E bien
U shudn't of started, u shudda just left it,
when I hit dis bitch expect suttin like a cleft lip,
ok not bad here pretty direct but better wording woulda made this fresher
ur a liar, liar, Like ventura im an ace,
Dumb and dumbers a true story and Jim plays waze,
ok good np concept
Your a failin nigga, never recieve no merits,
everyone leaves when u show ...like the end credits,
not a bad concept a bit played though
Its tense when im pitchin, Don't bring ur affliction,
Here's a pre-emptive fuck u before ya camp-ass bitchin,
forced wp here
Am heavy like bricks, this dudes lighter than foam,
No show cuz the connection weak in the foster home,
nah wording fucked this up no hate
Waze
When I See U, I Think "Spanish", U From Da UK Tho/
But E-"Bien", Your Rhymes Is Just "No Bueno"/
i seen alot of spanish np agaisnt bien this concept wasnt that bad though
I'm Gifted, So Its Scientific, How I'm Wreckin' Ya/
With Secular Rhymes, That Break Down Ya Molecular/
wasnt feeling that this was a hit
A Jacka At Heart, So I Gotta Take Gifts/
U An "Employer" At Heart, Bars Is Just "Make Shift"/
woulda been fresher if u worded this better man coulda turned this finisher into a metaphore think a late shift concept woulda hit better
One Of The Dudes On This Site, Who Analyze A Lot/
But Ya Verses?, "Wack Convertibles", U Need "Betta Drops"/
ok but still man need to polish up that wording
Got Niggas On Here Scared, So They Makin Assumptions/
A Newb "Wreckin' Shop", Like "Store Reconstruction"/
ok
The Way U Rhyme "E", Swear U "Chiefin" On Summin/
So Ill "Roll" And "Blaze" U, Till U Decrease To Nuthin'/
ok not bad
well not a bad battle here. Waze u nice concepts n good hits but need to polish up that wording my dude. Ebien i felt ur first two bars were good then u fell off with bad wording and a played concept.
V/Waze
Reason being he had the better concepts in this one even though he really needs to polish up his wording.
