DzasteR vs. Mooby[open for votes]

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I’ma shoot first, make you the Greedo to my Han
Solo’s what’s you been since ya took your mom to prom
This kid was home schooled and still he’s hot for teacher
It’s just too bad it was his dad, they got caught making out under the bleacher
You hope to get to second base but all I hit is homeys
Your game is weak you’re full of shit that makes you Trump, I’m Comey
It don’t take no headmaster to tell you I’m the grandmaster
Just ask your girl bout the time I blast her and plaster, leaving he face looking like a Dzaster
I might show a little rust, tryin’ to brush off all this dust
Still I’ll worm my way inside your brain and mare your head combust

I didn't forget - i'm here
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Why am I battling this faggot? Rap is not this gay’s craft
I truly think he’s seen more Balls than this year’s NBA draft
I’ll KO this fool – he thinks he’s dope, lol what’s he screaming about?
My hits’ll make him twitch so much – it’ll jumpstart his streaming account
I only fuck with dime bitches... only the baddest from any fucking race
And ya girl is barely a high five... she shoulda did that to your fucking face
I know karate, kid… you’ll wanna run after this – my keys crude
Cuz after I drop, we’ll see Moo Shu – like we ordered Chinese food
This fag’s gotta die… my verse’ll be in his obituary and soon known
So MARK MY WORDS… and my fuckin name on his tombstone
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I’ma shoot first, make you the Greedo to my Han
Solo’s what’s you been since ya took your mom to prom
This kid was home schooled and still he’s hot for teacher
It’s just too bad it was his dad, they got caught making out under the bleacher

this is just bad...simple, elementary and awful

You hope to get to second base but all I hit is homeys
Your game is weak you’re full of shit that makes you Trump, I’m Comey
no....lol

It don’t take no headmaster to tell you I’m the grandmaster
Just ask your girl bout the time I blast her and plaster, leaving he face looking like a Dzaster
no...


I might show a little rust, tryin’ to brush off all this dust
Still I’ll worm my way inside your brain and mare your head combust
u should always close strong...this is not the way

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Why am I battling this faggot? Rap is not this gay’s craft
I truly think he’s seen more Balls than this year’s NBA draft

an NBA and balls joke.....terrible

I’ll KO this fool – he thinks he’s dope, lol what’s he screaming about?
My hits’ll make him twitch so much – it’ll jumpstart his streaming account
this isn't a hard punch, but the wording makes it flow right which makes it decent....


I only fuck with dime bitches... only the baddest from any fucking race
And ya girl is barely a high five... she shoulda did that to your fucking face
u rhymed fuckin race with fucking face... and this isnt even a diss, its just talking and poppin shit


I know karate, kid… you’ll wanna run after this – my keys crude
Cuz after I drop, we’ll see Moo Shu – like we ordered Chinese food

this had the ability to be good, but the wording is fucked

This fag’s gotta die… my verse’ll be in his obituary and soon known
So MARK MY WORDS… and my fuckin name on his tombstone

u should always end with a banger...this is...not one



Mooby..kepp practicing ..like a lot...if you've really been here since 2005 and still type shit like this then u don't take advice so theres really nothing more I can say to u
Dzaster, that verse was......lol..... I'll let u whine about it was a quick key ..and all that....so, your hot garbage was better than his cold trash...

v- DZASTER

vote dzazter

Lol

Mooby: nothing, sorry


Vs


Dz: nba draft was kinda simplistic. Streaming account was okay, high five is old. Chinese food was okay. Closer was lazy

Overall: pretty one sided lol. Net worth could beat this dude if he wanted to.. easy win for dz, some of his shit was too simple.

Vote: dz

mooby
I’ma shoot first, make you the Greedo to my Han
Solo’s what’s you been since ya took your mom to prom
what? this was fucking whack

This kid was home schooled and still he’s hot for teacher
It’s just too bad it was his dad, they got caught making out under the bleacher
whack and doesn't make sense.

