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Verses due 11:59 PM Friday EST
EXTENSION MUST BE AGREED UPON FAILURE TO CHECK = DQ
@CAGED
this is my check .
12-14.... same as LLL... Goodluck...
I have to battle u 3 times? Lol
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I need an extension till Sunday. I'm busy asf later this week plus this is my third time battling u. Don't decline my extension tho fr.
I'm dropping 10 late Saturday
I went 14.. kept writing Good luck.
dudes salty, writing is worthless, pepper him w/ punches my rhyming is perfect
Champ match? its funny how the rankings let Cajun, but theres no spice in ur verses
ur tourney wasn’t shit to celebrate, you’re so wack but let me demostrate
the way u had issues with Boyz, u should send Penn state a copy of your resume.
dude lives on snap chat.. guys a coward, just a basic little bitch that id devour
if we take the time 2 look at ur story, ur 10 seconds of fame expires in 24 hours
stop crying in LLL need supporters? welcome to the majors, ur getting slaughtered
going to need more than ur iron Caged, ur getting eaten in these shark invested waters
ur girls a pig, i aint mad at her, she’s sweet to be with a fat AF online battler
by the way she lets this hog rider, u’d think caged was a clash of clan character
u PM Spree all day u in ur right mind? ur boys though, he helps u write rhymes
doesn’t matter if u & Kill switch, cause I’m cutting the circuit on both of ur life lines
ur an attention whore, dont come back, your kind of like Dagel texting, just wack
see u remind me more & more of Johnny, Cage, so split b4 u catch a punch to the nut sack
You've been trash for years....everything I pens harder,
let suicide come first... I'll have a faggot killing himself over text like Michelle Carter.
from movies tv shows & music, if u beat a dead horse of course it's gonna suck,
Cuz nigga you're not a triple threat.... you're jus the soul reason trilogy's are boring as fuck.
I'll blast shots at u EVEN in the after life.. to me ur nothin,
leave u dead for eternity... I'll put fire in the sky after ya dead like an Alien Abduction.
Nigga you're concepts are dated and ya verses r never tough or dense,
Ya career equates to old paintings... cuz everything art scribbles makes ZERO fucking sense.
I love weaponry.. when blastin holes im always sure,
I keep gats strapped by the intestines... & I'll be sure ur gushing blood out both of yours.
You love battling me, lol faggot leave me alone, ur raps are cancer,
He can't even ride tracks.. ya better off doing NASCAR impressions like Adam Sandler.
U fat fuck, how about u post a pic?? The knife e'll make this whore squeal,
Cuz I'll serve ya head entree's... and give ur entire fkin fam a full course meal.
dudes salty, writing is worthless, pepper him w/ punches my rhyming is perfect
Champ match? its funny how the rankings let Cajun, but theres no spice in ur verses
Ok
ur tourney wasn’t shit to celebrate, you’re so wack but let me demostrate
the way u had issues with Boyz, u should send Penn state a copy of your resume.
Ok
dude lives on snap chat.. guys a coward, just a basic little bitch that id devour
if we take the time 2 look at ur story, ur 10 seconds of fame expires in 24 hours
No..
stop crying in LLL need supporters? welcome to the majors, ur getting slaughtered
going to need more than ur iron Caged, ur getting eaten in these shark invested waters
Good1
ur girls a pig, i aint mad at her, she’s sweet to be with a fat AF online battler
by the way she lets this hog rider, u’d think caged was a clash of clan character
Ok
u PM Spree all day u in ur right mind? ur boys though, he helps u write rhymes
doesn’t matter if u & Kill switch, cause I’m cutting the circuit on both of ur life lines
Nice
ur an attention whore, dont come back, your kind of like Dagel texting, just wack
see u remind me more & more of Johnny, Cage, so split b4 u catch a punch to the nut sack
Nope..
Versus
You've been trash for years....everything I pens harder,
let suicide come first... I'll have a faggot killing himself over text like Michelle Carter.
Ok
from movies tv shows & music, if u beat a dead horse of course it's gonna suck,
Cuz nigga you're not a triple threat.... you're jus the soul reason trilogy's are boring as fuck.
Nope..
