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Thread: Heartbeat

  1. December 29th, 2011, 03:41 AM #1
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    Heartbeat

    Song I wrote for those who I've hurt over the years. Something a little bit different but I felt it had to be done. The instrumental was created from NNeka's- Heartbeat (the Chase n Status Dubstep Remix).

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  2. December 29th, 2011, 07:28 AM #2
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    Re: Heartbeat

    This was pretty fucking dope bro, loved the delivery bblended well with the beat, the way you talked through the chorus was pretty different but I liked it. Nice one yo!
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  3. December 29th, 2011, 12:01 PM #3
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    Re: Heartbeat

    love the hip hop/rock vibe of this track... vibe wise its not my type of track but thats just my personal opinion....all in all though you did your thing on the track.. ive heard other songs by you and your a tight artist so keep em coming!!!

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  4. December 29th, 2011, 01:55 PM #4
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    Re: Heartbeat

    Thanks y'all, Imma hit that link in a few
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  5. December 29th, 2011, 06:39 PM #5
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    Re: Heartbeat

    Intro was long but I didn't mind with the build up
    With the rock need more emotion or a rock type rapping with more energy
    Great delivery flow on the beat worked well

    Especially with the subject matter needs more emphasis in the voice


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  6. December 29th, 2011, 07:03 PM #6
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    Re: Heartbeat

    Wish I could listen go this. iPad doesn't play sound click.
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  7. December 29th, 2011, 07:23 PM #7
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    Re: Heartbeat

    Damn this beat is so ill. I would go in on this shit lol. You rockin' this. I think you shoulda used a hook though. That's my only complaint. Besides that this was dope. Ima holla at you to do another track soon.

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  8. December 30th, 2011, 09:06 AM #8
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    Re: Heartbeat

    Thanks for peepin
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  9. December 30th, 2011, 01:46 PM #9
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    Re: Heartbeat

    everythings on point in this. great quality man. flow was consistent. i wouldve liked to see a hook too but the talking through it worked.
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    Re: Heartbeat

    Phat song blud!! Rock/Rap vibe love it!! Gotta show my brother...he gonna orgasm when he hears this!!!!
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  11. January 29th, 2012, 05:48 AM #11
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    Re: Heartbeat

    GODDAMN SON!!! Can you email this to me? AyTMusic@Gmail.com
    This shit is soooo hard!!!! "Im a scientist that fell in love with his invention"

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  12. January 29th, 2012, 03:28 PM #12
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    Re: Heartbeat

    dang this is really really good, I like this alot, flow was great, delivery was good, nothing bad to say about this track right here, keep it up!

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