WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3) Bash Wins
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Re: WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3)
Yayter...
Nobody wants to read ur shit, clearly this match a mistake
If ur the one everybody's in line to see, I bet a thou its ur wake
Gun to ya bitch, when it comes to the dome? I own that
That stallions head is fkn famous, I call the broad bojack
Tappin' into my inner assassin, this that shank flow clown
Medics drawing 2 blades from ya back like a ninja showdown
See my circle of sharks kill the weak & move on
Turn the arms sideways & let em clap', it ain't a "doo doo doo" song
Bars provin' em wrong, u'll meet ur maker for all the talkin'
Better pray cuz once u get this work u'll be MIA for weeks...Amen
Re: WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3)
Im savage. wit the attachment ill hit the Target Meaner,
your mother has a rep for being on the floors like carpet cleaners.
One shot one kill you’ll get dragged on the floor dyke,
Cuz Im all in ur bitches walls building like its season 7 in Fortnite
Im tired of these holy acts playing like they Nice in the league,
sooo one shot will have you in church like you Havent visited Christ in weeks .
I got enough bullets for every candle these hollows in ya face,
To prove a point nobody cares bout ur Birthday bash, your The fat kid who already swallowed his cake
In the proving grounds ur weak can’t rap or sing hope you’ll die,
Cuz I will take your baby Bash, & I still don’t know the lyrics to sugar sugar how you get soooo flyyyyyyyy
Sorry for the delay if u accept it’s cool if not I understand I’ll vote on all the battles this week sorry again fellas
Re: WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3) OPEN FOR VOTES
Nobody wants to read ur shit, clearly this match a mistake
If ur the one everybody's in line to see, I bet a thou its ur wake
^this was ok, couldve been setup a lil better
Gun to ya bitch, when it comes to the dome? I own that
That stallions head is fkn famous, I call the broad bojack
^this was kinda cool conceptually, punch loses sting in wording but not bad overall
Tappin' into my inner assassin, this that shank flow clown
Medics drawing 2 blades from ya back like a ninja showdown
^good concept, poor delivery.
See my circle of sharks kill the weak & move on
Turn the arms sideways & let em clap', it ain't a "doo doo doo" song
^haha, ok.. not great, but not bad.
Bars provin' em wrong, u'll meet ur maker for all the talkin'
Better pray cuz once u get this work u'll be MIA for weeks...Amen
^meh... this is hit or miss depending on how u read it. setup should've aided the punch much more.
vs
Im savage. wit the attachment ill hit the Target Meaner,
your mother has a rep for being on the floors like carpet cleaners.
^cool concept but attachment/ is not a strong enough setup for the carpet cleaners line.
One shot one kill you’ll get dragged on the floor dyke,
Cuz Im all in ur bitches walls building like its season 7 in Fortnite
^decent concept, poorly setup
Im tired of these holy acts playing like they Nice in the league,
sooo one shot will have you in church like you Havent visited Christ in weeks .
^decent setup doe an ok concept that fell flat in the punch due to wording
I got enough bullets for every candle these hollows in ya face,
To prove a point nobody cares bout ur Birthday bash, your The fat kid who already swallowed his cake
^Damn this had mad potentional, but missed rather dramatically in setup, punch and flow.
In the proving grounds ur weak can’t rap or sing hope you’ll die,
Cuz I will take your baby Bash, & I still don’t know the lyrics to sugar sugar how you get soooo flyyyyyyyy
^lol.. decent close minus a questionable structure.
So yea, this battle was kinda lack luster imo, and I see why it has a lack of votes to be honest. Naw Im talkin shit cuz none most of you fuckers not voting on all my open ones .
@BashEmUP
I think u hit one tho so forgive my line but I just been wanting to say that.
Anyway Both came with cool concepts but there were many misses or reduced sting in punches due to what appeared in Bash's case to be laziness and in Rican's case some rust. But
V/Bash for more hits
Re: WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3) OPEN FOR VOTES
Ur wake
Vs
Nothin
This was a "doo doo doo" battle
V- bash
Re: WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3) OPEN FOR VOTES
Nobody wants to read ur shit, clearly this match a mistake
If ur the one everybody's in line to see, I bet a thou its ur wake
Tappin' into my inner assassin, this that shank flow clown
Medics drawing 2 blades from ya back like a ninja showdown
Vs.
One shot one kill you’ll get dragged on the floor dyke,
Cuz Im all in ur bitches walls building like its season 7 in Fortnite
V- bash
Re: WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3) OPEN FOR VOTES
Opener was dope
Bojack ninja showdown could have been better
Wtf is up with your closer?
Vs
Bday bash was aright rest was either a played concept that missed or just a miss
Bash edges this for me here. Better misses
Re: WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3)
Quote:
Originally Posted by
BashEmUP
Yayter...
Nobody wants to read ur shit, clearly this match a mistake
If ur the one everybody's in line to see, I bet a thou its ur wake
Setup coulda led into this better but not bad I dig
Gun to ya bitch, when it comes to the dome? I own that
That stallions head is fkn famous, I call the broad bojack
Cool
Tappin' into my inner assassin, this that shank flow clown
Medics drawing 2 blades from ya back like a ninja showdown
Tight
See my circle of sharks kill the weak & move on
Turn the arms sideways & let em clap', it ain't a "doo doo doo" song
Don't really get my b
Bars provin' em wrong, u'll meet ur maker for all the talkin'
Better pray cuz once u get this work u'll be MIA for weeks...Amen
Cool
Quote:
Originally Posted by
R!canTheoryz
Im savage. wit the attachment ill hit the Target Meaner,
your mother has a rep for being on the floors like carpet cleaners.
Coulda been worded a lot better here to make it hit harder imo. ok opener for what it is
One shot one kill you’ll get dragged on the floor dyke,
Cuz Im all in ur bitches walls building like its season 7 in Fortnite
Ight
Im tired of these holy acts playing like they Nice in the league,
sooo one shot will have you in church like you Havent visited Christ in weeks
Too simple here imo
I got enough bullets for every candle these hollows in ya face,
To prove a point nobody cares bout ur Birthday bash, your The fat kid who already swallowed his cake
Coulda taken out 'to prove a point here' and it woulda been better
In the proving grounds ur weak can’t rap or sing hope you’ll die,
Cuz I will take your baby Bash, & I still don’t know the lyrics to sugar sugar how you get soooo flyyyyyyyy
Nah doesn't land for me
Got Bash here
Re: WK14: BashEmUp (8-5) vs R!canTheoryz (2-3) OPEN FOR VOTES
Bash-
Opener: i like it. Shoulda said stack instead of thou, imo
Bojack- this coulda been crazy imo. As is, just good. Fire concept tho
Ninja shodown- i didnt like this tbh.
Shark do- yikes. This might be bar of the week imo. Sheesh.
Closer. Good idea here, but this is a miss imo
Vs
Rico:
Opener-nah. Didn't like this bro
Fortnite- this was good
Church- i feel like u coulda did something w this. Fell flat As is tho, imo
Birthday bash- this was a slick concept imo. But def coulda been worded cleaner.
Closer- aaaaaahhhh. I wanna give u this, but its sooo corny lmao
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