I'll blast shots at u EVEN in the after life.. to me ur nothin,
leave u dead for eternity... I'll put fire in the sky after ya dead like an Alien Abduction.
No..
Nigga you're concepts are dated and ya verses r never tough or dense,
Ya career equates to old paintings... cuz everything art scribbles makes ZERO fucking sense.
No..
I love weaponry.. when blastin holes im always sure,
I keep gats strapped by the intestines... & I'll be sure ur gushing blood out both of yours.
Good1
You love battling me, lol faggot leave me alone, ur raps are cancer,
He can't even ride tracks.. ya better off doing NASCAR impressions like Adam Sandler.
Nope..
U fat fuck, how about u post a pic?? The knife e'll make this whore squeal,
Cuz I'll serve ya head entree's... and give ur entire fkin fam a full course meal.
Recent close
So yea, decent showing here overall but Art had the harder punches and fewer misses.
V/Art for FL Vhamp
Stop free posting , this is like the 10th time I edited this .
Stop free posting my dudeQuote:
Originally Posted by Caged
Quote:
Originally Posted by Art.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Caged
This was a pretty close battle. You guys match up well together. You both have a unique style that works for you, and you guys always make an effort to drop a polished verse without that many errors. You both had 5 ☆☆☆☆☆'s a piece, and that's testament to how intense you guys get when you up your competitiveness. This was really close but I have Art surviving a valiant attempt by Caged.
v-Art
You've been trash for years....everything I pens harder,
let suicide come first... I'll have a faggot killing himself over text like Michelle Carter.
this isn't a punch, its a statement... like, " you too plain in the building like 911"...theres no creativity here
from movies tv shows & music, if u beat a dead horse of course it's gonna suck,
Cuz nigga you're not a triple threat.... you're jus the soul reason trilogy's are boring as fuck.
what?
I'll blast shots at u EVEN in the after life.. to me ur nothin,
leave u dead for eternity... I'll put fire in the sky after ya dead like an Alien Abduction.
no, i'll come back to this ...
Nigga you're concepts are dated and ya verses r never tough or dense,
Ya career equates to old paintings... cuz everything art scribbles makes ZERO fucking sense.
again.. no,
I love weaponry.. when blastin holes im always sure,
I keep gats strapped by the intestines... & I'll be sure ur gushing blood out both of yours.
this is decent at best, simple violence talk..nothing hard hitting..
You love battling me, lol faggot leave me alone, ur raps are cancer,
He can't even ride tracks.. ya better off doing NASCAR impressions like Adam Sandler.
here's an issue..YOU are challenging HIM for the title, so how can HE leave YOU alone? its actually the other way around
U fat fuck, how about u post a pic?? The knife e'll make this whore squeal,
Cuz I'll serve ya head entree's... and give ur entire fkin fam a full course meal.
this is a decent closer..probably ya best bar...the set up is terrible though...
heres 3 of ya 7 punches...like Adam Sandler...like an Alien Abduction...like Michelle Carter.
see a pattern?...similes & metaphors
vs
dudes salty, writing is worthless, pepper him w/ punches my rhyming is perfect
Champ match? its funny how the rankings let Cajun, but theres no spice in ur verses
cool opener...
ur tourney wasn’t shit to celebrate, you’re so wack but let me demostrate
the way u had issues with Boyz, u should send Penn state a copy of your resume.
smh... lol...
dude lives on snap chat.. guys a coward, just a basic little bitch that id devour
if we take the time 2 look at ur story, ur 10 seconds of fame expires in 24 hours
no...
stop crying in LLL need supporters? welcome to the majors, ur getting slaughtered
going to need more than ur iron Caged, ur getting eaten in these shark invested waters
good line
ur girls a pig, i aint mad at her, she’s sweet to be with a fat AF online battler
by the way she lets this hog rider, u’d think caged was a clash of clan character
nooooooo...thanks for letting me know youre fat though
u PM Spree all day u in ur right mind? ur boys though, he helps u write rhymes
doesn’t matter if u & Kill switch, cause I’m cutting the circuit on both of ur life lines
this is tough... truth in bars always maks the personal hit harder
ur an attention whore, dont come back, your kind of like Dagel texting, just wack
see u remind me more & more of Johnny, Cage, so split b4 u catch a punch to the nut sack
this closers bad
so, clearly this ended as I expected it to...Art winning easily..my advice is not to play down to your opponent...I notice this is like ya zillionth time battleling each other so material might get a lil sparse or even uninteresting after a few..
