DO OR DIE: Kenny the G (3) vs. J. Hens (0)

[Vaskez]

Make sure you've read the rules as they will be enforced.

Checkin due Wed 23.59 EST (late/no checkin = -2 votes)
Verses due Fri 23.59 EST (lateness = -2 votes even if your opponent agrees the extension)

Line limit: 10 MIN, 20 MAX

Must vote on FIVE battles (we will check that they are proper votes: -2 votes per missing vote)

Voters: if this battle is season 9 classic worthy, nominate it in the correct thread in the office. Also keep an eye out for dope punches for the highlight reel, thanks.

This is a do or die match: the loser is booted for 1 week (+ queuing time to get back in)

all other rules linked above

[Kenny the G]

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-8-376642.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-376641.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...er-376639.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-6-376644.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...or-376643.html

[J.Hens.]

i read his verse

and its pretty exceptional..one his better ones ive seen from here

so just advising you not to drop a no show-type caliber verse

Thanks Muff


I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
I can't drop a no show verse? but you hope that I will decline.
Shit, at least I know I can half ass, be rusty, not vote n' I'll STILL be fine.
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
I hate to derail your future, n' it's not that I'm hating your rappin'.
If you put all ya money on the track, no wonder it's a train wreck waiting to happen.
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.


pz12

[Kenny the G]

lol. you dropped 22. peep the rules, genius.
here's 18.

don't worry Kenny, I haven't written a verse for at least a month, if not 2, so I'm not even sure where I'll be at right off the bat.

...at least you keep it real..

...ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
i dont bang for the sport, fuck a clay disc and a shotty
after 30 minutes of sex i'm skeet shooting all over your moms body
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly
i expect this to go the distance, your endurance is high as shit
because all you do is take other peoples style and run with it
i'll pummel you whiteboy 'til my hands hurt,
just to black your eyes so spit n lay cant cry about a double standard

[Warming]

I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
[aight]
I can't drop a no show verse? but you hope that I will decline.
Shit, at least I know I can half ass, be rusty, not vote n' I'll STILL be fine.
[meh.. setup read awkwardly to me]
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
[aight]
I hate to derail your future, n' it's not that I'm hating your rappin'.
If you put all ya money on the track, no wonder it's a train wreck waiting to happen.
[aight flip i guess]
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
[cool, very nice]
You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
[meh..]
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
[meh/iight]
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.
[ok]
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.
[aight, coolish concept but odd setup]
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.
[pretty cool flip though a few people have done barbie punches on him]

vs

...ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
[aight]
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
[not bad]
i dont bang for the sport, fuck a clay disc and a shotty
after 30 minutes of sex i'm skeet shooting all over your moms body
[meh]
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
[ehh.. but if this the direction i think its going then definately no]
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
[aight]
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
[ok]
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly
[i liked the concept, you should have reworded it harder tho]
i expect this to go the distance, your endurance is high as shit
because all you do is take other peoples style and run with it
[maybe... iight]
i'll pummel you whiteboy 'til my hands hurt,
just to black your eyes so spit n lay cant cry about a double standard
[kind of, not fully developed to me]

cool battle, hens was more consistent tho

[Ironside.]

Hidden Content:

I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
ok personal.
I can't drop a no show verse? but you hope that I will decline.
Shit, at least I know I can half ass, be rusty, not vote n' I'll STILL be fine.
k.
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
lol..
I hate to derail your future, n' it's not that I'm hating your rappin'.
If you put all ya money on the track, no wonder it's a train wreck waiting to happen.
meh..
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
solid.
You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
played concept.
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
not feelin it..
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.
haha.
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.
mmm..not hard hitting.
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.
concepts been done..but nice flip lol.

vs

...ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
lol.
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
k.
i dont bang for the sport, fuck a clay disc and a shotty
after 30 minutes of sex i'm skeet shooting all over your moms body
na.
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
wasn't feelin this.
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
playedish concept..cool flip tho.
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
lol.
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly
na..seen this done.
i expect this to go the distance, your endurance is high as shit
because all you do is take other peoples style and run with it
na,.. bad wording didn't help it either bro.
i'll pummel you whiteboy 'til my hands hurt,
just to black your eyes so spit n lay cant cry about a double standard
coo concept.. I don't think you worded it very harshly though.


