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Jeffry
Mac.
10 lines
24h
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Lol vote jeffry
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
okay did it quick
For battlin me he'd smoke some outdated weed
And he represents ghost write, when he says "its 5min keyed"
He never had a girlfriend, -he- died of boring
Thats why he started to battle me cuz hes always minus scoring
I'd rather die than battling Jeff again
Comparin Jeff n' The King, we know jeff's even nothin for his reign
If you wanna battle Mac get in the line
We dont need a Jeff pic, cuz i always see it when the toilet shines
We all wanna know why you keep battling newbies
But we already know he's gettin his lines from porn movies
k..
mac neva had wifey, he is a bitch nigga, you'll neva get a hoe
so ill fuck all the chicks he thinks are "pretty" n run him over in my tahoe
his rhymes are terrible, damn u is a hero with chad kroeger n josey scott shit
chad from nickle back, n josey scott from saliva <- is sumthin u cant produce to spit
see cuz i come dope, day in and day out, ask the mods if you dont belive me
i could help u elevate mac, but im on my shine, n id never give a hand to help the needy
im keyin this like a GG, im a champ mac, so put up ya dukes
tried bein the hero fightin a bully to impress some chicks but they run away from you
this is a filler line, i saw u on the mountain n ur face was rosy u was lookin dead
actually im murking you in this battle, as im sippin on some mountain dew code red.
quit viewin this shit n actually vote
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marvelous won hands down.... better verse all around, better set ups better punches better scheme, but still basic... keep working on it both has potential
^ wtf @ voting for Marvelous? he isn't in this battle dude!
anyways Jeffry came clearly better in all categories. Mac dude work on ur disses!
v/Jeff
This was a one sided battle...Mac, you should really read up on some battles and really take the time to grasp the concept of a personal and punch because i don't see anything close to being one tbh...no hate. Jeffry's verse wasn't anything special, but he had attempts and ideas that were weak punches but still has the right ideas of a battle verse.
v/Jeffry for reasons above
Um physics, marv aint here homie, bump 2
V.Jeff..one sided
Can't vote but honest feed back, jeffrey took this down. Better punch attempts, wen't all hitting hard, but def far superior attempts and htis.
Mac
For battlin me he'd smoke some outdated weed
And he represents ghost write, when he says "its 5min keyed"
i can see ur trying to develop ur concepts a little better here mac but doesnt make sense on this finisher if something is keyed its freestyled quickly so i dont see how ghostwriting would take affect u feel me???
He never had a girlfriend, -he- died of boring
Thats why he started to battle me cuz hes always minus scoring
he never had a gf his life is very boring
then u couldve used the minus scoring concept as a metaphore making it compatable to the setup
sexlife like Terry Francona see him gettin kicked out cuz he minus the scoring
some shit like that
I'd rather die than battling Jeff again
Comparin Jeff n' The King, we know jeff's even nothin for his reign
little better because ur saying he doesnt reign king
If you wanna battle Mac get in the line
We dont need a Jeff pic, cuz i always see it when the toilet shines
lol ok little better
We all wanna know why you keep battling newbies
But we already know he's gettin his lines from porn movies
concepts dont even match here
Jeff
mac neva had wifey, he is a bitch nigga, you'll neva get a hoe
so ill fuck all the chicks he thinks are "pretty" n run him over in my tahoe
ok
his rhymes are terrible, damn u is a hero with chad kroeger n josey scott shit
chad from nickle back, n josey scott from saliva <- is sumthin u cant produce to spit
nah
see cuz i come dope, day in and day out, ask the mods if you dont belive me
i could help u elevate mac, but im on my shine, n id never give a hand to help the needy
ok lol
im keyin this like a GG, im a champ mac, so put up ya dukes
tried bein the hero fightin a bully to impress some chicks but they run away from you
ok
this is a filler line, i saw u on the mountain n ur face was rosy u was lookin dead
actually im murking you in this battle, as im sippin on some mountain dew code red.
ok cool concept because the rosy/red and the moutain reference
V/Jeff
just clearly has more experience in the battlefield here
i can see mac trying to develop his concepts a little better but they have to match up and make sense. like knux said before the english i understand is a weakness so i aint gonaa hate because im actually proud that ur fukin attempting battles. just like i said make sure ur 1st line and second line match up as far as concept goes.
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