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Verses due SATURDAY
@Letterman @-Coop-
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Ok.
In .
Ext, just in case.
You better show
Since a fat kid, Let was the type to be last-picked & get his ass kicked
But now he's a man on emission.. all his verses run out of gas quick
It's really been tough to nail a win for someone mentally frail as him
Good thing he's the Letterman, it costs him nothing to always mail it in
This space cadet aint a threat, he's clearly never found his place
His slutty bitch would ride Apollo 13 just to get Let outer space
It makes sense that she's bipolar. She's dating a bum weirdo
Really man, yo bitch so cold... Scale of 1-10? She's a subzero
I'll kill him for kiddin around, have this pedo beggin "don't hurt me"
I'll just mention youth in Asia; Letterman's thirsty & desperate for mercy
Your bars show you're a poor designer who's never caused a sore vagina
Bitch you couldn't Kraft a happy ending if you took a tour to China
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@Letterman . U got 2hrs and 20mins
Aka TIM
U talk tough on liquor. I’ll pull a gun soon as you murmur the shit
So you better stay off the Jin Kazama bring the Tekken just to murder this bitch
Or use a blade.. you’ll need to be saved from some true danger
‘Cause after I cut this square, they’ll find coupon the front page of the newspaper
I got no beef with him. The league made me leave dude in a plot
Secret Santa - cuz once they gave me your name, I was forced to bring you a box
We all gotta die one day, but be concerned for ur health
Yeah life is temporary but when these bullets interim, it’ll cause a permanent death
If this creep knocks at a chick’s door, they give this faggot the boot
So when they forbid entries, they‘re just trying to avoid any contact with this fruit
The gun turn him to Harvey Dent, cuz how I kill em is major
Once I bring Tim the tool,man half his face will be missing like Wilson the neighbor
Since a fat kid, Let was the type to be last-picked & get his ass kicked
But now he's a man on emission.. all his verses run out of gas quick
It's really been tough to nail a win for someone mentally frail as him
Good thing he's the Letterman, it costs him nothing to always mail it in
Vs.
U talk tough on liquor. I’ll pull a gun soon as you murmur the shit
So you better stay off the Jin Kazama bring the Tekken just to murder this bitch
Or use a blade.. you’ll need to be saved from some true danger
‘Cause after I cut this square, they’ll find coupon the front page of the newspaper
The gun turn him to Harvey Dent, cuz how I kill em is major
Once I bring Tim the tool,man half his face will be missing like Wilson the neighbor
don't recall seeing coop battle before so idk what nps are played on him. these are the standout lines from both verses. good wording from both. had Letter with 1 more hit than coop
V/ Letterman
Since a fat kid, Let was the type to be last-picked & get his ass kicked
But now he's a man on emission.. all his verses run out of gas quick
this is cool
It's really been tough to nail a win for someone mentally frail as him
Good thing he's the Letterman, it costs him nothing to always mail it in
mail it in ive seen done before but the personal approach makes it a hit for me
This space cadet aint a threat, he's clearly never found his place
His slutty bitch would ride Apollo 13 just to get Let outer space
diggin it
It makes sense that she's bipolar. She's dating a bum weirdo
Really man, yo bitch so cold... Scale of 1-10? She's a subzero
not a fan of this
I'll kill him for kiddin around, have this pedo beggin "don't hurt me"
I'll just mention youth in Asia; Letterman's thirsty & desperate for mercy
nah seen too many youth in asia its beyond played
Your bars show you're a poor designer who's never caused a sore vagina
Bitch you couldn't Kraft a happy ending if you took a tour to China
don't like this
Cool verse but lost steam after the first half imo
vs
U talk tough on liquor. I’ll pull a gun soon as you murmur the shit
So you better stay off the Jin Kazama bring the Tekken just to murder this bitch
nice
Or use a blade.. you’ll need to be saved from some true danger
‘Cause after I cut this square, they’ll find coupon the front page of the newspaper
decent
I got no beef with him. The league made me leave dude in a plot
Secret Santa - cuz once they gave me your name, I was forced to bring you a box
don't like this
We all gotta die one day, but be concerned for ur health
Yeah life is temporary but when these bullets interim, it’ll cause a permanent death
kinda forced not a fan
If this creep knocks at a chick’s door, they give this faggot the boot
So when they forbid entries, they‘re just trying to avoid any contact with this fruit
definitely forced. forbidden trees is fluent forbid entries not so much
The gun turn him to Harvey Dent, cuz how I kill em is major
Once I bring Tim the tool,man half his face will be missing like Wilson the neighbor
this is ok
Cool verse. couple forced wp's but all in all solid
This is close as fuck but i gotta give it to letterman for slightly harder hitting punches
v/Letterman
Since a fat kid, Let was the type to be last-picked & get his ass kicked
But now he's a man on emission.. all his verses run out of gas quick
This is cool...but Lett is a Steve Urkel so the personal in your set up is false.
