LLL Week 3: GrimmReaperZ (1-1) vs. Skurj. (1-1) - OPEN FOR VOTES

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
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Going 12

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GrimmReaperZ Verse

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Originally Posted by Skurj.

Guy weak, Running back would be wise Chief
Cos your jus another Hill to Beat, son.. quicker than that boy Tyreek

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Dominate

running back tie in was good. This is kinda good.

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No……its not,….. since Hill plays Wide receiver not RB



How u file in rank? A delusional “ vet” that’s amountain’ to a jest in revision
It’s disrespect….for a hasbeen to be so this over the Hill …he forgets his position
You besting Sinning and Boston …doesn’t mean this week u deserved a peak performer
Pshhhh…u can’t build your brand simply off A.J. & Joe….and neither could Dixie Carter
Cut u down a peg, paul Bunyon style….in more ways than one, a large OX involved
Dominate & ax u to bits, now they all agree a champion was chopping afterall
Grimm’s in overkill mode, sending u to heaven aint enuff when Reaperz go ape for real
We Doin’ drivebys while u online at them pearly gates,.. I told Jesus take the wheel
YBN awe?, when that God complex u preach, I aint buyin…im more likely to cut swiftly
Ya'll know us New Yorkers are stingy, and only thing we gave to the almighty’s a buck fifty
Still hop online & fabricate an Escobar image, ‘bout frontin dealers in the gutta w/ drugs
Type to Finish childproofing the crib, then log on to boast on how he just covered some plugs

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Skurj’s Verse

GrimmReaper AKA BoyzNBlack

Exalted aka Infiltrate


Last week...

INF humbled'em! Beat down showed the stun in Grimm
It was 'Clean EX!' & a box of those wont stop the bleeding wen I'm done w/him

U aint Rap Royalty! Gotta long BAR that'll void ya life
So 'stretched on a board'..you'll be like that wen mom kisses her boy goodye

Plus you fuckin youngins while I sneak Up w/the tec n preasure
I hit Boyz from the back & Murder this faggot cos he a fuckin sex offender

Scope your fam! Wife get hit N your dead fuck
Meaning I'll shoot Black N Decker! I got tools to clean the mess up

Fuckin disgrace. you losing? I got nothing but faith
E'rry Barrulet out will get fucked up..NVM shielding punchin your face

Chopper U can read about! Shoot this guys chest the fullest
Yeah your Peep pull Mags.. But when I roll up they'll be digesting bullets


Night faggot

Grimm
How u file in rank? A delusional “ vet” that’s amountain’ to a jest in revision
It’s disrespect….for a hasbeen to be so this over the Hill …he forgets his position
Ehh, wording issues here. No one speaks like that, amounting/over the hill was okay concept
You besting Sinning and Boston …doesn’t mean this week u deserved a peak performer
Pshhhh…u can’t build your brand simply off A.J. & Joe….and neither could Dixie Carter
Had to google, not feeling
Cut u down a peg, paul Bunyon style….in more ways than one, a large OX involved
Dominate & ax u to bits, now they all agree a champion was chopping afterall
Just feels like you dickriding
Grimm’s in overkill mode, sending u to heaven aint enuff when Reaperz go ape for real
We Doin’ drivebys while u online at them pearly gates,.. I told Jesus take the wheel
Nah, is pearly gates a christian website? still punch isnt doing anyhing for me
YBN awe?, when that God complex u preach, I aint buyin…im more likely to cut swiftly
Ya'll know us New Yorkers are stingy, and only thing we gave to the almighty’s a buck fifty
Hows this dissing him?
Still hop online & fabricate an Escobar image, ‘bout frontin dealers in the gutta w/ drugs
Type to Finish childproofing the crib, then log on to boast on how he just covered some plugs
Nah, Sorry man

