10. Due in 48 if that's cool with u @Kill Spree
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10. Due in 48 if that's cool with u @Kill Spree
yup
check
Need a 48 hour ext if u need one then by all means
Ya sounds good. Due Friday nightQuote:
Originally Posted by Caged
Sorry yo, dropping in like an hour!
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I could knock ur cap clean off.. got no hesitation when raising em'
Cuz one shot e'll leave KS resting in the vines like I was playing for Cubs Stadium.
Yea i play with guns faggot, Easter Sunday. U better fear god,
U know Lenox got the twins clapping louder than a couple of retards.
Not gonna lie, ur girls a fat cunt but the heads clean..
Once she opened the cell she saw I was hung like Aaron Hernandez bed sheets..
I'm an evil demon, leave this dweebs cerebral leakin',
This is no country for old men, plus my nicknames Stevie Stephens.
Leave u missin, everyone in town confused, they like who knows?
ur fam thinks it's u Like a decoy during an MF DOOM show
Open for feed
I could knock ur cap clean off.. got no hesitation when raising em'
Cuz one shot e'll leave KS resting in the vines like I was playing for Cubs Stadium.
nice
Yea i play with guns faggot, Easter Sunday. U better fear god,
U know Lenox got the twins clapping louder than a couple of retards.
naw old n played concept
Not gonna lie, ur girls a fat cunt but the heads clean..
Once she opened the cell she saw I was hung like Aaron Hernandez bed sheets..
ehhh set up could of been cleaner to finish this punch. woulda been fire
I'm an evil demon, leave this dweebs cerebral leakin',
This is no country for old men, plus my nicknames Stevie Stephens.
naw weak ending
Leave u missin, everyone in town confused, they like who knows?
ur fam thinks it's u Like a decoy during an MF DOOM show
pretty lite land
one good punch and one that woulda been fire. the rest was not that good imo.
Thank u
I really enjoyed the opener. Some of the other bars were worded less effectively. But decent verse overall. I would have liked to have read the entire battle.
thought you opener was cool. that no country bar could have been better. rest was a bit basic. props for dropping tho
The cubs openor was pretty cool, the Aaron Hernandez line coulda been better and the country for old men coulda been real cool jus didn't feel like you threw a real punch at the end of it ... not a great verse not bad either , way to drop though , good shit .. keep battling
Thank u
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I could knock ur cap clean off.. got no hesitation when raising em'
Cuz one shot e'll leave KS resting in the vines like I was playing for Cubs Stadium.
Salary Cap bar, took me a bit, decent hit.
Yea i play with guns faggot, Easter Sunday. U better fear god,
U know Lenox got the twins clapping louder than a couple of retards.
Seemed forced in rhyme n delivery
Not gonna lie, ur girls a fat cunt but the heads clean..
Once she opened the cell she saw I was hung like Aaron Hernandez bed sheets..
Nice attempt, current affairs usually sting more, but the delivery failed due to a poor set up imo
I'm an evil demon, leave this dweebs cerebral leakin',
This is no country for old men, plus my nicknames Stevie Stephens.
Hard miss here...
Leave u missin, everyone in town confused, they like who knows?
ur fam thinks it's u Like a decoy during an MF DOOM show
I didn't feel this one at all, but then, I'm not current with this affair, may be that it's over my head
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I could knock ur cap clean off.. got no hesitation when raising em'
Cuz one shot e'll leave KS resting in the vines like I was playing for Cubs Stadium.
Sick opener, the delivery was dope
Yea i play with guns faggot, Easter Sunday. U better fear god,
U know Lenox got the twins clapping louder than a couple of retards.
Eh ok
Not gonna lie, ur girls a fat cunt but the heads clean..
Once she opened the cell she saw I was hung like Aaron Hernandez bed sheets..
Wow
I'm an evil demon, leave this dweebs cerebral leakin',
This is no country for old men, plus my nicknames Stevie Stephens.
I get where you were going with this, but the ender didn't really hit
Leave u missin, everyone in town confused, they like who knows?
ur fam thinks it's u Like a decoy during an MF DOOM show
Ok
Pretty good verse. You tried to twist some concepts like the hung line and the old men one but some didn't really hit as hard as it could've. The Stevie Stephens punch was harsh, if you wanted to do that punch justice rewording would've helped delivered it better. Nice verse overall, you sorta went off hits and misses but looks like more hits to me. Good shit. Would've been a dope battle.
Thank u