10-20 lines.
due: 45 minutes after check.
order: your first
no: crew, hate, d/r, feeding is aloud.
LilFuSe
tric
10-20 lines.
due: 45 minutes after check.
order: your first
no: crew, hate, d/r, feeding is aloud.
??? wut the fuck u changin my rules?? shit dont work that way but ill spit ne way
trick u aint nothin but a trick,
ill beat ur all lickity split,
lickidy licky lick lick my dick
bitch,u changin my rules must make u feel tight
ur right,ur tight, but not in that light
the only place u tight is ya cunt,ight
and dont be mad in no fuckin spite
ur just a tirck ,and ull get played all night
i aint seen ya raps yet,
but this bitch will get cleaned out just like comet
and a bit of elbow grease
ill freak ya the fuck out like hannibal sayin"clerise"
and creepin over ya shoulder
lil fuse bout to get lit and throw a boulder
stright at ya mollar
and knock out the rest of ya teeth at the same time
ur fronts,wisdome,and ya k-9's
cuz thats the only nines u got
u thinkin u hot but ill shoot ya ass right there on the spot
now let me get complex
iam chompin bitches down like a tyranasourus rex
iam better than you
and iam better than sex
its like with every word i spit
there all like o shit
i think another rapper just quit
i scimmed the first two lines, and paused for a giggle.
this cause is too little...your text are like flaws in a riddle.
quick key and drop bullshit lines, to make this match up close.
and just to make this even, ill type...then white out my post.
with nuthin to boast, drop a line or two...5 votes and log me out.
even as blind, it would still be fatal...like semi trucks on foggy routtes.
folks depend on my KO's, who knows...they might even call me Trojan.
im the reason they came up with No Shows, it should be my slogan.
family tree filled with romans. cause ive been schooled by the pros.
fools only know, when you step to tric...your organs are soon to be doned.
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Whos My Next Victom ?
ight now we need sum votes
word.^ vote....any one?
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Whos My Next Victom ?
votes ppl.
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Whos My Next Victom ?
lil fuse you still a rookie i advise you battle rookies for you will eventually improve as i fink tric won this because more punch lines came with a betta lay out and he won lil fuse you tryed to ryme every word no hard punches and didnt make sense so i tink tric won this i cant vote yet aint got 100 posts but my vote would go to tric ight peace
lilfuse - "and iam better than sex" - From my experiences with reading your raps and having sex, I'd have to say that you are not better than sex. Lets see, you went over the line limit, but your structure was way off so hard to tell where the lines were. Your shit was pretty wack man sorry. You used basic rhymes and you didn't really punch him. Telling him to lick your dick isn't cool, don't use gay stuff like that so keep elevating.
Tric - Not too bad at all and easily much better than lil fuse's. The white out line was pretty good as was the foggy truck thing. The closer was wack, in the future try to avoid self-glorification lines, those aren't punches and the idea is to punch him, but you obviously have a decent concept of rapping as this was not bad for a newbie.
Vote - Tric
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