well..I think Hens baby boomer line, spark, and G's line were pretty nice. An Ken had his heelflip line, the refined, an his opener.., Hens came pretty consistant throughout imo.. he had a few where he tried to revive some played concepts.. an ken had his fair share..but it seemed like ken got lazy towards the end.. his wording kinda fell off n his last few punches didnt' connect. I got Hens takin this


v/hens

[FUNΞRΔL PR∅]

...ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
^lol.. the wording made this effective
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
^ha.. ive seen this wordplay.. good flip on it
i dont bang for the sport, fuck a clay disc and a shotty
after 30 minutes of sex i'm skeet shooting all over your moms body
^aight
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
^bwah,ha,haaa!
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
^i liked this
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
^Ditto.. nicely done.
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly
^coo.
i expect this to go the distance, your endurance is high as shit
because all you do is take other peoples style and run with it
^played..
i'll pummel you whiteboy 'til my hands hurt,
just to black your eyes so spit n lay cant cry about a double standard
^aight..but mehish

overall/-nice read,good drop..last 4 lines were ugh tho..
vs.

I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
^lol..
I can't drop a no show verse? but you hope that I will decline.
Shit, at least I know I can half ass, be rusty, not vote n' I'll STILL be fine.
^ugh..nah
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
^nice..
I hate to derail your future, n' it's not that I'm hating your rappin'.
If you put all ya money on the track, no wonder it's a train wreck waiting to happen.
^lol..
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
^lol..
You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
^aight...
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
^.. meh. seen the concept.. pretty old too.. an ur version seems old skoolish
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.
^good..
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.
^aight
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.
^lol..damn.

overall/-nice read also.. in an out.. but hard hitting punches

final:

ive got hens by 2lines.. this was close.. very much so.. good battle!dope shit.... props to both.

v/-j.hens

[Horud Skys]

ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly

I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
I hate to derail your future, n' it's not that I'm hating your rappin'.
If you put all ya money on the track, no wonder it's a train wreck waiting to happen.
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.

Vote Hensley.. Kenny you came nice.. just got matched up witht he wrong person this time.. Hens came fresh n funny

[$pitacular]

To me this was pretty one sided as far as who wrote the better verse. Kennys shit was well polished, the wording just flowed perfectly and all the punches save a couple were on point with some haymakers like his opener, the leg up, the chipping in.. Nice swag throughout with relevant setups and wording everytime... the sheet shooting was fresh.. Didn't care for the jamie fox punch that was definitely thw weakest line he dropped, and the close was just ok to me

However Hens, even though he did have the ken/doll closer which was line of the battle imo, but several concepts were poorly worded and executed completely backwards like the money on the track... if it were to cause a trainwreck itd have to be a huge sum of money, so hens basically called him rich.. To me a compliment in a battle is a no no.. And the G force was making himself look weak.. I mean if you can't pass the 1st stage of pilot training, what dif. does it make why you can't withstand a 'G'... idk to me just being creative doesn't outweight the importance of insulting your opponent.. I mean it was almost like hens dropped the OPPOSITE of swag..Then add in the fact there's relatively no flow at all.. It reads like a bad pun or limerick.. Doesn't feel like a verse and maybe that's the reason most of hens concepts don't seem hard or dope to me lately.. I know hens can bring it I just don't think he did at all here

Just my opinion.

v/ Kenny pretty easily.

[Savior Self.]

Kenny The G

you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
i dont bang for the sport, fuck a clay disc and a shotty
after 30 minutes of sex i'm skeet shooting all over your moms body
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions

this was one ur better verses yo, its ¢ool to see someone get better & better w/ every drop dats wassup, some wording was off & a ¢ouple weak ¢on¢epts but overall good verse


J.Hens

1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.

You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.

You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.


