Playoff Rnd 1: Bomb Bard Vs GrimmReaperz - OPEN 4 VOTES

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@GrimmReaperZ

@GrimmReaperZ
Bar due tonight

Just seeing this...cool

Who are u today, kill spree or bard?....either way....


Bump ya gums?..and get choked out till a blood vessel swells leaving a knot Formation
& everything island connect, so its bound to get this "bomb a clot" like a shocked jamaican

Charlie Clipz said
So tell Ill Will he better have an ILL Will b4 I set in god hands
Or ILL Will get to meet ILL Will when I sit’m next to Nas Man


Grimm wrote
I got no ill Will towards ill....just ether that burns worse than a BAHAMA TAN
so devise a plan, have your kids in Ills will since Ill Will end up like Nas' MAN



Listen bitch boy
Roll up on Boyz, In black, fully autos show U hardly hard
Homicide’ll say U Took Shots From Clipz & had nuthin to do w/Biting Charlie’s Bars

Both of these were good imo.
Grim- the island wp in the set up wasnt necessary imo. Dont think ive seen ur angle, so thats good.
Kill- i liked ur personal angle a bit more tho.

Vote killa sprilla

v. spree...both were alil personal but spree had more impact w/his delivery. Leaning his way

Seen bomb a clot np used a couple times so it loses the sting factor

Clipz/Charlie nps are played to death



Tough one to call..

Outta default mvgt bomb bard

Grimm - haven't personally seen bomb a clot nameplay before, the pronunciation is different but it works well for text & the island w/p being played can be overlooked as a tie in... set-up was good

Bomb - Personal definitely hits... the whole clipz angle has been done to death but it makes sense for the angle you went with

hmmm.. while I kindve like Grimm's concept more, Spree's just hits harder imo... he edges it... props to botth

Vote - Killing Spree

GRimm - I definitely like the creativity. I feel like the wordplay a slight reach, as I have always heard the word pronounced "boom-baclot" or "bum-baclot". But the tie in and set up of this was honestly really well done w/ the set up. Spree had a solid personal. But the fact that I seen the same personal flipped against him just a few weeks back takes away from the sting a little. That and the play on clips is just too obvious.

I dunno.Kinda tough. Reaching wordplay vs dry personal. I want to call it a tie honestly. I rate both bars as just decent. But I don't vote ties. So I reread these again and really tried to nitpick. And I found that honestly Grimms tie ins aren't as great as I tgought. Phonetics aside, you did a great job in the set up establishing the clot premise. But you really could have spun the second line better. So...being hyper critical, I'm going to say Spree edged this.

Vote - Spree

i preferred grim's concept & bb's execution

1 concept didnt put the other to shame so im going w execution
v/bomb bard

felt the bomb a clot set up n finish was a bit ehh for its concept.
& the whole lead up to him "snatching" the charlie clips bar shoulda had more imact
like painted the picture but the "took shots form clips"... thats kinda basic punch wise
and plus it cringe'n for me to stealing a rap to taking shots if u get wat i mean
I had to strip this down to vote and I edge it to one slightly v/GrimZ

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damn major typos hope its all understood smh lol

Bomb wins