You hope to get to second base but all I hit is homeys
Your game is weak you’re full of shit that makes you Trump, I’m Comey
whack too, and too basic imo

It don’t take no headmaster to tell you I’m the grandmaster
Just ask your girl bout the time I blast her and plaster, leaving he face looking like a Dzaster
[b]this was corny my man[b]

I might show a little rust, tryin’ to brush off all this dust
Still I’ll worm my way inside your brain and mare your head combust
it's not rusty, if you never shined.. hmm no

- overall

man you have a lot of work to do, your shit is to basic, and that is the least of your worries, and a lot of this shit was corny and pre school attempts at insults, I can see you're just starting out, so I will tell you you need to elivate your punches/creativity/rhyme schemes, everything.

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Dzaster
Why am I battling this faggot? Rap is not this gay’s craft
I truly think he’s seen more Balls than this year’s NBA draft
This was very played.

I’ll KO this fool – he thinks he’s dope, lol what’s he screaming about?
My hits’ll make him twitch so much – it’ll jumpstart his streaming account
basic, but I laughed a lil

I only fuck with dime bitches... only the baddest from any fucking race
And ya girl is barely a high five... she shoulda did that to your fucking face
this was a bit corny

I know karate, kid… you’ll wanna run after this – my keys crude
Cuz after I drop, we’ll see Moo Shu – like we ordered Chinese food
corny play on his name, not feeling.

This fag’s gotta die… my verse’ll be in his obituary and soon known
So MARK MY WORDS… and my fuckin name on his tombstone
best bar so far, I like it.

- overall
I can tell that you just dropped what was needed to win, a lot of this shit was played, but there was some good shit in there, enough to beat this mooby guy though, ( btw suprised you didn't do a moby dick, or moo/cow flip lol )

You hope to get to second base but all I hit is homeys
Your game is weak you’re full of shit that makes you Trump, I’m Comey

Vs

I’ll KO this fool – he thinks he’s dope, lol what’s he screaming about?
My hits’ll make him twitch so much – it’ll jumpstart his streaming account
I know karate, kid… you’ll wanna run after this – my keys crude
Cuz after I drop, we’ll see Moo Shu – like we ordered Chinese food
This fag’s gotta die… my verse’ll be in his obituary and soon known
So MARK MY WORDS… and my fuckin name on his tombstone


So yea i gor D winnin here 3 bars to one. His opponent was outmatched and only managed to land one subpar bar out of 5. Rust can be a killer to shake but if you know u have more to bring, request more time or utilize your time more to deliver impactful punches, especially versus this caliber of opponent Mobby.

V/Diz

V/ Diz

Mooby

Sorry my man really nothing connected all punches were basic with no creativity or impact

Dz


Why am I battling this faggot? Rap is not this gay’s craft 
I truly think he’s seen more Balls than this year’s NBA draft
Lmao

I’ll KO this fool – he thinks he’s dope, lol what’s he screaming about? 
My hits’ll make him twitch so much – it’ll jumpstart his streaming account
Dope af lol good wp

I only fuck with dime bitches... only the baddest from any fucking race
And ya girl is barely a high five... she shoulda did that to your fucking face
Lmao good flip

I know karate, kid… you’ll wanna run after this – my keys crude
Cuz after I drop, we’ll see Moo Shu – like we ordered Chinese food
Good np lol

This fag’s gotta die… my verse’ll be in his obituary and soon known
So MARK MY WORDS… and my fuckin name on his tombstone
Nah didnt like this

V/DZ took this very comfortably

Pretty weak battle all around but , diz took it comfy

NBA draft balls
Twitch was cool
High five

Vs

Nada ..
Keep writing moobs look around the site and elevate


Vote diz

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I’ll KO this fool – he thinks he’s dope, lol what’s he screaming about?
My hits’ll make him twitch so much – it’ll jumpstart his streaming account
I only fuck with dime bitches... only the baddest from any fucking race
And ya girl is barely a high five... she shoulda did that to your fucking face
I know karate, kid… you’ll wanna run after this – my keys crude
Cuz after I drop, we’ll see Moo Shu – like we ordered Chinese food
Those the ones that hit and for the better overall verse I V.Dzaster
Mooby just need to practice.. Keep tryin karate, kid.. You'll have a breakthrough eventually
Hey Dzaster.. see what I did there? ha, ha? lol