Cry Little Sister

Cry Little Sister

Comfort in a realm when reminded its fault
Fear when the speed of the clouds grind to a halt
Trick of an eye like a still life picture
A confusing blister
Memories fade then the light will return
Just a trick of the shade and then to fight we learn
As I silently screamed the red door opened
Sacred black peace falls cause war is what we put our hope in


As my tears burn my flesh
The sacred heart aches, 2 souls mesh
Your worst nightmare stripped in all humility
Until pain is all you can bare in all futility
Alone stripped to one, one will catch the fall
We own up and we face, we don’t run, we stand tall
It’s not about love or a rite
It’s a higher mission when we’re called to flight


1000 lives we lived to stand at the gate
All the lessons learned a first test of fate
No compassion for the rabid or those who cycle short
Who won’t stand eye to eye or be judged by any court
Do you still expect your messiah to stand in place of you?
Shaking off every sin w a weak prayer (and I’ll do it again) for forgiveness too?
Lost is in the angels and trust as they do
Listen to your heart and your own soul you always knew

Link one: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...serable-Aether

Link two: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...onetary-system

This wasn't bad, A.


Nice little story with a good structure and subject matter. The theme wasn't all too clear to me, but it's satisfactory writing and execution. Also, some good concepts sprinkled in between. Overall, not too shabby of a verse. Keep it up!

Thank you... @Celph _taut