Skurj
INF humbled'em! Beat down showed the stun in Grimm
It was 'Clean EX!' & a box of those wont stop the bleeding wen I'm done w/him
Pretty cheesie Wp. hits though
U aint Rap Royalty! Gotta long BAR that'll void ya life
So 'stretched on a board'..you'll be like that wen mom kisses her boy goodye
Dont get the punch, the rest of the connections seem good though
Plus you fuckin youngins while I sneak Up w/the tec n preasure
I hit Boyz from the back & Murder this faggot cos he a fuckin sex offender
Yech, got some homo vibes from this
Scope your fam! Wife get hit N your dead fuck
Meaning I'll shoot Black N Decker! I got tools to clean the mess up
Think Ive seen this concept used on Jabari recently, was light
Fuckin disgrace. you losing? I got nothing but faith
E'rry Barrulet out will get fucked up..NVM shielding punchin your face
Wow, had to google, seems to be related to heraldry, wish might connect with shield. ok
Chopper U can read about! Shoot this guys chest the fullest
Yeah your Peep pull Mags.. But when I roll up they'll be digesting bullets
Not feeling, mags is played

Feel like Ive been really critical with this breakdown, sorry but thats how I felt it went.
V-Skurj, felt he did a better job.

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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

GrimmReaperZ Verse

I'm bout this one post shit.




No……its not,….. since Hill plays Wide receiver not RB



How u file in rank? A delusional “ vet” that’s amountain’ to a jest in revision
It’s disrespect….for a hasbeen to be so this over the Hill …he forgets his position
Nope. I did like amountain but there was no payoff
You besting Sinning and Boston …doesn’t mean this week u deserved a peak performer
Pshhhh…u can’t build your brand simply off A.J. & Joe….and neither could Dixie Carter
Didn't get this reference.
Cut u down a peg, paul Bunyon style….in more ways than one, a large OX involved
Dominate & ax u to bits, now they all agree a champion was chopping afterall
Ehh
Grimm’s in overkill mode, sending u to heaven aint enuff when Reaperz go ape for real
We Doin’ drivebys while u online at them pearly gates,.. I told Jesus take the wheel
This isn't a punch.
YBN awe?, when that God complex u preach, I aint buyin…im more likely to cut swiftly
Ya'll know us New Yorkers are stingy, and only thing we gave to the almighty’s a buck fifty

Hype bars don't fly here
Still hop online & fabricate an Escobar image, ‘bout frontin dealers in the gutta w/ drugs
Type to Finish childproofing the crib, then log on to boast on how he just covered some plugs

Eh

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Skurj’s Verse

GrimmReaper AKA BoyzNBlack

Exalted aka Infiltrate


Last week...

INF humbled'em! Beat down showed the stun in Grimm
It was 'Clean EX!' & a box of those wont stop the bleeding wen I'm done w/him
This is one of those RARE ASS bars where I like this kind of wording. The rest of the bar was just so clean.
U aint Rap Royalty! Gotta long BAR that'll void ya life
So 'stretched on a board'..you'll be like that wen mom kisses her boy goodye
Eh
Plus you fuckin youngins while I sneak Up w/the tec n preasure
I hit Boyz from the back & Murder this faggot cos he a fuckin sex offender
Nah
Scope your fam! Wife get hit N your dead fuck
Meaning I'll shoot Black N Decker! I got tools to clean the mess up
Eh
Fuckin disgrace. you losing? I got nothing but faith
E'rry Barrulet out will get fucked up..NVM shielding punchin your face
Eh
Chopper U can read about! Shoot this guys chest the fullest
Yeah your Peep pull Mags.. But when I roll up they'll be digesting bullets
Lol

Night faggot

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Vote: Skurj Didn't really love anyone here, but I did like Skurj more in general than Grimm. Both did good. Clean Ex was my bar of the battle. Keep at it boys.