Caged...u can take this advice ( I know u wont because u are delusional) but look at the results...u keep losing nd keep bitchin' but never taking advice from voters, just mad cause they vote against you.. I know Lesnar jizzes his fruit of the looms everytime he reads ya bars and NEVER criticizes a thing about u but hes doing you a disservice by not being honest with u.. The record speaks for itself, your bars are simple, rudimentary and not very well configured..the same issues that networth has, u have ten folds...that's an honest opinion, I wont say u suck ( but u do), i'll just constructively instruct u to try harder.. I know you're reading this and throwing suburban gangsigns at the screen and getting flustered right now but ask yaself is all the grandioso and self hype has equated to anything..tourney wins? league wins? ..My honest degrading of your bars is actually more helpful than Lesnars orgasmic joy from them,... ponder on that...
vote - Art...
i'll @Kill Spree for u in advance to negate this vote
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dudes salty, writing is worthless, pepper him w/ punches my rhyming is perfect
Champ match? its funny how the rankings let Cajun, but theres no spice in ur verses
This was dope. Yes, his name is Caged but who gives a shit. This flip was fire.
ur tourney wasn’t shit to celebrate, you’re so wack but let me demostrate
the way u had issues with Boyz, u should send Penn state a copy of your resume.
FUCK
dude lives on snap chat.. guys a coward, just a basic little bitch that id devour
if we take the time 2 look at ur story, ur 10 seconds of fame expires in 24 hours
I like the flip but the punch didn't have the same "oomph" as the previous two
stop crying in LLL need supporters? welcome to the majors, ur getting slaughtered
going to need more than ur iron Caged, ur getting eaten in these shark invested waters
This is pretty good though
ur girls a pig, i aint mad at her, she’s sweet to be with a fat AF online battler
by the way she lets this hog rider, u’d think caged was a clash of clan character
Not feeling this one. Neat metaphor but no real punch
u PM Spree all day u in ur right mind? ur boys though, he helps u write rhymes
doesn’t matter if u & Kill switch, cause I’m cutting the circuit on both of ur life lines
Possibly your LOTB
ur an attention whore, dont come back, your kind of like Dagel texting, just wack
see u remind me more & more of Johnny, Cage, so split b4 u catch a punch to the nut sack
I love FG reference in rap, but this didn't really hit
VS
You've been trash for years....everything I pens harder,
let suicide come first... I'll have a faggot killing himself over text like Michelle Carter.
Great opener - Probably your LOTB
from movies tv shows & music, if u beat a dead horse of course it's gonna suck,
Cuz nigga you're not a triple threat.... you're jus the soul reason trilogy's are boring as fuck.
Not feeling this setup
I'll blast shots at u EVEN in the after life.. to me ur nothin,
leave u dead for eternity... I'll put fire in the sky after ya dead like an Alien Abduction.
Dead for eternity? That's usually the case. Wording killed it for me here
Nigga you're concepts are dated and ya verses r never tough or dense,
Ya career equates to old paintings... cuz everything art scribbles makes ZERO fucking sense.
Okay I feel this
I love weaponry.. when blastin holes im always sure,
I keep gats strapped by the intestines... & I'll be sure ur gushing blood out both of yours.
This setup is a bit strange and there really isn't any cleverness here
You love battling me, lol faggot leave me alone, ur raps are cancer,
He can't even ride tracks.. ya better off doing NASCAR impressions like Adam Sandler.
Okay
U fat fuck, how about u post a pic?? The knife e'll make this whore squeal,
Cuz I'll serve ya head entree's... and give ur entire fkin fam a full course meal.
Nice WP
This was a good battle. Both had some misses here but Art was a bit more consistent throughout. I do think Caged had the better opener and closer, but he also had more misses. This was really close but I'm going to have to go with Art.Though both had some great haymakers, his misses didn't hurt him as much as Caged.
v/Art
V/caged
closed.
art wins 4-0