Run Away

Runaway
https://youtu.be/mqpwDJpI3Rc

After pusha T

“Never been much of a romantic... I could never take you into the sea... cause the look in your eyes is killing me... if one day you just up and leave”

Big boys come to check in
And see I ain’t check in
but I felt it and I ain’t do no checking
Assuming or slicing
While they dicing
To finally feel - is that the first lesson
And is this a blessin?
I ain’t the one for second chances
Guess my whirl wind romances was porn to porn and that’s where we all left standing - I heard her moan (thru me) (so gross insanity)
They say I should’ve done better on my good girl gone bad
But that’s what’s so sad
It’s true, she just mad
But it’s inherent and inside of you
Even on the switch you always gonna come back to you
And I ain’t built to be a mans whore
Feeling like I’m punished cause I just wanted more
I used to see them, a rack a day
that was the day where happiness was lost
and everytime I don’t play
My happiness tossed - why?
And why you let them simple
God above all
Just trying to be like Jack, jack be nimble
Am I gonna be the one sorry I asked
Cause the good with the bad seem too much for the task
And I feel- and I hurt and I cry and I shake and almost pass out
Over the assumption of one man they think they just can pass out
And that don’t make you mad too
In all their words the betrayal and what secrets do
I’m tired of wishing I was “more like you” time over due
And I’m glad I couldn’t accept the basics
Cute still stacking bracelets
But you can’t change what you think is broken
And you can’t let them hang me like I’m their token
It’s not and it’s time they all face it
Loyalty - just wondering if they really can just erase it?

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I peeped you... where next to? Nah I didn’t love him either

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Link one: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...Behemoth-Black

Link two: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...od-is-my-water

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The guy I was with over 10 years - I don’t love him either

Content wise you stayed on point, rhyme had a flow to it. Typically I need to see more vocab and deeper content. The this was coo,

Am I gonna be the one sorry I asked
Cause the good with the bad seem too much for the task

All in all simpler effective, keep jotting...

Honestly... I went to the bad kids school and totally bypassed English with my scores so only took 2 classes in college so my vocab would basically be at 8th grade BUT I look up every word I read and don't know SO you can see why this site can be frustrating to me and why I don't mind keeping it basic, cause in the genre I kinda bounce in isn't all fluffy and (wait let me look up a good word) rhetorical or beauteous...

PS rhymezone the shit.

This is very creativity work my love
I'm glad to see you keep writing because you got potential
Sometimes we all feel like running away
But run away not solve problems
great storyteller

keep writing! <3

I hear that... 3 states and thanks

Trying to figure out what the fuck is going on and why everyone seems to know but me... got hit with retarded a second but that’s been since that voicemail at IBM that they can do that.

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Took my phone like 5-10x to even let me post that... you have no clue

Runaway... what speech you got?

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I don’t think that comment is all mine either - I don’t even know beautious means

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Why someone always going that to me?

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I see how it looks, how I write harder for a girl... but it’s only cause I come from heavy metal that I loved underground hard shit so much cause if you ask anyone that knows me - I am a total white girl (just come from a town that’s so mixed) In my school - white was the minority pretty much but don’t judge a book by its cover.... I was in my convertible and busted out crying when I heard “sitting sideways” looked down and I was sitting sideways saying “I’m the fakest bitch in the world” ... I just have to find my balance of the 2 sides cause like...

Can someone release my “24 hours” I wanna read what I said

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@Emily are you an administrator?