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10.
Tf happened...Quote:
Originally Posted by T.I.M.
Boy I asked for a warm up. Jem doesn't have said ability
Poor fuck bout to get torn up, and still wont have a shred of credibility
Wow Jem, you look like Kal Penn, without friends, who's all about men
who wished he moved like Me Too, and cut his dick off to be allowed in
My Apatite's for vets. This guy's a threat? He causes no alarm
Calls himself Gem with a J, more like, Garnet with a broken arm
Too much sports talk for a pussy nerd that plays Destiny? Yes...
Bitchin to us cuz a kick in the nuts the one foot-ball connection he gets
You're stiff as a bus. Spit if you must, yes I'm the best in the league
& kid you're a bust, so winning's not a statue will ever receive
Hurry up n take this L
Ya girl is clinically sick of sexing you… You’re so fucking repulsing
And when it comes to sucking? She’d rather have another abortion
That cunt denies her tricking moves, keeps repeating the same lies
But put a mag in - & she reveals her cheating ways like a game guide
When I point, guards jet… leave you wet no matter where you are
Cuz I’m money with the trae, young’n & this hawk hits from real far
Dutch coop? That’s splitting your head but if homie talking shit…
The nina take you out like we in the block chopping bricks
Your girl sure want’s my nut.. and two seater all I gotta do
Is knock coops top off and show up in a convertible coupe
Quote:
Originally Posted by -Coop-
Cool read bros. Im thinking i got jem here with the lotb on the trae young bar. Wording was sloppy but it was by far the most creative concept here and he had like 4 tie ins to go w it. Both had some bad misses.Quote:
Originally Posted by JEM.
Had jem 2-1 on quotes and he had lotb
V jem
Coop
My Apatite's for vets. This guy's a threat? He causes no alarm
Calls himself Gem with a J, more like, Garnet with a broken arm
Too much sports talk for a pussy nerd that plays Destiny? Yes...
Bitchin to us cuz a kick in the nuts the one foot-ball connection he gets
Highlight of your verse. You had a nice flow.
Jem
That cunt denies her tricking moves, keeps repeating the same lies
But put a mag in - & she reveals her cheating ways like a game guide
When I point, guards jet… leave you wet no matter where you are
Cuz I’m money with the trae, young’n & this hawk hits from real far
This was the highlight of your verse. The rest of it was cool. I think your last line would have really hit if it was worded differently, it didn’t hit as hard because of that.
Both emcees had a nice consistent flow. Jem had the best line (reveals her cheating ways like a game guide). Second best line was Coop’s football line.
Itfelt like you both were chilling. Maybe y’all just make it look effortless with laid back flows.
Good stuff
Slight edge to Jem. Vote- JEM
Tore up shred has been done but this was delivered alright so ok..
Kal penn wasnt a good bar
Garnet line was mild
Football was cool.. Cant help but think its played like fuck but i cant recall seeing it..just give me that vibe tho
Statue i thought was cool..
Vs
Repulsing/abortion doesnt rhyme for me n thw punch wasnt that good
Cheating ways was decent bar
Trae young was pretty nice
Last two bars werr weak..
Overall this shit is close..i guess i gotta go with jem for being little fresher amd more creative.. Coop and a nice flow n delivery just needs to work on more sting in his punches
VOTE JEM
Boy I asked for a warm up. Jem doesn't have said ability
Poor fuck bout to get torn up, and still wont have a shred of credibility
kinda simple but decent
Wow Jem, you look like Kal Penn, without friends, who's all about men
who wished he moved like Me Too, and cut his dick off to be allowed in
not a fan
My Apatite's for vets. This guy's a threat? He causes no alarm
Calls himself Gem with a J, more like, Garnet with a broken arm
something here im missing.
Too much sports talk for a pussy nerd that plays Destiny? Yes...
Bitchin to us cuz a kick in the nuts the one foot-ball connection he gets
lol i dig this
You're stiff as a bus. Spit if you must, yes I'm the best in the league
& kid you're a bust, so winning's not a statue will ever receive
this is ok
vs
Ya girl is clinically sick of sexing you… You’re so fucking repulsing
And when it comes to sucking? She’d rather have another abortion
it would be an ok bar if it actually rhymed
That cunt denies her tricking moves, keeps repeating the same lies
But put a mag in - & she reveals her cheating ways like a game guide
cool
When I point, guards jet… leave you wet no matter where you are
Cuz I’m money with the trae, young’n & this hawk hits from real far
diggin it
Dutch coop? That’s splitting your head but if homie talking shit…
The nina take you out like we in the block chopping bricks
not a fan
Your girl sure want’s my nut.. and two seater all I gotta do
Is knock coops top off and show up in a convertible coupe
saying coupe twice ruined this for me. shoulda just said "show up in a convertible" or somethign simple to lose the redundancy
This is close but i got -coop- with the edge here
3-1 jem
Lets get a cpuple more votes on this..hate to close at 3-1
coop
shred of credibility
jem
game guide
basically I liked one bar each from them, the bar I liked from jem was better than the one i liked from coop, the hawk hits from real far that everyone was saying was cool was fucking trash though, but not as bad as the who's all about men bar from coops, coops misses were worse than jem's so I got jem taking this.