The Philosophy of Illiology

I got the idea to write this verse when i was taking a shit LMAO :laugh:, damn after taking a long ass break from writing rhymes ive recently been writing something everyday it may be bull shit or it may be dope but im posting like everything i write on here to get some feed back. How yall like it!

Illiology - The study of being ill ( ill in the sense of like Illmatic or something and if you dont know what Illmatic is then you shoudnt be rapping)

The philosophy of illiology, I put shirts on poverty/
No emcees matches my mental psychology/
My rhymes are unique, how can I be weak?/
Cause im eating up 21 emcees as I speak/
Like the R i know the ledge/
And i aint no joke like a AIDS patient on his death bed/
My lyrics are well read, like Malcolm X said/
"The price of freedom is death", so i dont half step/
Knowledgeable, dumbing me down is impossible/
Just cause its smart doesn't mean its uncoppable/
And if the youth buy in to that dumb shit/
Then your going to see this society be done quick/
You see i think out of the box/
I keep my tongue cocked, so I shoot any sucka who deceives like a fox or a../
..Wolf in sheep's clothes I look past the deception/
And i cyprose and and blast the person thats got a stupid question/
Cause that shit leads to a bunch of misconception/
And misconceptions leads to fucking up life lessons/
I use most of my time before I leave in a hearse/
And make you realize that heaven and hell are both in the same earth/
And it channels through me, and i clearly see/
All these whack emcees have the potential to be/
Another snipe, like M.C. Lyte through the mic i kill everything on sight/
And dont blame me its the nature of hip hop/
That the whack emcees and biters have to stop/
That crap radio music shit has to stop/
That bureaucratic control over hip hop needs to STOP!/
Urban decay infected our society like cancer/
Seeing more liquor stores then libraries is degrading like a desperate lap dancer/
So i try to bring the change through my intellect and illiology/
This shit is hard like philosophy you gots to be smart to master illiology/

Yeah need some feed back while i play me some kingdom hearts II and eat more chicken wings lol, im probably gonna re edit this shit later you know, i plan to make it longer more and address more of the multiple topics mentioned but for now lets just say this is a rough draft or something haha its amazing how much time your mind can think while in the bathroom lol.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...874/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...330/index.html

nice flow, but could improve structure...:2thumb:

thanks, it seems your new so ima tell you one of the rules in this forum is to give feed back with at least 2 sentences lol

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Learning the philosophy of Illiology here was quite useful for me, and I'll tell my friends who are doing australianwritings about this, as well. They'll be pleased to learn about this, I am sure of it.