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Your life is over, peasant, I’ll get this coward deaded
Only time N is before P is talkin about his golden shower fetish
You was a beast at one time, shouldn’t of came back, sista
Usually people that are in their Prime wouldn’t get spanked by THAT nigga
He bad for the RB battle scene, we really don’t need him
N.r isn’t going to Cry for votes, but the other vets can expect a PM
You believe he’s getting neck? Guess its close to the truth
Cuz while KP bang hoes who into fashion, this fag will just borrow their hoops
Dude you never been hot, you’ll suffer a liars fate
By careers end you’ll have throwbacks…that’ll be aimed at a fire place
Dude never been near the dope, he haven’t even scored yet
Last time this loser rolled some papers, he threw them at the neighbors doorstep
U don’t want beef like cattle, this lil bytch fragile
chances of u winning are soo Slim, they’d mistake his death for this battle
you drop fire on a Mic? How the hell u configure that
When you rhyme we think about Nas, Never's, wtf's, and this nigga wack
I'll burn this weird hoe, and scatter this niggas remains
Everything about him is off the wall... well except for his brains
Nothing about P's style is cool,his women tend to treat him harsh
Dude must have a delay of game... the way he makes chicks retreat 5 yards
Kp's a fag, let it be known he spits like a 100% bitch
He failed to get a rise outta me... but his mother definitely did
Bitch you make Rb your prime objective and choose to gloat
When in reality he always picks up where he left off... thats a garbage mans oath
Ya punches are "meh" at best, none of ya verses ever been gifted
And the way this faggot stick and move, it reminds me of how dahmer got convicted
Im skitzo in these battles, and wackness like you helps me to cope
Even if he had a split personality... it would just move my record to 2 & 0
You were successful as Dezined Thawts but ya run came to and end
Now KP has the "bar code theory"... we see the same lines over and over again
Battle of the week ? Yep, picture that, you'll be famous for this loss sit back
Watch me capture the moment... mother, sister, and ya daughter like a fuckin' kidnap
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almost didnt work b/c N is before P in the aphabetYour life is over, peasant, I’ll get this coward deaded
Only time N is before P is talkin about his golden shower fetish
You was a beast at one time, shouldn’t of came back, sista
Usually people that are in their Prime wouldn’t get spanked by THAT niggathis one is near being forced but i'll give you the quoteDude you never been hot, you’ll suffer a liars fate
By careers end you’ll have throwbacks…that’ll be aimed at a fire place
N.r, none of your concepts worked. KnowP had better punches. i dont know what else to say. this wasnt a good battle. N.r, work on your concepts... read some old sayings or something. then work on your wordplay so the punches are not forced.
vote- KnowP
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Your life is over, peasant, I’ll get this coward deaded
Only time N is before P is talkin about his golden shower fetish
You was a beast at one time, shouldn’t of came back, sista
Usually people that are in their Prime wouldn’t get spanked by THAT nigga
vs.
Bitch you make Rb your prime objective and choose to gloat
When in reality he always picks up where he left off... thats a garbage mans oath
You were successful as Dezined Thawts but ya run came to and end
Now KP has the "bar code theory"... we see the same lines over and over again
this was a good and close battle
structure: tie
flow: tie
punches: tie
personals: KnowP
metaphors: tie
multis: n/a
i say a rematch is needed but this time i give the vote to KnowP for more personals. Both need to work on they closer but other then that verses was solid
v/know
uppin...
damn slept on dudes huh???
Know P
Your life is over, peasant, I’ll get this coward deaded
Only time N is before P is talkin about his golden shower fetish
didnt really feel concept on finisher p golden shower bit played
You was a beast at one time, shouldn’t of came back, sista
Usually people that are in their Prime wouldn’t get spanked by THAT nigga
lol ok nice personal
He bad for the RB battle scene, we really don’t need him
N.r isn’t going to Cry for votes, but the other vets can expect a PM
ok lol
You believe he’s getting neck? Guess its close to the truth
Cuz while KP bang hoes who into fashion, this fag will just borrow their hoops
nah
Dude you never been hot, you’ll suffer a liars fate
By careers end you’ll have throwbacks…that’ll be aimed at a fire place
ok cool flip off setup nice concept
Dude never been near the dope, he haven’t even scored yet
Last time this loser rolled some papers, he threw them at the neighbors doorstep
ok lol
U don’t want beef like cattle, this lil bytch fragile
chances of u winning are soo Slim, they’d mistake his death for this battle
not feeling this finisher
you drop fire on a Mic? How the hell u configure that
When you rhyme we think about Nas, Never's, wtf's, and this nigga wack
nah
NR
I'll burn this weird hoe, and scatter this niggas remains
Everything about him is off the wall... well except for his brains
pretty direct here raw concept
Nothing about P's style is cool,his women tend to treat him harsh
Dude must have a delay of game... the way he makes chicks retreat 5 yards
ok lol
Kp's a fag, let it be known he spits like a 100% bitch
He failed to get a rise outta me... but his mother definitely did
nah
Bitch you make Rb your prime objective and choose to gloat
When in reality he always picks up where he left off... thats a garbage mans oath
lol nice concept
Ya punches are "meh" at best, none of ya verses ever been gifted
And the way this faggot stick and move, it reminds me of how dahmer got convicted
wow lmao
Im skitzo in these battles, and wackness like you helps me to cope
Even if he had a split personality... it would just move my record to 2 & 0
nah
You were successful as Dezined Thawts but ya run came to and end
Now KP has the "bar code theory"... we see the same lines over and over again
ok nice personal
Battle of the week ? Yep, picture that, you'll be famous for this loss sit back
Watch me capture the moment... mother, sister, and ya daughter like a fuckin' kidnap
nah
I dunno here this was an ill battle i got both tied in quotes in my opinion
Know p u had the personal with primetime i found funnny and also the personal on the voting. the fireplace and throwback concept was cool and i found the newspaper at the neighbors doorstep funny. other then that dude i thought ur opener was a little played on the p/goldenshower concept and ur last two bars thought missed as well. NR ur opener was pretty raw and direct. I also enjoyed the humor u had in ur concepts a little more. u also had the one personal that hit as well. ur 3rd bar 6th and ur closer were misses to me. When it comes down to it i got know p with the two personal lines and one humor line and NR with a direct opener and overall humor.
When it comes to it i have to give this to N.R. I enjoyed his humor in his verse a little more and thought he was a little more consistent and his opener set it off. Goood battle from both. No hate to know P just felt he had a good start then fell of towrds the end of his drop
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I got N.R taking this one also, knowP had horrible execution on some of his
Cool concepts N.R had a better more well rounded verse here enjoyed reading both but
P had like 1 personal rest were meh, and n.r had maybe2-3 I liked so he had more creativity and sting
That's why he gets my vote.
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