12 lines
due by Wednesday night
heading to work so i'll be back to check in. should be able to post a verse today.
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12 lines
due by Wednesday night
heading to work so i'll be back to check in. should be able to post a verse today.
checking in
bbl
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I'm always teaching these kids lessons daily like this a teen summit
They say Boyz will be Boyz.........cuz he's used to gettin punished
I beat kids for fun - its either that or you get smoked like the best ganga
Either way, I'll leave this Bad Boy laid out......like Diddy at the Met Gala
I'll plant punches in his chest til he start believing his roots
Cuz I'll smash him til Boyzn buried..........like a European Fruit
This bitch whines in the front lines chat - damn Boy get ya self a diary
Cuz if i wanna experience a bitch & wine.....I'd take ya mom to a winery
This dude should do the RB Mag....Its obvious you write like an expert
your opinions are meant to be acknowledged....for a women's network
He should be a cast member for a talk show - its time he face the facts
See I make all my opponents cast members - and you'll need to brace for that
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@Boyznblack
you need an extension?
I just saw this.... Didn't u notice I never checked in... That means I'm not aware of the battle
Not a very good verse. Really amateurish. That Bad Boy wordplay is pretty damn old. And Boyz will be Boyz was awful. I will say this, you have the right idea, the template was what you want, you just need to be creative. You had the right idea with boysenberry, but u ruined the nameplay by going with buried instead of bury. And using the simile was ill-advised.Quote:
Originally Posted by Dzaster
I'm always teaching these kids lessons daily like this a teen summit
They say Boyz will be Boyz.........cuz he's used to gettin punished
I beat kids for fun - its either that or you get smoked like the best ganga
Either way, I'll leave this Bad Boy laid out......like Diddy at the Met Gala
I'll plant punches in his chest til he start believing his roots
Cuz I'll smash him til Boyzn buried..........like a European Frui
next half fell off in my book ... bunch of name flips was actually going to say it was a bunch for a battle but dude never showed up so i guess your good to go... thought these were dope though.. good shit way to drop.
I'm always teaching these kids lessons daily like this a teen summit
They say Boyz will be Boyz.........cuz he's used to gettin punished
Decent set up, w/ a decent Np n finish.
I beat kids for fun - its either that or you get smoked like the best ganga
Either way, I'll leave this Bad Boy laid out......like Diddy at the Met Gala
Decent current affairs punch wit but poor setup.
I'll plant punches in his chest til he start believing his roots
Cuz I'll smash him til Boyzn buried..........like a European Frui
I fwi
This was an overall decent drop, ok structure, ok punches, some attempts at personals..
This bitch whines in the front lines chat - damn Boy get ya self a diary
Cuz if i wanna experience a bitch & wine.....I'd take ya mom to a winery
This was actually my favorite punch, I just would've used a synonym in the opener to make 'wine' stand out more.
Good drop tho n fk these no respect,no showing cowards w/ a sick dick, as has been said. Overall 7/10 on a scale.
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If that includes you then.. yo fault.
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