The Shelter (Freestyle)

vayne faith your a classic case of fuckin brain waste
ill drain your veins and make art with your blood stains
you learned how to rap listening to mudvayne
if youre parents were smart, youd be a cumstain
the only flow you gots givin blo jos to homos
when they expandin your muthafuckin throat bones
im old its well known that im dusty as shit
but ill still dust your ass in a second
your such a queer faith ought to be your first name
challenge me? WHAT A FUCKIN LAME BRAIN!
ill blast you like gettin hit by a freight train
im a rott that shatters fuckin log chain
take a busta like you and humiliate you
cept that brain worms already ATE YOU

So I guess this is what happens when a 44 year old male starts beef...
Claims He's an artist, but the novic cant even afford His front teeth...
Works as a janitor and bought a domain name to display His "peice"
And thats: www.luckily77777.com ... for any of Y'all who wanna creep
The saddest part is... Man, You look like You're mentally retarded.
And the -About us- section deffinitly made Me laugh the hardest
"as the son of two art professionals... i have an extensive background in art..."
But Your mother was bi-polar and Your fauther left Her 'cause He got smart
"i grew up playing the saxophone and listening to the most classic rock"
Well that explains why Your grammars shit and Your art is an actual mop...
"and i still have yet to find a place in society, where i fit" ..........
.......... quick lesson:
Dont dress up like a fuckin' hippie, without teeth and expect acceptence

Fuckin' retard... Look,
I could throw wordplay, all day... in the worst way
Words make, hurt/pain like your first name worked in vayne
but herbs lame... swept up like dirt grains
And washed up as fuck like his art... "burnt cains"

ok look,


the beats moveing real fast i dont know if i can keep
up with the niggers i better just fall asleep
but comeon now why am i so bitchy
its cuz a godam bitch just had me eat her pussy
and guess what she says right after im done
im on my one time a month hunn
now come on bitch why you make me do that
if i had known i wouldnt a ate your fucking bitch cat
but now that i have might as well let ya know
it taste fucking horrible when the fuck did it snow
oh shit ya mean its really that white
damn what the fuck is wrong wit dis kite
its not fucking flying n were in a tornado
makeing me feel like eating a tomato
now i know that this shit aint really made since
i just so fucking bored i had to put in my cents

stanksta shut the fuck up, cant you see youre just a middle man?
youre in between me and this vayne prick , and youll end up in traction with a piddle pan
its alright cuz the fuckers just jealous of my hits on google
14000 vs 711, yeah im a public figure fool
you ought to kiss my ass instead of dissin me
that way you might even get some publicity

Reppin the 608 shit, murder nation
my guns don't clap, they give standing ovations
Impatient, with these players saying
the game is, not looking for rapping caucasians
face it, this is greatness
8-Mile flow, I can do this for days bitch
flow for weeks, you can call it menstruation
Talent so young, call me Honorius
Lines take you back, flow like a DeLorean
I'm victorious, growing like an accordion
notorious, never boring bitch
I'm gunna end this shit, but I will NEVER quit.

listen okay so your mister 8 mile now with the sickest of flows.
but when you get stuck wit the kriminal your outta control.
stealin victories from right under your nose.
cause if you 8 mile then you a buck and some change.
this rappers a kid i could give a fuck if he change.
hangin ya chain your hopin you might blow up.
you could go to iraq you might blow up.
so fuck off and grow like your accordion.
cause when ever they grow remember they shrink back up.
so you askin for failure now think back up.
and seeing as you black and you can rap while you type.
i'mma spit these facts as your get virtually smacked til you white.
mcfly tries to be a hard thug from the 608 a murda nation.
well i never herd ya name kid...
but it sounds like some cheap ass burger from mcdonald's.
like ronald's just lost his devotion might not ever quit.
but i'm lyrically feedin on ya and i'm lovin it.

You need to learn to read, I said I'm fucking white
I don't claim to play hard but I'll take your fucking life
Still my flow is impeccable, at best yours is alright
Insomniac rapping bitch I'll go all night
Saying I'm a new bitch, well this is true bitch
you are too bitch, but now you're through BITCH
You tried real hard, now I know you regret it
McFly's the fucking name, don't you EVER forget it

what now this fool is tellin me he's murda me?
man i don't expect you to have herd of me.
but just the same it's the first time i even herd ya name...
so don't bother to complain that your not known.
cause even if you did spit in the mic you'd off tone.
with no fans we both might be new but atleast.
i know i'm original and that alone makes me a beast.
whether it be accepella or on the beats.
oh it seems to be but i just can't believe it's beef.
so fuck you and your simple rhyme lines diversions.
cause to me you're not an emcee your just another person.