¢ould tell u were rusty Hens, some of the ¢on¢epts u were using were under ur ability like I'd see other people who havnt ¢hamped almost every league on the net using feel me, but you still ¢ame wit a ¢ouple heaters tho, I know after like 1 or 2 more battles u'll be ba¢k in ur groove tho



Vote: Hens. Kenny ¢ame ill but Hens had more quotes I thought hens woulda murked Kenny but the battle was a¢tually kinda ¢lose, maybe its Kenny getting better or Hens being rusty... who knows, that ¢redibility line from hens was LOTB tho very ¢reative

[Vaskez]

Hidden Content:

1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
^^kinda forced (since it's g-force) but creative, I'll give it to ya
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.

openers were kinda bland/easy to think of etc. Ken's been done on him a lot. Overall the above were creative, but I felt you were missin your usual haymakers and hardhitters. I can tell you're a bit rusty, but still not bad

vs.

...at least you keep it real..

& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
^^heh
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
^^not bad didnt see this coming
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly
i expect this to go the distance, your endurance is high as shit
because all you do is take other peoples style and run with it
^^hah
i'll pummel you whiteboy 'til my hands hurt,
just to black your eyes so spit n lay cant cry about a double standard
^^forced rhyme, not too bad current event punch

wasnt feelin your start Kenny, a blow/blow play? old. re-fined and cited- seen them etc.

this is extremely close, my favs from hens was the negative shots line. But Kenny dropped hard with the therapy session and the run with it lines. Both had an iffy quotable. I dunno to my surprise etc. and feelin a bit bad for john cos he been out a while but I think I gotta give this to Kenny

props to kenny for stepping up his standard for LLL, you've improved a lot I think, but to be fair you were lucky you didnt get an on-form Hens

v/Kenny


ironsid's not in yet so it's 3-2 to Hens

[Big Question]

I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy
cool, all pretty good hits, some nice fresh shit

You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
liked this alot but i seen a lot of photo type lines which lessened it a bit but good flip

vs

...ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
i dont bang for the sport, fuck a clay disc and a shotty
after 30 minutes of sex i'm skeet shooting all over your moms body
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly
i'll pummel you whiteboy 'til my hands hurt,
just to black your eyes so spit n lay cant cry about a double standard

shit... nice job kenny. i thoght hens had this easy but you came with some nice swagger it had a spitacular feel to it with the wordin n all.

ok so i got you equal i think. hens was slightly wittier but kenny had more swag and dare i say edgeding the wording too. its hard to call, but ima go with kenny for the fact his style was more switched up throughout wheras hens lines were all a similar style like
"knocked me of my seat...bllah, blah, blah..", baby bommer...blah, blah, blah etc.
not in a negative way john coz you came nice too but i think that gave kenny the lil edge.

v/kenny

[Jay. Walker]

1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
I hate to derail your future, n' it's not that I'm hating your rappin'.
If you put all ya money on the track, no wonder it's a train wreck waiting to happen.
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.

all that was nice.


vs.


ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly


dunno why you only went 18 when he dropped more first. nice showing, you're definitely getting really good, fast - so props. woulda been tough to decide on if you came with one more nice hitter, and maybe you would've if you matched him, but i thin john out did you.

vote hens

[Attack of the Muff]

Hidden Content:

I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
(nice)
I can't drop a no show verse? but you hope that I will decline.
Shit, at least I know I can half ass, be rusty, not vote n' I'll STILL be fine.
(comedy but impossible..amounts to decent)
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
(hah wtf is spit talkin about..hens is being sarcastic..hes not complimenting kenny)
I hate to derail your future, n' it's not that I'm hating your rappin'.
If you put all ya money on the track, no wonder it's a train wreck waiting to happen.
(ehh not feelin)
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
(coo)
You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
(eh)
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
(ok)
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.
(cool)
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.
(ok)
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.
(ehh predictable..when i battled kenny i considered using something like this but i backed down coz i thought it mighta been played...so me seeing it now..doesnt impress much)

...ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
(cool)
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
(nice..i already told u i liked this shita)
i dont bang for the sport, fuck a clay disc and a shotty
after 30 minutes of sex i'm skeet shooting all over your moms body
(eh did u word this differently..coz now it seems less effective for some reason)
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
(hah comedy ..i just had a visual of jamie foxx dressed up as a ugly bitch)
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
(heh cool..nice misdirection)
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
(dope wp..why havent i thought of this)
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly
(cool concept..worded swaggy-like)
i expect this to go the distance, your endurance is high as shit
because all you do is take other peoples style and run with it
(ok)
i'll pummel you whiteboy 'til my hands hurt,
just to black your eyes so spit n lay cant cry about a double standard

