12 lines due in 72 hours..let's have at it!
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12 lines due in 72 hours..let's have at it!
....smh... so to be clear
6 bars due ...by sat the 19th ...by midnight..usual rules
I'm blaring wit'! I share a gift! Blaring kid, that'll snare your drift!~
Prepare to shift! I'll 'crucify Grimm on the boards' like a heretic!
I'm fulfilling your end! You're 'green with envy' like the concealment of zen!
I'm the thrill for your end! I'll have this kid 'reaping what he sows' like Diasick killing a thread!!~ (think!)
I have pro tools for your beat bub! I'm vocal with elite snubs!
Loco with the heat grub! If 'Z fighter in the air' we're talking Goku and Vegeta!~
I harbor a demon! I'm a Lemarchand with the star cross of Jesus!
Embarking with reason! You're marked as a heathen, you're the worm in the Garden of Eden!~
I fulfill my wealth! I have water and grass to conceal my health!
I'm thrill in stealth! And when it comes to rap, you'll 'hang it up' when you kill yourself!~
You're a pot head! And I got water, and I got bread!
I shot lead! I'll make you lose so much 'oxygen so fast' you're gonna' think you're in space - not dead!~
you're a joke here..
Clowned by Hall of famers and bums alike, so u reaching my prime...never!
I mean ...the nerds mock you, we even hear the awkward laugh...Kawhi Leonard
more than a few berate you, laser scope infrared on ya dome, due to breakthrough
Go at ya temple...left Sinacog with a dot on the head, u wont know WHO to pray to
I been to your town, and saw no proof of any grit in your past
just a bunch of pussies shakin', all I ever saw in Sin city was ass
bitch, ya girl love my diamonds, her taking flicks led to giving Bop on the spot
made her come home wit me, even before the cam could drop on the Roc
ya moms sobbin' by ya coffin, though all is hopeless for this faggot ressurectin'
only way the bitch goin' bring sins up in this box, is with a catholic confession
..whats impressing Grimm, is me stooping to ya level wont hold reference when...
I gave u 6 bars of of death, and my prides the only reason u wont get a 7Th, sin
sinacock
I'm blaring wit'! I share a gift! Blaring kid, that'll snare your drift!~
Prepare to shift! I'll 'crucify Grimm on the boards' like a heretic!
this is just a wall of multies, they aren't even good multies.
I'm fulfilling your end! You're 'green with envy' like the concealment of zen!
I'm the thrill for your end! I'll have this kid 'reaping what he sows' like Diasick killing a thread!!~ (think!)
this is a miss.
I have pro tools for your beat bub! I'm vocal with elite snubs!
Loco with the heat grub! If 'Z fighter in the air' we're talking Goku and Vegeta!~
this was cool, no need for the extra shit. to much self hype not enough punches
I harbor a demon! I'm a Lemarchand with the star cross of Jesus!
Embarking with reason! You're marked as a heathen, you're the worm in the Garden of Eden!~
focus more on punches, than multies.
I fulfill my wealth! I have water and grass to conceal my health!
I'm thrill in stealth! And when it comes to rap, you'll 'hang it up' when you kill yourself!~
this is light here, more multie shit.
You're a pot head! And I got water, and I got bread!
I shot lead! I'll make you lose so much 'oxygen so fast' you're gonna' think you're in space - not dead!~
not a good look, limit the number you say I in a bar.
You need a lot of work, the style is way to long, and needs to be cut in half by a lot, is this aj the menace? any way, you focus way to much on multies, and not enough on punches, and the multies aint even that great
vs
grimzreaper
Clowned by Hall of famers and bums alike, so u reaching my prime...never!
I mean ...the nerds mock you, we even hear the awkward laugh...Kawhi Leonard
I swear to god I heard a bar like this before.
more than a few berate you, laser scope infrared on ya dome, due to breakthrough
Go at ya temple...left Sinacog with a dot on the head, u wont know WHO to pray to
this was okay, no real punch though.
I been to your town, and saw no proof of any grit in your past
just a bunch of pussies shakin', all I ever saw in Sin city was ass
point for sin city, everything else was light.
bitch, ya girl love my diamonds, her taking flicks led to giving Bop on the spot
made her come home wit me, even before the cam could drop on the Roc
not feeling this shit.
ya moms sobbin' by ya coffin, though all is hopeless for this faggot ressurectin'
only way the bitch goin' bring sins up in this box, is with a catholic confession
This is light, all in the box bars are played.
..whats impressing Grimm, is me stooping to ya level wont hold reference when...
I gave u 6 bars of of death, and my prides the only reason u wont get a 7Th, sin
I liked the 7th sin bit, not sure about everything else, its okay.
I liked that you shorten up your style, no need for the extra formatting like italisizing and shit, and all the extra punctuation characters, the bar could be a lot shorter without all that, anyway... I'm giving grimmz the win just because there was some shit I liked in his verse, I can't say the same about sinacog's verse.
Sinacog: I'm blaring wit'! I share a gift! Blaring kid, that'll snare your drift!~
Prepare to shift! I'll 'crucify Grimm on the boards' like a heretic!
vs.
GrimmreaperZ: Clowned by Hall of famers and bums alike, so u reaching my prime...never!
I mean ...the nerds mock you, we even hear the awkward laugh...Kawhi Leonard
Both connected Sinacog references crucifying Grimm vs. Grimmreaper which had a much better setup but was more passive aggressive. Alone I would have to say Sinacog to best line.
Overall Vote: Grimmreaper… Sinacog's rhyme was riddled with fillers and wasted setups where Grimm included more punches per line which connected more often.
I have pro tools for your beat bub! I'm vocal with elite snubs!
Loco with the heat grub! If 'Z fighter in the air' we're talking Goku and Vegeta!~
I fulfill my wealth! I have water and grass to conceal my health!
I'm thrill in stealth! And when it comes to rap, you'll 'hang it up' when you kill yourself!~
vs
Clowned by Hall of famers and bums alike, so u reaching my prime...never!
I mean ...the nerds mock you, we even hear the awkward laugh...Kawhi Leonard
ya moms sobbin' by ya coffin, though all is hopeless for this faggot ressurectin'
only way the bitch goin' bring sins up in this box, is with a catholic confession
..whats impressing Grimm, is me stooping to ya level wont hold reference when...
I gave u 6 bars of of death, and my prides the only reason u wont get a 7Th, sin
v/grim stronger.. more damage
Grim wins via KO.