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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules
10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY
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Joey from Massachusetts, this dumb ass is clueless. Where you come from the rap is useless..
I pop up on you like a messanger box, the heckler & kotch leave your head and body in separate spots!
You never been hot, too much estrogen, I drop your body off where the sediment drops.
I can see the oral victory like I got the Oracle with me, the way I slay this punk is a horrible pity.
Too witty for this deplorable shitty MC, I shit on you and your historical city!
Your bitch is a naughty ho trick, probly blow & spit. Sloppier than your sloppy flow spit,
because I listened to your tracks....your audio's shit!
You don't want to cross antlers, take the loss, before I beat you with a night stick and leave you blacker than the boss of the Panthers because Joey I ain't your fucking friend like Ross & Chandler.
Your girl? I'm often on her! Leave you in a coffin somber when I blow Joe to heigh ho call me the 'Boston Bomber!'
Fuck this trash ass dude I’ll dig em a grave in hell
If they say Juke needs to get better this retard goes home and turns on Madden NFL
You’re all pussy I can tell your expression explains it all
Probably put a helmet on and mouthpiece in before you hit a vagina wall
Joe never falls into a trap I’ll have CSI picking brain particles off his lap
There’ll be such a blood trail they’ll need a compass to find his body and a travelers map
I’ll clap from close range impact from the shells will leave behind loose change
Guns with big arms on them he’ll think he crossed a dangerous path to Doc Strange
My minds fucking deranged to kill you I’m determined
Wanna witness the Wild Life blood will splatter his tv over a new season of the Irwins
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@Jukebox @King my bad for the late drop got called in
Hmm...jutebox verse isbvery generic... Nothing reallyninaginative in there. And alotta misses ...the friends bar is about the only hit..
Joe had a better verse than I've seen from em in a while. The opener coulda been condesnsed but still works...and no constant famous name drop, kept it going...
V- joe
Jutebox
You didn't have any bars worth quoting, except pop on you liek a messenger box / heckler and kotch, that's because I think I heard it before.
Joe Boston
His name is jute not juke, so some missed nameflips in your verse.. I got a chuckle out of the vagina wall bar, other than than pretty light shit from you, no need for anything more than that for this battle.
v/ joe boston
Joey from Massachusetts, this dumb ass is clueless. Where you come from the rap is useless..
cool
I pop up on you like a messanger box, the heckler & kotch leave your head and body in separate spots!
You never been hot, too much estrogen, I drop your body off where the sediment drops.
would like to see you set up lines n get some rhythm with the text verse. flow is here but nun heavy
I can see the oral victory like I got the Oracle with me, the way I slay this punk is a horrible pity.
Too witty for this deplorable shitty MC, I shit on you and your historical city!
multies there but the punch is soft
Your bitch is a naughty ho trick, probly blow & spit. Sloppier than your sloppy flow spit,
because I listened to your tracks....your audio's shit!
best lines of yo verse
You don't want to cross antlers, take the loss, before I beat you with a night stick and leave you blacker than the boss of the Panthers because Joey I ain't your fucking friend like Ross & Chandler.
Your girl? I'm often on her! Leave you in a coffin somber when I blow Joe to heigh ho call me the 'Boston Bomber!'
panthers refernce is legit and the boston bomber concept is ill
Fuck this trash ass dude I値l dig em a grave in hell
If they say Juke needs to get better this retard goes home and turns on Madden NFL
im fucking with this. juke jute its the same shit wit me nice execution on simple name pun
You池e all pussy I can tell your expression explains it all
Probably put a helmet on and mouthpiece in before you hit a vagina wall
2 out of 5 flow there tho and you set it up just bleh tho
Joe never falls into a trap I値l have CSI picking brain particles off his lap
There値l be such a blood trail they値l need a compass to find his body and a travelers map
3 out of 5 first line is nice but i feel the second line is worded off, maybe to find his body they need a compass and travelers map..
I値l clap from close range impact from the shells will leave behind loose change
Guns with big arms on them he値l think he crossed a dangerous path to Doc Strange
greasy
My minds fucking deranged to kill you I知 determined
Wanna witness the Wild Life blood will splatter his tv over a new season of the Irwins
3 out of 5
vote joe b for a better put together drop.
Jute: First off u don't have to bold words, this isn't 2010. Hell its prob older than that, just dont do it it detracts from ur verse. Friendly advice.
Joey from Massachusetts , this dumb ass is clueless . Where you come from the rap is useless..
I pop up on you like a messanger box , the heckler & kotch leave your head and body in separate spots!
...messenger box was aite the rest was eh and u really didnt Finish with a Punch line tbh.....
You never been hot , too much estrogen, I drop your body off where the sediment drops.
I can see the oral victory like I got the Oracle with me , the way I slay this punk is a horrible pity.
....I see what u tried u didn't pull It off tho, u got too much going on.....
Too witty for this deplorable shitty MC, I shit on you and your historical city!
Your bitch is a naughty ho trick , probly blow & spit . Sloppier than your sloppy flow spit,
because I listened to your tracks....your audio's shit!
....this played on him and the rest was filler.......
The last two were bad.....
Vs.
Fuck this trash ass dude I値l dig em a grave in hell
If they say Juke needs to get better this retard goes home and turns on Madden NFL
....cool np alright jb........
Joe never falls into a trap I値l have CSI picking brain particles off his lap
There値l be such a blood trail they値l need a compass to find his body and a travelers map
....I like u trying new things but this wasn't It bud.......
I値l clap from close range impact from the shells will leave behind loose change
Guns with big arms on them he値l think he crossed a dangerous path to Doc Strange
.....this woulda been dope if u said he'll Be seeing nothing but hands like dr strange/try to fight he get Strange, cant throw hands cuz his are useless...and wrote it that way, his arms were fine his hands was his obsession, get ur shit right......
My minds fucking deranged to kill you I知 determined
Wanna witness the Wild Life blood will splatter his tv over a new season of the Irwins
...theres the pop culture news bar. I knew u couldn't get Thru a Verse Without One lol. Wildlife was cool.
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Overall: Jute had some good Concepts he just needs to work on delivering Them in an impactful manner. Joe surprised me hes actually Elevating, he needs to tweak some things but I enjoyed Reading his verse. Props
V. Jb
V/ boston
Juke was pretty basic.. No real punches.. Decent flow and rhyming but the punches for a battle just werent there.. Seems like maybe a audio battle would of been better for u cuz this text shit has to be more creative n complex and end with a punch with sting.. Joe came cool..with decent punches