How u file in rank? A delusional “ vet” that’s amountain’ to a jest in revision
It’s disrespect….for a hasbeen to be so this over the Hill …he forgets his position
eh, the amouting wp is super played but at least its just a set up. still not the hardest bar
You besting Sinning and Boston …doesn’t mean this week u deserved a peak performer
Pshhhh…u can’t build your brand simply off A.J. & Joe….and neither could Dixie Carter
nah
Cut u down a peg, paul Bunyon style….in more ways than one, a large OX involved
Dominate & ax u to bits, now they all agree a champion was chopping afterall
more of a compliment to dom than a diss
Grimm’s in overkill mode, sending u to heaven aint enuff when Reaperz go ape for real
We Doin’ drivebys while u online at them pearly gates,.. I told Jesus take the wheel
nah
YBN awe?, when that God complex u preach, I aint buyin…im more likely to cut swiftly
Ya'll know us New Yorkers are stingy, and only thing we gave to the almighty’s a buck fifty
nah, decent swag bar but no real diss
Still hop online & fabricate an Escobar image, ‘bout frontin dealers in the gutta w/ drugs
Type to Finish childproofing the crib, then log on to boast on how he just covered some plugs
best bark imo, ok jab


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INF humbled'em! Beat down showed the stun in Grimm
It was 'Clean EX!' & a box of those wont stop the bleeding wen I'm done w/him
ok flip with the np
U aint Rap Royalty! Gotta long BAR that'll void ya life
So 'stretched on a board'..you'll be like that wen mom kisses her boy goodye
little obvious/played but ok
Plus you fuckin youngins while I sneak Up w/the tec n preasure
I hit Boyz from the back & Murder this faggot cos he a fuckin sex offender
wording was a lil awkward on this lol
Scope your fam! Wife get hit N your dead fuck
Meaning I'll shoot Black N Decker! I got tools to clean the mess up
played wp. not a great flip
Fuckin disgrace. you losing? I got nothing but faith
E'rry Barrulet out will get fucked up..NVM shielding punchin your face
mad obscure wp lol. wording could have been cleaner
Chopper U can read about! Shoot this guys chest the fullest
Yeah your Peep pull Mags.. But when I roll up they'll be digesting bullets
nah

i got skurj by a little bit.

vote Skurj

How u file in rank? A delusional “ vet” that’s amountain’ to a jest in revision
It’s disrespect….for a hasbeen to be so this over the Hill …he forgets his position
st8
You besting Sinning and Boston …doesn’t mean this week u deserved a peak performer
Pshhhh…u can’t build your brand simply off A.J. & Joe….and neither could Dixie Carter
ehh
Cut u down a peg, paul Bunyon style….in more ways than one, a large OX involved
Dominate & ax u to bits, now they all agree a champion was chopping afterall
st8
Grimm’s in overkill mode, sending u to heaven aint enuff when Reaperz go ape for real
We Doin’ drivebys while u online at them pearly gates,.. I told Jesus take the wheel
lol nah b
YBN awe?, when that God complex u preach, I aint buyin…im more likely to cut swiftly
Ya'll know us New Yorkers are stingy, and only thing we gave to the almighty’s a buck fifty
swag bar
Still hop online & fabricate an Escobar image, ‘bout frontin dealers in the gutta w/ drugs
Type to Finish childproofing the crib, then log on to boast on how he just covered some plugs
dope



INF humbled'em! Beat down showed the stun in Grimm
It was 'Clean EX!' & a box of those wont stop the bleeding wen I'm done w/him
st8 np
U aint Rap Royalty! Gotta long BAR that'll void ya life
So 'stretched on a board'..you'll be like that wen mom kisses her boy goodye
aight
Plus you fuckin youngins while I sneak Up w/the tec n preasure
I hit Boyz from the back & Murder this faggot cos he a fuckin sex offender
what?lol nah b
Scope your fam! Wife get hit N your dead fuck
Meaning I'll shoot Black N Decker! I got tools to clean the mess up
ehh
Fuckin disgrace. you losing? I got nothing but faith
E'rry Barrulet out will get fucked up..NVM shielding punchin your face
concept is cool, bar is st8 at best
Chopper U can read about! Shoot this guys chest the fullest
Yeah your Peep pull Mags.. But when I roll up they'll be digesting bullets
ehh

vote Skurj in a light battle. childproof was cool tho

Skurj wins 4-0