It's really been tough to nail a win for someone mentally frail as him
Good thing he's the Letterman, it costs him nothing to always mail it in
This been done on him a bunch. Seen a few in text battles and heard similar stuff in VBL.
This space cadet aint a threat, he's clearly never found his place
His slutty bitch would ride Apollo 13 just to get Let outer space
This is different..wording is nice though the wordplay has been done I like this angle you took
It makes sense that she's bipolar. She's dating a bum weirdo
Really man, yo bitch so cold... Scale of 1-10? She's a subzero
Nah this is lame
I'll kill him for kiddin around, have this pedo beggin "don't hurt me"
I'll just mention youth in Asia; Letterman's thirsty & desperate for mercy
I like the concept..the diss was meh for me. and choppy..
Your bars show you're a poor designer who's never caused a sore vagina
Bitch you couldn't Kraft a happy ending if you took a tour to China
No...but "Caused a sore vagina" was LOL
Vs
Aka TIM
STFU NERD
U talk tough on liquor. I’ll pull a gun soon as you murmur the shit
So you better stay off the Jin Kazama bring the Tekken just to murder this bitch
Dope
Or use a blade.. you’ll need to be saved from some true danger
‘Cause after I cut this square, they’ll find coupon the front page of the newspaper
Nice again
I got no beef with him. The league made me leave dude in a plot
Secret Santa - cuz once they gave me your name, I was forced to bring you a box
Nah this lame
We all gotta die one day, but be concerned for ur health
Yeah life is temporary but when these bullets interim, it’ll cause a permanent death
Interim is a slight reach.. some would say NO WAY it works but I fuck with it. light tho
If this creep knocks at a chick’s door, they give this faggot the boot
So when they forbid entries, they‘re just trying to avoid any contact with this fruit
wording was iffy here but this was cool
The gun turn him to Harvey Dent, cuz how I kill em is major
Once I bring Tim the tool,man half his face will be missing like Wilson the neighbor
Havent seen TIM battle Im sure this NP been done but right now I fuck with it
V/Let ... Coop had a few cool hits but Lett out shined him here. More quotables and his misses were better
Since a fat kid, Let was the type to be last-picked & get his ass kicked
But now he's a man on emission.. all his verses run out of gas quick
It's really been tough to nail a win for someone mentally frail as him
Good thing he's the Letterman, it costs him nothing to always mail it in
This space cadet aint a threat, he's clearly never found his place
His slutty bitch would ride Apollo 13 just to get Let outer space
Vs
U talk tough on liquor. I’ll pull a gun soon as you murmur the shit
So you better stay off the Jin Kazama bring the Tekken just to murder this bitch
Or use a blade.. you’ll need to be saved from some true danger
‘Cause after I cut this square, they’ll find coupon the front page of the newspaper
The gun turn him to Harvey Dent, cuz how I kill em is major
Once I bring Tim the tool,man half his face will be missing like Wilson the neighbor
Vote- letter
This was close as fuck..
I was feeling coops flow n delivery in his bars
Started off strong with cool hits but then died out hard..
Its likt u took ur time writing the first 3 bars then keyed the rest....letter didnt come as good as ive seen in the past but still had enough for the win... I feel if coop went a different way with the kraft bar he would of took this..