GL
I think you said 5 bars, 1-2 hours?
If not, that's what we're going with. Cuz I'd rather go under what you said than over.
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Mr. Style
High And Drunk
GL
I think you said 5 bars, 1-2 hours?
If not, that's what we're going with. Cuz I'd rather go under what you said than over.
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We've peeped your last battle, saying you can fight, how?
Cuz it's like Ramirez hit a Grand Slam the way Manny is killin you right now
Braggin about your bitches here wouldn't be smart, b
Last time a chick was feelin' High and Drunk.. just came from one of my parties
You aint a threat, so you aint worth the last fight
I would say Let's-Beef.. but you'd go n try n' get your riders from that site
You're obese n never pull, you got chicks hooked on? please..
Last time someone 'pushed your buttons'.. was helping your fatass put on jeans
Thug claimin' to be black.. See me destroy this cocky white
Cuz i'll leave you with sucha Crooked Eye.. that rapper will try to sue for copyright
.. Cute stache, dude.. You look like you belong wrapped in a skirt And that's not the half of it, jerk...
.. With all the "Pic Battles" you do ..
.. You could sell your fucking hard drive to the Catholic Church!
.. Style's stuck in the closet! "MR. PRADA! COME OUT YET?"
.. Lookin' at wood's got Style sprung like Lady Gaga's New Outfit!
.. How you gonna get votes? When I'm up against this nerd, who's lookin'?
.. 'Specially when I got quick murder cookin ..
.. I win matches against Style like every hipster in Brooklyn!
.. FUCK! Quit being so flagrant, chump! Lookin' like the first straight guy some gay picked up...
.. Then he put Style in the back seat with his 8 INCH PUMPS!
UH! UHHH!! Yeah... that's what's up ;-)
.. I apologize for bashing your queerness, homie.
.. But if I'm even 50% off ..
.. Those voters are gonna mark Style down as Clearance ONLY!
Im voting on shit... but I don't have 50 posts.
So you're all gonna have to take my word on it.
Uppin
Uppin
Okay, This was an alright battle...both had their ups and downs, but one had more downs than the other ultimately leading me to picking the winner of this match...
Style - Ups - Decent punchlines - Nice personals - consistency
Downnnns - your lines were stretched, just a little to drawn out for me
HD - Ups - funny punchlines - creativity - effort
Downnns - felt your lines were way stretched as well, I could really do without the highlights and underlines, feel like im reading a scripted grindtime match, no offense, just my opinon lol (this wasn't a factor in me choosing)..and work on your consistency..structure was a little crazy, but honestly didn't bother me too much.
Best Lines From STYLE
We've peeped your last battle, saying you can fight, how?
Cuz it's like Ramirez hit a Grand Slam the way Manny is killin you right now
Braggin about your bitches here wouldn't be smart, b
Last time a chick was feelin' High and Drunk.. just came from one of my parties
Thug claimin' to be black.. See me destroy this cocky white
Cuz i'll leave you with sucha Crooked Eye.. that rapper will try to sue for copyright
Best Lines From HD
.. Cute stache, dude.. You look like you belong wrapped in a skirt And that's not the half of it, jerk...
.. With all the "Pic Battles" you do ..
.. You could sell your fucking hard drive to the Catholic Church!
.. How you gonna get votes? When I'm up against this nerd, who's lookin'?
.. 'Specially when I got quick murder cookin ..
.. I win matches against Style like every hipster in Brooklyn!
.. FUCK! Quit being so flagrant, chump! Lookin' like the first straight guy some gay picked up...
.. Then he put Style in the back seat with his 8 INCH PUMPS!
UH! UHHH!! Yeah... that's what's up ;-)
.. I apologize for bashing your queerness, homie.
.. But if I'm even 50% off ..
.. Those voters are gonna mark Style down as Clearance ONLY!
I know this may seem crazy, but all in all HD had the most creative and consistent punches...This was a battle of personals versus punches...and the personals just didn't knock as hard..maybe cause he's new that could've played a roll in it...IDk but either way this was a decent read..good luck guys
V/HD
Braggin about your bitches here wouldn't be smart, b
Last time a chick was feelin' High and Drunk.. just came from one of my parties
You aint a threat, so you aint worth the last fight
I would say Let's-Beef.. but you'd go n try n' get your riders from that site
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A whole lotta wack LB shit
Very weak battle. Mr. Style, none of your setups were relevant to your punches with the exception of the High And Drunk name play, which was pretty dope by the way. Only reason I quoted that other bar was 'cause it was true. NinetyOne is an obvious dickrider. Fuck outta here with that shit. High And Drunk, change your wack-ass structure and learn how to throw a punch before partakin' in another battle. And tell your lil dickriders to get the fuck out. Thanks.
Vote: Mr. Style
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We've peeped your last battle, saying you can fight, how?
Cuz it's like Ramirez hit a Grand Slam the way Manny is killin you right now
Braggin about your bitches here wouldn't be smart, b
Last time a chick was feelin' High and Drunk.. just came from one of my parties
You aint a threat, so you aint worth the last fight
I would say Let's-Beef.. but you'd go n try n' get your riders from that site
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um, nothing quotable and cut that bold, italicized, underline stuff out please.
H.A.D. you got some things to work on, such as line structure mainly, just write your lines down without any spaces and don't bold, italicize, and underline your rhyme scheme. Pretty weak battle, Mr. Style had better consistency and much harder punches in this one.
v - mr. style
EDIT = Can't poll my vote, mr. style is in my crew but consider this feedback.
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Braggin about your bitches here wouldn't be smart, b
Last time a chick was feelin' High and Drunk.. just came from one of my parties
lol this line caught my attention. good battle
NIGHTMARES
... I've never been on Let's Beef?
I don't get what's going on here, lol.
Did he throw an actual punch in one of his bars?
Originally Posted by Mr. Style
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vote:styles. he came consistent the whole verse. with decent hits.. i wasnt feeling any of HND'S bars except his last one. i think once he gets the style down here, he'll be a threat
We've peeped your last battle, saying you can fight, how?
Cuz it's like Ramirez hit a Grand Slam the way Manny is killin you right now
Braggin about your bitches here wouldn't be smart, b
Last time a chick was feelin' High and Drunk.. just came from one of my parties
Thug claimin' to be black.. See me destroy this cocky white
Cuz i'll leave you with sucha Crooked Eye.. that rapper will try to sue for copyright
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.. I apologize for bashing your queerness, homie.
.. But if I'm even 50% off ..
.. Those voters are gonna mark Style down as Clearance ONLY!
this was one sided.. H.A.D. comes off as a longbar head from way bac, but the only bar i quoted from him might even be played here..
style had a few zinger here and there, and had a better structure.
he gets my vote just for more consistency
v-style.
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