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10 lines
due friday
house rules
check in asap
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10 it is.
good luck big homie.
likewise fam
u'll be for a week n leave, taking the title is a damn lieQuote:
Originally Posted by Art.
his bombs usually misfire enough to consider North Korea one of his allies
we've battled several times in the past, now i'll put this farce a cast
you've made your bed, now lay in it.... connected to tubes, I.V's and a cardio graph
im far from a laugh, Art on the side of greatest is more than just trash
you're on the path of becoming an FL legend, and that's nothing short of alternative facts
burin his ass, fuk a glove n a mask, EMT's wont get near this dude
cause the steam coming off his body would cause ghost rider to shed tear or two
this queer is food, softer than salad with marshmellows on the side
ya girl said she considering swinging with me, while yo bitch ass takin selfies on a slide
well lets get it...
the balls in your court, quit actin, ya played out how r u still rappin?
the way KP won't tri angles with fresh concepts, you'd think his alias is phil jackson
take your life with 2 sentences, so no one will care if this mans dead
fuck hangin, one sheet of my bars will choke him out, you're Aaron Hernandez
U dropped a tape that you mixed, id rather be dead than pay for that shit
Fuck P....Noah bigger waste of money than when Joakim came to the knicks
lolQuote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
Dude your crew has no credible pros, kill um all with predator drones
So if you see this old IP hone new concepts, <--its just apple updating cellular phones
IP will never be successful, why bother at all, Rb can watch the leader on top of it fall
you've just been wasting Time, Square, < b/c youl only be remembered for droppin the ball
....Art
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u'll be for a week n leave, taking the title is a damn lie
his bombs usually misfire enough to consider North Korea one of his allies
cool
we've battled several times in the past, now i'll put this farce a cast
you've made your bed, now lay in it.... connected to tubes, I.V's and a cardio graph
Kinda played but still smooth
im far from a laugh, Art on the side of greatest is more than just trash
you're on the path of becoming an FL legend, and that's nothing short of alternative facts
Not feeling this one
burin his ass, fuk a glove n a mask, EMT's wont get near this dude
cause the steam coming off his body would cause ghost rider to shed tear or two
Not feeling it
this queer is food, softer than salad with marshmellows on the side
ya girl said she considering swinging with me, while yo bitch ass takin selfies on a slide
No lol
Started strong but then you started to lose momentum and never picked it back up. 2/5
vs.
the balls in your court, quit actin, ya played out how r u still rappin?
the way KP won't tri angles with fresh concepts, you'd think his alias is phil jackson
Dope
take your life with 2 sentences, so no one will care if this mans dead
fuck hangin, one sheet of my bars will choke him out, you're Aaron Hernandez
Okay
U dropped a tape that you mixed, id rather be dead than pay for that shit
Fuck P....Noah bigger waste of money than when Joakim came to the knicks
okay
Dude your crew has no credible pros, kill um all with predator drones
So if you see this old IP hone new concepts, <--its just apple updating cellular phones
decent
IP will never be successful, why bother at all, Rb can watch the leader on top of it fall
you've just been wasting Time, Square, < b/c youl only be remembered for droppin the ball
lol
Really consistent verse, don't think there was a single bar I didn't like honestly. Strong from beginning to end.
Vote Art for the better verse.
Vote Art, his verse was just better.
A better breakdown is requiredQuote:
Originally Posted by InK1
u'll be for a week n leave, taking the title is a damn lie
his bombs usually misfire enough to consider North Korea one of his allies
^i tried to like it but just couldnt
we've battled several times in the past, now i'll put this farce a cast
you've made your bed, now lay in it.... connected to tubes, I.V's and a cardio graph
^dope
im far from a laugh, Art on the side of greatest is more than just trash
you're on the path of becoming an FL legend, and that's nothing short of alternative facts
^no
burin his ass, fuk a glove n a mask, EMT's wont get near this dude
cause the steam coming off his body would cause ghost rider to shed tear or two
^lol dope
this queer is food, softer than salad with marshmellows on the side
ya girl said she considering swinging with me, while yo bitch ass takin selfies on a slide
^no lazy
Vs
the balls in your court, quit actin, ya played out how r u still rappin?
the way KP won't tri angles with fresh concepts, you'd think his alias is phil jackson
^ehh cant decide if its a miss or slight jab
take your life with 2 sentences, so no one will care if this mans dead
fuck hangin, one sheet of my bars will choke him out, you're Aaron Hernandez
^had potential but worded badly so its a miss
U dropped a tape that you mixed, id rather be dead than pay for that shit
Fuck P....Noah bigger waste of money than when Joakim came to the knicks
^cool
Dude your crew has no credible pros, kill um all with predator drones
So if you see this old IP hone new concepts, <--its just apple updating cellular phones
^gets points for being creative but was a stretch i wasnt feeling
IP will never be successful, why bother at all, Rb can watch the leader on top of it fall
you've just been wasting Time, Square, < b/c youl only be remembered for droppin the ball
^ok
Knowp shouldve won this battle tbh but he seemed lazy at times
V/art
Bump can we get some more votes here
Quote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
I thought KP could have constructed his bars to where his setups directly related to the punch. I liked the verse overall, it just had a few errors that could of been corrected with a little more attention to detail. Art managed to drop a few great bars that I enjoyed. His biggest miss came early but as he settled into the verse he was able to make up for it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Art.
Entertaining battle.
V-Art
burin his ass, fuk a glove n a mask, EMT's wont get near this dude
cause the steam coming off his body would cause ghost rider to shed tear or two
vs
IP will never be successful, why bother at all, Rb can watch the leader on top of it fall
you've just been wasting Time, Square, < b/c youl only be remembered for droppin the ball
a lil bit of regression from KnowP here...gotta get back in the groove...didn't really have anything hard hitting in your verse
didn't really like Arts verse either... ya first 3 bars were name references....and they weren't that creative...whenever something happens ( Hernandez, trump, N korea) u know someones gonna jump to try and reference it, but if it aint creative it just comes off as pandering....
v- art