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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules
10 line minimum
16 line maximum (unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY
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10 cool chief?
got 10 from ryno
You never had a bitch scream your name, or tore up a pussy.. that's the truth that bothers.
Last time u heard a bitch yell, "no daddy, no no" ya sister was beat by your abusive father.
You’re soft as fuck, ya spear like being hit by a feather, no one ever thought you was hard.
No wrestling bar, but when it comes to this ring, rhyno will never make it to the top of the card.
Your luck’s up bro, you’re like a fucking butt plug, that way u remind me your stuck up, hoe.
Work on your punches or get wrecked, but the only thing rhyno can fix, is a fucked up nose.
Save those hits for the heavy bag, because you’re fucking whack, and it don’t hurt to tell ya.
Cuz in the frontlines I’ll discharge ur ass quick, without saying thank you for your service fella.
This is like a cop movie, get laid out on the road, like the spike strips in a speed chase scene.
This snitch getting leeway, please, because this head attached with more wire’s than a E.K.G
RYNO
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...highlight=Bash
^^Didnt I already whoop you?
Diasick aka Cheesecake Assassin
U ain’t special, this ain’t my first time crushin ya dude
U’ll be gettin these hands like everybody else, think prayer tattoos
That beat down was vicious, we watched u get merked, clown
Haven’t seen an L get that much exposure since Diaz’s media workout
& stop w. the phony lies homie u ain’t sendin off missiles
If ur moving arms in a tussle, I bet a grand it’s Brazilian jui jitsu
Sizzle his appearance. Ry’ll leave em torched till he’s gone
I’ll have sunbathing in blood like his tan went horribly wrong
Hitcha w. lead showers. U’ll be cooked when I see ya
Im dropping cheese w. these rounds like I was making a pizza
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You never had a bitch scream your name, or tore up a pussy.. that's the truth that bothers.
Last time u heard a bitch yell, "no daddy, no no" ya sister was beat by your abusive father.
Save those hits for the heavy bag, because you’re fucking whack, and it don’t hurt to tell ya.
Cuz in the frontlines I’ll discharge ur ass quick, without saying thank you for your service fella.
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& stop w. the phony lies homie u ain’t sendin off missiles
If ur moving arms in a tussle, I bet a grand it’s Brazilian jui jitsu
Sizzle his appearance. Ry’ll leave em torched till he’s gone
I’ll have sunbathing in blood like his tan went horribly wrong
So yea, this is the classic case of long bar v.s short bar delivery. In most cases it comes down to execution and flow. Here we see some attempted personals and some nameplay that indicated the victor because of the more apparant thought put forth. As with most lb v sb instances the former usually displays a pronounced effort through filler and frankly more words to a detriment, but here Diasick used just enough in setup and delivery to get the point, keep the point and hit the point home, while Rynos verse failed to capture the attention in such a direct- to the point manner, that didn't entertain or feel as thought out as his opponents,
V/Diasick
Nothing really from both ...lackluster and unimaginative bars .. Read it twice and preferred diasicks verse. Not by much
V-Dia
The Diaz flip was solid, but the rest if Rhynos verse had the cheese factor. Definitely felt phoned in. Lacked any real sting. Dia was more consistent then usual. I count three decent jabs.
Not how I expected it. Ryno bordered on mediocrity, and Dia rose slightly above that.
Vote - Dia
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Thanks for the free post and not a voteQuote:
Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
Dia wins