Week 2: A Disciple Vs Smog - FEED

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Punches due by THURSDAY
Voting closes SUNDAY
NEW BATTLES GO UP RIGHT AFTER

Check Ins
If you can't check in then there's something wrong w/ you
I won't be penalizing for not checking in though. Just make sure you drop a bar

No Shows
1 no show gets you taken out of the "in" roster. You will have to sign back in the next week
2 no shows gets you taken out of the "in" roster for 2 weeks
3 no shows gets you booted from the league for the rest of the season

Voting
Everyone is required to vote on 5 BATTLES MINIMUM. CONTENDERS AND CHAMP BEING MANDATORY
1 vote deduction for every battle link missed
Failure to vote at all will result in a boot from the league for 1 week
If your opponent no shows, you must vote on the required minimum to get the win

Battle Rules
NO FEEDING FROM OPPONENTS BAR IF THEY DROP FIRST
In the event of a 3-way, each battler must drop 2 bars; 1 for each opponent
Battler must drop a bar to get a win, even if their opponent no shows/doesn't check
NO EXTENSIONS. It's only 1 bar
NO editing punches after opponent drops
Biting will result in a league/site ban
Recycling will result in DQ 1st time and League Ban 2nd time

@Smog @A Disciple

Check...

Wall flower
Coward bitch sticking pins in a doll but only to the weak cause they left sprawl. There's no points in hitting a parapalegic, the smoke in the air, is gonna disappear, eventually, no matter how thick.

(I just had to google what a bar was and I think I get it but if I have to remove one of the sentences (even though it's the same set) Remove the first one. Still learning that's why I'm here and I don't want a disqualify.

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Originally Posted by A Disciple

Check...

Wall flower
Coward bitch sticking pins in a doll but only to the weak cause they left sprawl. There's no points in hitting a parapalegic, the smoke in the air, is gonna disappear, eventually, no matter how thick.

(I just had to google what a bar was and I think I get it but if I have to remove one of the sentences (even though it's the same set) Remove the first one. Still learning that's why I'm here and I don't want a disqualify.

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You have to write a bar(2 lines = 1 bar) dissing your opponent who is @Smog

@kill _spree... Ok so I'm within rules - 2 lines and towards my opponent - just not the guy I'm writing with. Does it stand or should I rewrite?

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Originally Posted by A Disciple

@kill _spree... Ok so I'm within rules - 2 lines and towards my opponent - just not the guy I'm writing with. Does it stand or should I rewrite?

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You should look at some old 1-2 battles. You’ll get the picture

ok... I'll rewrite it. Thanks.

Open for feed

You're name a pollutant, a contaminate, the fog that's anything but conducent; but shine a light thru and you only translucent.
Like that man who wouldn't help the next and just stood their and watched; he's a coward, a pussy, someone get that man a pad for his crotch.

Nailed it

dead

Dope first line, good ish.

Thank you guys!!!