Donald trump vs. Late bloomer [trump wins!]

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2 link rule please.. and goodluck...

Chrck

okay yes sir remember 2 link rule please..

ima put in for an ext.. maybe drop tomorrow if thats okay with you?? im heading off the bed soon tho so if you do want it tonight please let me know quickly... otherwise ill have something for this tomorrow.....

Cool, drop whenever

right so you think you got an angle in frontlines or in this battle
but you got emcees running out of personals like hantzle and grettle
im posting twenty four hours before the due date homie
you got a selection to make but the voters around here arent worthy for a jury
people spread lies and broadcast shit that shouldnt be allowed to be published
but its just too easy for me to demoralize you cause trump aint getting it bitch
ill have emcees online eating from out the palms in my hand
like we were out in the tropical and i aint kill trump since i had to adjust the laws of a land
right so im excited anyways and really glad to have battled dog
but frontlines aint ill I will have lines that leave my competition rattled son



...please have your verse tonight... and i think we out.. son will provide links once you drop...

I always say ill make a comeback, then i come back.. and see a bunch of dudes like you.. wigger white dudes
I wanted to battle top comp, so when i see your post I just cyan accept, then key up a verse cuz youre light bloo
swagger around these forums claiming youre drowning in pussy but i know youre a fraud
you live in Europe, prostitution is legal and STILL you arent fucking abroad
your rec is a joke you wont be able to scrape out a vote so when you get hit, faggot just stay down
ive taken down goliath, then tackled a bear, arm wrestled a gorrila so 0-4 LBs just getting thrown around
Im playing with your rules, and you still asking for an extension just makes me laugh an grin
lets just face it b, you can post hours before the deadline.... yet when i drop late ill still win
eat a dick
lame

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right so you think you got an angle in frontlines or in this battle
but you got emcees running out of personals like hantzle and grettle
>>weak start

im posting twenty four hours before the due date homie
you got a selection to make but the voters around here arent worthy for a jury
>>a jury & homie rhyme???

people spread lies and broadcast shit that shouldnt be allowed to be published
but its just too easy for me to demoralize you cause trump aint getting it bitch
>>miss.

ill have emcees online eating from out the palms in my hand
like we were out in the tropical and i aint kill trump since i had to adjust the laws of a land
>>stahp!

right so im excited anyways and really glad to have battled dog
but frontlines aint ill I will have lines that leave my competition rattled son
>>u tried to make a multi wit dog & son.......


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I always say ill make a comeback, then i come back.. and see a bunch of dudes like you.. wigger white dudes
I wanted to battle top comp, so when i see your post I just cyan accept, then key up a verse cuz youre light bloo
>>okay

swagger around these forums claiming youre drowning in pussy but i know youre a fraud
you live in Europe, prostitution is legal and STILL you arent fucking abroad
>>lmfaoooooo!!!!!

your rec is a joke you wont be able to scrape out a vote so when you get hit, faggot just stay down
ive taken down goliath, then tackled a bear, arm wrestled a gorrila so 0-4 LBs just getting thrown around
>>niiice!

Im playing with your rules, and you still asking for an extension just makes me laugh an grin
lets just face it b, you can post hours before the deadline.... yet when i drop late ill still win
>>haha! Funny closer.... U aint lyin' btw!!! Lol.

V- DT

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Originally Posted by late bloomer

right so you think you got an angle in frontlines or in this battle
but you got emcees running out of personals like hantzle and grettle
whats a personal if thats supposed to be the wordplay. I dont get it. so eh.
im posting twenty four hours before the due date homie
you got a selection to make but the voters around here arent worthy for a jury
nah
people spread lies and broadcast shit that shouldnt be allowed to be published
but its just too easy for me to demoralize you cause trump aint getting it bitch
nah, not doing it for me
ill have emcees online eating from out the palms in my hand
like we were out in the tropical and i aint kill trump since i had to adjust the laws of a land
err, doesnt make that much sense.
right so im excited anyways and really glad to have battled dog
but frontlines aint ill I will have lines that leave my competition rattled son
well that just doesnt rhyme. Sure bat n rat do. but...yeah

well, I didnt really see any punches, your first line may have been okay but it didnt make sense to me.

