SEMI FINALS: Greedy Vs Bomb Bard - VOTE NOW

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Punches due by THURSDAY
Voting closes SUNDAY
NEW BATTLES GO UP RIGHT AFTER

Check Ins
If you can't check in then there's something wrong w/ you
I won't be penalizing for not checking in though. Just make sure you drop a bar

No Shows
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2 no shows gets you taken out of the "in" roster for 2 weeks
3 no shows gets you booted from the league for the rest of the season

Voting
Everyone is required to vote on 5 BATTLES MINIMUM. CONTENDERS AND CHAMP BEING MANDATORY
1 vote deduction for every battle link missed
Failure to vote at all will result in a boot from the league for 1 week
If your opponent no shows, you must vote on the required minimum to get the win

Battle Rules
NO FEEDING FROM OPPONENTS BAR IF THEY DROP FIRST
In the event of a 3-way, each battler must drop 2 bars; 1 for each opponent
Battler must drop a bar to get a win, even if their opponent no shows/doesn't check
NO EXTENSIONS. It's only 1 bar
NO editing punches after opponent drops
Biting will result in a league/site ban
Recycling will result in DQ 1st time and League Ban 2nd time

@Greedy

Chop 'em down wardog, let 'em all off
All out war till you get it called off
Chop 'em down wardog, let 'em all off
All out war till you get it called off
-Zillakami(City Morgue)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J17mYBKeyac

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Aka Beanz


runnin ya lips is whats not gonna happen. U should halt w the yappin
I swear.. if Beanstalk shit to me, theres a giant chance it results in a Jackin'

I fell asleep my bad... here’s my bar if you want the ns win @Greedy take it let me know if you wanna let this ride or not

Amen wrote
You lack the confidence to win, now I’m stompin this queer,
I’d say he’s in dire need of assurance, but he’s been washed up for years.

Greedy wrote
No one'll validate u. Fag we hate u and mean this shit, Queen
lol at needing a sure rinse, when you been washed up since season 16

Allen knight wrote
im doin drive-bys on ur crew, this semi is all game
leave u & ur fuckin Pallet up when i dump something heavy in ya'll frames

Greedy wrote
U lame clown, we from the same town but u aint respected in the valley of bosses
If I'm EVER being a pallets to suggest you that u use some to carry ya losses



Jesus you and bash write for each other to?


Buddy...
A “fresh pallet” or a “sure rinse” won’t help.. jokes a non threat
Let the word “sank” defy u.. for being a strong biter who tries to freshen old concepts

Of course u good

I liked Greedy's punch a lot but feel the personal route KS took was clever and strategic. Wording was a little shaky but not enough to discredit the actual punch.

I always go with personals, granted they are executed properly.

v/Kill Spree

Greedy - good bar..amusing in its way..I enjoyed it a bit..it was on the creative side..nothing too bad here..it was a good clean diss..

Bomb-Bard - could've done better here..the connections weren't strong enough to save..but twas' a good bar..but needed something more in this..good work..though..

V? Geedy

@Greedy this was a clean jab. Beanstalk Seems super obvious, but it's fresh to me. The word association in the second line was solid, though I don't feel like it generated a Lot of impact. A clean jab no doubt, but nothing heavy.
@Kill Spree I like that you opted for the personal route, but this kind of whiffed for me. I'm not completely sold on the personal, and I feel the way you flipped it in the end line was kind of underwhelming.

Vote - Greedy

Feeling Greedy more here. Lil more swag to it

Liked both but greedys punch was cleaner


V/greedy

Greedy - Cool name play and concept.. the tie ins were well placed.. not wowing as far as impact but and all around well executed name play

KS - really like the wordplay, and the personal angle.. but I feel like the tie ins to the wordplay were underwhelming.. "strong biter who likes to freshen old concepts" seems underwhelming for some reason to me, could've been done to hit harder


I've got Greedy in this one... Props to both

Greedy wins