(ok)



damn pretty cool battle.. ima have to pick the quotables out to decide h/o


hens

I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.


vs

...ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly


wow 12 lines that were quoteable by kenny.. to hens' 8...alot of your lines were just decent..like the quickdraw was a eh concept..but ur wording made it aiight..negative shots was an example of the same.. kenny really came with here.. i tried to warn you hens..i dunno if you took me serious considering your opener..i dont lie my nigga i warned you coz i was serious

i really and honestly think kenny took this.. with his best verse ive seen on this site from him

good job..good showing by both

i really tried to avoid voting onthis...but i voted on every other battle thats up and i need 1 more link...fuck

its a toss up on preference tho..

v/kenny

[Qualm]

I'll be takin' that with humor, quit fakin' with the rumors.
I KNOW he's exceptional.
.. must be why it took him an entire career just to make it out of Junior.
ok
I can't drop a no show verse? but you hope that I will decline.
Shit, at least I know I can half ass, be rusty, not vote n' I'll STILL be fine.
nice swag
1-2? You're on a nosedive, I don't feel like you're style is gaining.
If G's force knocked me off my seat, I musta passed the first stage of pilot training.
ok
I hate to derail your future, n' it's not that I'm hating your rappin'.
If you put all ya money on the track, no wonder it's a train wreck waiting to happen.
cool imagery
You ain't shit. I don't care what cats say about your writin' ability.
If he's the Spark the league needs, it hit a trail of gas leadin' to the sites credibility.
cool
You ain't good enough, get a job if you plan to envelop the bills.
Kids got so many 'negative shots' photographers gave up tryin to develop ur skills.
nice..complex concept executed well
You DON'T own a gun. n' to be a killer, you have to start fast.
Besides, your Quickdraw ability wasn't even good enough to pass your art class.
ok
If we go by generation's it can help us both uncover this segment.
I'm not a baby-boomer, but I fuckin wish u exploded when ur mother was pregnant.
ehh kinda corny
With Olympics in the rear view, your heart resists the pace.
I'll leave you walkin so staggered, officials can use you to start a distance race.
good
Popular with the females? Nah, you can't shake the slickness boy.
Some consider you a doll, I just remember Ken as the fake and dickless toy.
lol


vs

...ya words are in sync with your actions J & never depart it
your drops blow and finish the job that your mouth initially started
haha
you should be polished by now, what happened?, my verses are 10s
yours' are refined..cited and jailed for being wack once again
cool
i dont bang for the sport, fuck a clay disc and a shotty
after 30 minutes of sex i'm skeet shooting all over your moms body
ehh
& when it comes to your taste in women just take a look at your lover
she's a fox, and i didnt even KNOW Jamie had an older brother
hmm ok
I damage using aggression, how're u at an advantage's the question
well you'll get a leg up, after a few months of therapy sessions
nah not feelin
stick to recycling, you're futile attempts at fresh are never good
but give hens a concept & heelflip it faster than tony hawk ever could
cool wp man
im quick to donate to a cause, you'll find out as soon as u meet me
be glad im just chipping in and not knocking out your tooth completly
nice
i expect this to go the distance, your endurance is high as shit
because all you do is take other peoples style and run with it
nah ..not feeling
i'll pummel you whiteboy 'til my hands hurt,
just to black your eyes so spit n lay cant cry about a double standard
nah

Wow. It really seems a shame one these battlers gotta take the high road after this cause both came correct for the majority of each verse. Both came with some enjoyable reads. Kenny surprised me here, like a lot. No offence but this was a pretty solid verse however Hens came pretty solid too. I felt he had a bit more wit and complexity in his lines. Liked the way he worded the train wreck, spark the league and negative shots lines. I dunno Hens just seemed a lot cleaner to read. Not that many lapses. Kenny fell slightly of towards the end imo, started really well there but just at the end he kinda dropped the pace I felt. I think it's a preference of style really here also. Both completely different but equally good. Anyways I'm gonna give it to Hens for coming more consistent.

v/ Hens