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Vs

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Donald Trump

I always say ill make a comeback, then i come back.. and see a bunch of dudes like you.. wigger white dudes
I wanted to battle top comp, so when i see your post I just cyan accept, then key up a verse cuz youre light bloo
a little forced n longwinded, but alright.
swagger around these forums claiming youre drowning in pussy but i know youre a fraud
you live in Europe, prostitution is legal and STILL you arent fucking abroad
heh, not bad, although, they wouldn't call it abroad when they live in said place.
your rec is a joke you wont be able to scrape out a vote so when you get hit, faggot just stay down
ive taken down goliath, then tackled a bear, arm wrestled a gorrila so 0-4 LBs just getting thrown around
lb/pound, i guess. not a very hard punch.
Im playing with your rules, and you still asking for an extension just makes me laugh an grin
lets just face it b, you can post hours before the deadline.... yet when i drop late ill still win
and some filler
eat a dick
lame.
well this is just lazy n stupid. you could have at least came up with nothing, rather than actually saying nothing.

alright, you had a couple creative attempts at punches. I do feel that you didnt meet the minimum requirements.. therefore you should lose by default...

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Ima have to give this to Donald. He had more creative attempts at punches, you should have made a better half assed attempt at a close, that was terrible.

V.DT

right so you think you got an angle in frontlines or in this battle
but you got emcees running out of personals like hantzle and grettle
Not certain what you meant here. An attempt I guess
im posting twenty four hours before the due date homie
you got a selection to make but the voters around here arent worthy for a jury
I think if you worded this better, you might have had a decent punch here
people spread lies and broadcast shit that shouldnt be allowed to be published
but its just too easy for me to demoralize you cause trump aint getting it bitch
Almost..
ill have emcees online eating from out the palms in my hand
like we were out in the tropical and i aint kill trump since i had to adjust the laws of a land
You tried.. I’ll give you that
right so im excited anyways and really glad to have battled dog
but frontlines aint ill I will have lines that leave my competition rattled son
No rhyme

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I always say ill make a comeback, then i come back.. and see a bunch of dudes like you.. wigger white dudes
I wanted to battle top comp, so when i see your post I just cyan accept, then key up a verse cuz youre light bloo
Wording was a lil off but the punch was there.
swagger around these forums claiming youre drowning in pussy but i know youre a fraud
you live in Europe, prostitution is legal and STILL you arent fucking abroad
played but I still Lol'd
your rec is a joke you wont be able to scrape out a vote so when you get hit, faggot just stay down
ive taken down goliath, then tackled a bear, arm wrestled a gorrila so 0-4 LBs just getting thrown around
Dope play on his rec
Im playing with your rules, and you still asking for an extension just makes me laugh an grin
lets just face it b, you can post hours before the deadline.... yet when i drop late ill still win
Effortless bar
eat a dick
lame
Ouch

This battle was one sided, however I won't down bloomer for trying. He said he wanted to get his skills up the more he battles. He looks to be trying - just need to work on some punches, your wording and definitely your rhymes. Find something that will work for you man. You'll get there. DT had some good punches in there and dope creativity. He still hit harder with better hits.

v/ DT

Lb

Man man man your punches are not even sensible ur just typing a bunch of filler. Stop rushing and trying to key up so quickly. I feel ur not taking the criticism we are giving u.

Trump


I always say ill make a comeback, then i come back.. and see a bunch of dudes like you.. wigger white dudes
I wanted to battle top comp, so when i see your post I just cyan accept, then key up a verse cuz youre light bloo
Nice wordplay good creativity

swagger around these forums claiming youre drowning in pussy but i know youre a fraud
you live in Europe, prostitution is legal and STILL you arent fucking abroad
Lmao good personal tie along with added humor

your rec is a joke you wont be able to scrape out a vote so when you get hit, faggot just stay down
ive taken down goliath, then tackled a bear, arm wrestled a gorrila so 0-4 LBs just getting thrown around
Horribly worded punch

Im playing with your rules, and you still asking for an extension just makes me laugh an grin
lets just face it b, you can post hours before the deadline.... yet when i drop late ill still win
Basic hit not much impact

V/Donald over better attempts concepts were sensible at least.

Notta

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I always say ill make a comeback, then i come back.. and see a bunch of dudes like you.. wigger white dudes
I wanted to battle top comp, so when i see your post I just cyan accept, then key up a verse cuz youre light bloo
swagger around these forums claiming youre drowning in pussy but i know youre a fraud
you live in Europe, prostitution is legal and STILL you arent fucking abroad

I hate to be that guy, but late bloomer..... go and peep some older FL champ matches. Get a feel of how to get a concept and set up your punch which will deliver a direct hit. I seen you come up with some cool ideas for punches dogg, but they just not hitting at all man. Donald Trump, clearly you didn't try here, and I know what you can do. What can i say tho? Trump got his easily.

v- trump

5-0 thanks to all