Everyone is gay except for me.
I was born in a crystal cave
my initial phase
was to manifest from aether in the form of distal waves
I resonated and reverberated for six whole days
until the crystals raised my frequency far past visible range
I self assembled my sentience in a blissful haze
sweeter than a multi-layered cake that’s triple glazed
my final form came as a space/time ripple maze
that cripples simple brains
with incredulous sonic riddle ray pistol play
I keep the unacceptable silenced
with egregious levels of exceptional violence
irreparable mind twist-
-ing rhymes of eclectical vibrance
de-testicaled tyrants
for their detestable spineless
deception, you’ll die if
you question my hermetical science
your intestine, I’ll tie it
around your neck and I’ll bind it
my mental tentacles diet
on witch doctor medical clients
and dissolve their flesh with injectible knives that
resemble razor-sided venomated ventrical hydrants
I took your conscious state and vegetablized it
I take the rhyme to deeper depths and I’m divin’
for interdimensional diamonds
strivin’ to complete the quest and I’ll find it
cause’ like a mortar and pestal I’m grindin’
I’m the excellent highness
with X rays in my exo-synapse
filled with so much THC it’s like pine sap
your mind cracks
and the sky’s black
when my rhyme hatched
like an extraterrestrial planet sized bat
that flies laps
around intergalactic space/time maps
till’ it starts at the same time it finishes it’s ride back
I provide raps
that serve as celestial anthems
I’m the extraterrestrial phantom
my technical text feeds whole cans from
the cabinet of wsdom, enough to give all earthly clans some
My ways, you might find a bit strange
to avoid happyness I might hide in the pain
When I wake up in the morning, I take some vitamin A
then put on a new cranium and slide in a brain
I went to the past and tried to delay
the present, by dragging Santa through a maze while he’s tied to the sleigh
Re: Everyone is gay except for me.
The rhyme scheme was amazing especially in short bars. Not anything to critique for such a basic topic this ish was really complete. Can’t wait to read more especially if you throw something out ona serious topic to relate to.
Re: Everyone is gay except for me.
ROFL that fucking title tho lmao
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Hmm interesting man good writing yeah you got concepts yeah you understand what concepts of writing a open mic piece is aboit just 8dk i dont want to complain just tone it down in the beginning im just taking this as a piece of writing okay im not trying to say fuck you but this piece needed work whatever it was alright i guess... good writing though...
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I thought the word play here was awesome. Took it to a whole other level with tying the rhymes together. This is not me being an ass but if u had a mic in hand would u perform it the same way u wrote it? I think it would sound dope as fuck over some space sounding beats lol good work here