Antimatter

Yo I'm tired of rap
These styles are wack
Who Vibing with mad
Wild or crass
Childish jabs or
Mindless pizzazz
Shining the shafts
For Compiling trash
While the last
Time that I had
Buying a track
I liked for whats spat
I kinda forget..
Like nights that went blackl
Mines were a blast
igniting some gas
skies that'll crack
a smile reflects
On Vials of mass
Contrived to contract
A might thats unmatched
By the type to invent
A light that is trapped
That's designed in a lab...

"Mixing equipment and clinging"

Why do I listen still
My ears are black holes
That never get their fill
Thats how the rap goes


Never traveled to battle
Or rapped with a Smack flow
Or Stacked when the cash grow
Cast in its shadow
A track that can grab you
Has a habit to Pass through
Over the hump
Like the back of a camel
Desert sahara
The less that we care of
The better and realer
Message is clearer
Instead when I hear a
Spit like a trailer
Never hitting the theater
gifted or pampered?
I love when I'm spitting
100 percent sick
Coming to get it
They run when I'm sprinting
Stuck in a listen
Like abducting a system
Of Government spending
For obstructing whats missing..

Antimatter..


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Fuck with me

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I really appreciate what you're trying to do here, which I would assume is come up with a unique flow that stands out. I can tell you put some time into this but I can't help feel this was too forced to fit the rhyme scheme you were trying. I like that there was a more consistent syllable count than I was expecting to see in OM. But like I said word choice coulda been better. Shows attention to details that newbies look past though, I can't even make my stuff tight without it looking put together instead of flowing together. The concepts are also kind of hard to point out too. Would like to see something fresher I know you got it