@natural20
10 lines (5 Bars)
No feeding
Due Tomorrow before midnight
Slap a dress
I'm going to sell that lilly white ass cheap
Die Slow
Good Luck
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@natural20
10 lines (5 Bars)
No feeding
Due Tomorrow before midnight
Slap a dress
I'm going to sell that lilly white ass cheap
Die Slow
Good Luck
I can't believe you had the balls to come on the scene n' really try me....
Fuck it, I'll go through this whole thing straight screamin' Kill Whitey....
Cause I know around people of color you puff up and act rude....
But really your just hurt cause your girl is gettin' butt fucked by a black dude...
Its a fact fool. Martin Luther King was peacefull, but I know he woulda loved this certain occasion....
When a Nigga had enough, fought back and violently murked a caucasion...
I ain't playin'! You talked that shit, calling yourself a privileged white man...
Fuck your privelege, I hope you OD off them pills on your vintage night stand...
You can't fight fam! Got you all red faced and dizzy....
Talkin bout, "I like black people, especially the blind racist Clayton Bigsby"
(if you don't know who Clayton Bihsby is, look him up. Dave Chapelle character lol)
open for votes
My 2 links...
Lets get some votes
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@Know @Joe Boston
Why isn't this open for votes yet?
Uppin for votes
Wtf is this shit??Quote:
Originally Posted by natural20
natural20
I bet the thought of naked women makes you nervous and sick,
You surely found the right major where you’ll be servicing dick.
lmao this made me laugh man even tho it was original it still had humor factor and hit good
By now my rhymes must have you at the end of your wit
Because natural twenty serves his namesake: critical hits
flip on here was cool liked the creativity
other then these two hits u had misses nothing connected not sure why it took you till last two bars to pick it up.
Killer Stylez
I can't believe you had the balls to come on the scene n' really try me....
Fuck it, I'll go through this whole thing straight screamin' Kill Whitey....
didn't get this is he white is this a personal? if so very basic
Cause I know around people of color you puff up and act rude....
But really your just hurt cause your girl is gettin' butt fucked by a black dude...
lmao ok
Its a fact fool. Martin Luther King was peacefull, but I know he woulda loved this certain occasion....
When a Nigga had enough, fought back and violently murked a caucasion...
ur setup was way too stretched here took away from the finisher ur finisher was basic more audio battle related in my opinion
I ain't playin'! You talked that shit, calling yourself a privileged white man...
Fuck your privelege, I hope you OD off them pills on your vintage night stand...
setup was no were relevant to the finisher
You can't fight fam! Got you all red faced and dizzy....
Talkin bout, "I like black people, especially the blind racist Clayton Bigsby"
ok but no need to explain the punch
V/KIller he had misses but at least he had better attempts at developing punches. Both need to study on text battle format though use of wordplay nameplay and metaphorical comparisons.
Uppin for votes
Oh! You studied at the uni in the service of humans?
I know your focus was fellation, which is aptly prudent
This bar made me giggle.
v Killer
nada
vs
Cause I know around people of color you puff up and act rude....
But really your just hurt cause your girl is gettin' butt fucked by a black dude...
didn't really find a haymaker at all in this battle. N20 has a lot of work to do on learning how to set up a punchline and deliever his bverses to impact his oppoenent. KS got the delievery down but now you gotta learn how to us wordplay or nameplay or misdirection in your bars. read some from the LLL or past FL champ matches and see what I mean. You can tell a hitter when you read it or what the voters deam as fire. keep at it bro.
v. killa
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3-0 killa wins