Ladies and gentlemen let me get ya undivided attention for a second better yet let me get it for a minute cuz i aint gettin finished wit dis spit til da big bitch spits a pitch and the fat lady sings wutever you wanna call it looks like kriminal Koshens must've lost his Hooked on Phonics that his mom ordered for him on a 1 800 number(Hey man I really do hope you find them sometime this summer :( ) cuz you suck yes sir you do. Im so hot ya gotta watch how you serve ya food. Cuz im spittin in ya shit but not to be disrespectful. Im goin platinum status while you have some synhetic metals

Im not finishe but who cares i gotta go to Algebra Class

lol hahahahaha
okay

seriously kid your gimme nuttin to work with and thats not sayin your good.
i'm simplely statin the facts cause you should rap in fact if that only if you could.
so seriously if you want a platinum status i hate to end your career before it starts.
and i don't mean to disrespect but sometimes i do because i lose sense of what i say.
like while your in the middle of a sentence fuck kapital J
i don't need to play a game with this kid spittin love rhymes like he's prince.
i'm a nuclear bomb that can't be defused counting to blow up aiming for you.
if this hating is true then no disrespect but i'm hating on you.
and not because of your skill but lack of abillity.
seriously your killin me and a mod for this cypher just for credibility

hey dont be fooled by this kriminal koshens, hes a mastermind
stole the formulas for mary kays lotions and sold them all online
they all told him that his dreams were unrealistic
all he knew was that he had a love for pistols and lipstick
and somehow he made it work, even though he was autistic
did so many panty raids the bitches went ballistic
even when he caught the crabs off of the black satin ones
he didnt complain , just scratched hisself with his guns

ok look here, man you got a fake gold tooth,
look like you got your ass beat in your youth,
Shit, dont get mad at me cause its the truth,
Man you look like that guy off of scary movie 2,
compare Pic of scary movie 2 and guess who is who,
Face so damn ugly you make the blind kids cry,
somethings wrong with your face, got a lazy eye,
you look like a crazy hillbilly that got hi
your style so lame, all i gotta do is enter the battle and say bye,
nigga School me, I play you like a NFL game,
man you and my trash Smell the same,

dude you a fool, i think you fuckin in love with me
i juked you in 1-2, now your fantasy is fuckin me
youre a sick muthafucker, and you aint got a clue
i checked your link, im guessin all whites look alike to you
you think i slighted you somehow ,dude im exciting you
man im just fighting you, but crackin your skull is enticing you
must have a fantasy of bein beat down by southern cops
watched dukes of hazzard so much you fell in love with billy bobs
let me tell you something stevie wonder on crack
i aint justin T , so quit thinkin im bringin sexy back
face it man , you should stick to your own kind...
no im not talking black, im talkin people with limited minds

listen yeah i'm a mastermind and i might like pistols and lip stick.
but just wait a second cause i made a business and thats more than this kid.
pissed off cause he's a misfit lookin like frankenstien slapped with ugly.
you wanna hug me but i ain't no teddy bear you talk about young players skull.
yet he's scared by my deadly stare cause i'm a kriminal
to be exact a i'm a criminal conscience you subliminal-ly talk shit.
so be cautioned my my process cause while you're bent on the past i'm makin progress.
with these phonics honest and i bet your inbred and go to church every sunday.
seeing as your from the south, but believe i worship myself on monday.
one day you'll see that your whole fuckin belief is godless.
on this you should know you can't fuck with a kriminal konshens

Hey, I'm completely new to shit, fuck knows where I go if I want to say hello,
I'm pretty impressed by what's going down here though.
I'm harpsichoid, I write beats and sing,
I'm getting more famous by the day, hope I start to grow wings.
My label tells me all good artists are as fucked up as me,
But I have yet to see someone get high and keep a bee under lock and key in his room, name that shit, and cry when it dies after three days with no food.
Or walk to a party I made up in my head, collapse on a bridge and get hit by a car, pass out under the stars and get left there for dead.