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Hey...
What part of I can’t do this do you not understand
It’s getting worse and worse and always on their demand
I can’t fucking stand this it takes 1 fucking second to pull a trigger
What is so fucking important I can’t even figure
Grab my wheel for what? Do this to me for what?
Suffer for who? Suffer for what?
God please... PLEASE stop doing this to me
I had every right to know I had every right to see
They won’t even let me be me
Ever gone to bed praying for death
I do every night now cause I know I don’t deserve this
How they even better then me to be able to do this
I REFUSE to live life like this
They do wrong and I suffer
Yo fuck you spin me retarded lock me up then I ain’t your buffer
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Hello sister i see that youre still being that valiant resister
I understand the pain on every blister
The pain that drives you insane
The pain that wont go away
Well i promise you the pain will go away today
Suffer for who?
Girl let me tell you that the only person you suffer for is you
You
You suffer for the better
Or you suffer for the worse
Its up to you to decide which course to take
See suffering can make us stronger
But it can also make us weak
When we think that our situation is bleak
So stay strong
Because to choose to be weak is wrong
Whats right is when you choose to fight
So keep shining on
Because ill keep emanating my light
Aight!!!!!
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That was amazing Ragian - seriously good
Guys, did you shoot back in the dark yet?
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This is cool. Short and to the point. I think if you wanted to make this even stronger, the best thing to do would be to elaborate on what what actually going on rather then just expressing that you're going through shit and tired of it. But art is subjective and how the mind perceives it so you're doing you either way and I respect that. Couple minor things to nitpick are spots like "Suffer for who? Suffer for what?" I think if you took that second 'suffer' out it would've flowed smoother. Or "they won't even let me be me." You could've went with "they won't even let me be" or "they won't even let me be who I was destined to be." Either would've flowed better. Overall though I liked it and you did you thing, appreciate the writing. Keep it up.