bad. The two things don't add up or make sense to me. Joe had some decent jabs in there, also some played shit but the flips were aight. I don't think he really took his opponent seriously and, given their track record, I can't blame him. Gotta give it to him for a more competent overall verse.


v/ Bee Jay

V/jb for the reasons stated above. Clear victory, on mobile, can expand on vote later if needed.

Joe Boston wins.