Italian Pride

Italian Pride

I'm proud of my heritage, who i am is a special gift
i come from a long line of greatness and men who never quit,
of people who live for the blood they have in their viens
and who protect family to the point that people think that its insane
they never desert them, and are more royal then a lion is
who love with their whole hearts, and rule with an iron fist
no chance they'll ever submit, or back down from a fight
they hit like an earthquake shaking the ground with their might
they hold their heads high when they walk, never lie when they talk
and would lay down their lives and die for there flock
Italian pride is a lot greater a thing then the pride of the gay
because to them the terms ride or die ain't just a phrase
It's a thing that you breathe and a way that you live
and if you disrespect the family they'll go crazy as shit
the mafia gets going roaming streets in the night
and even though they all sin, they're all believers of Christ
and to me that makes them great, they all pray to a reverend
maybe its fate but i know ill be seeing them one day in heaven

Ave Maria ... per favore prega anche per noi vittime

this is dope son, keep it up. get more creative

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Originally Posted by Bumble B

Italian Pride

I'm proud of my heritage, who i am is a special gift
i come from a long line of greatness and men who never quit,
of people who live for the blood they have in their viens
and who protect family to the point that people think that its insane
they never desert them, and are more royal then a lion is
who love with their whole hearts, and rule with an iron fist
no chance they'll ever submit, or back down from a fight
they hit like an earthquake shaking the ground with their might
they hold their heads high when they walk, never lie when they talk
and would lay down their lives and die for there flock
Italian pride is a lot greater a thing then the pride of the gay
because to them the terms ride or die ain't just a phrase
It's a thing that you breathe and a way that you live
and if you disrespect the family they'll go crazy as shit
the mafia gets going roaming streets in the night
and even though they all sin, they're all believers of Christ
and to me that makes them great, they all pray to a reverend
maybe its fate but i know ill be seeing them one day in heaven

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I'm part Italian. I seen the title of this and chose to read it hoping I would learn some shit. But I didn't. This was pretty weak. You said, and I quote

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Italian pride is a lot greater a thing then the pride of the gay

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C'monnnnnnn. Really? That's the best you could come up with? This is just text, at least put more thought into it than that. If my phone wasn't dead, I could freestyle live on camera better than that rn. But it's dead. That's why I'm on here. If you take this too harsh, my bad. But for real man. I expected to like this, mainly because I have Italian in my bloodline. But it disappointed me. Keep writing though. You got technical stuff and rhyme scheme down. But the content was lacking.

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And in the quote, you typed "then" instead of "than". I tried to go edit my post but it wouldn't let me. My bad if I'm just noobing and can't figure how to edit, but damn bruh. It should be "...greater a thing than the.." at least. smh. Keep practicing.