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    An Evening in Chicago

    An Evening in Chicago

    Ineffective rain
    Drips silently
    And makes me think
    my bayview window
    is melting;
    Unsettling feelings
    Draining
    But not washing away.


    Vengeful London weather
    Has overtaken the sun’s resistance;
    with cool air
    It forces down on us
    like fashion:
    “Gray is the new yellow”

    So say the drops...

    Tyrannical drops
    That form an inflamed medley
    of carnival colors
    where traffic lights
    attempt to pass through my window
    and give me light.

    Their gangs form pools
    on the roads
    where they slow down cars
    and spray pedestrians;
    drowning out all noise
    from below.

    Muffling the life around me.


    But as the humid air
    aggressively flows around me
    it unwittingly gives passage
    to olfactory activators;
    Sensory receipts
    from the karaoke restaurant next door
    that tell me
    greasy chicken is still favored
    on Friday nights.

    On the last day
    of a long, dark week.


    Middle aged couples
    Unwinding with Chinese cuisine
    keeping conversation and drinks light.
    Laughing together quietly.

    My mind turns
    and soon
    I am swiveling on a stool
    next to this couple.
    Instantly the room is warmer
    and barely audible decibels
    report that the man with the baritone voice
    is covering “Sharp Dressed Man”

    The classic guitar riffs
    stir vague childhood memories;
    blurred by age
    but detailed enough to make me smile.


    Yet something else is stirred...

    A loud whistle precedes the swinging shut
    of my window
    As my smile fades
    with the sounds of karaoke music.
    Sporadic cracks of angry thunder
    and increasing winds
    ensure that I will hear no more tonight.


    and suddenly
    I am back in my apartment
    on my couch.
    Very alone.
    And convinced


    I am where the storm wants me to be.



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    Last edited by Del; October 17th, 2011 at 09:54 PM
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    Re: An Evening in Chicago

    Ineffective rain
    Drips silently
    And makes me think
    my bayview window
    is melting;
    Unsettling feelings
    Draining
    But not washing away.


    Don't most of the people that are in the world feel that they're not sure.


    You have to get that on your own, step it up then I'll take you seriously.
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    Re: An Evening in Chicago

    ^ good feedback bro
    Last edited by Del; September 23rd, 2012 at 08:48 PM
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