Mic S Feat. D-Money- Hard Hitter Prod. By Mr.Brown

[Emperor F Ect]

Mic S Feat. D-Money- Hard Hitter Prod. By Mr.Brown
[SOUNDCLICK]11194163[/SOUNDCLICK]

Imma hard hitter eyes left in glaucoma
cuz I'm coming for my title, Rocky Balboa
My lyrics king kobra worthy of diplomas
Way my punches hit hard make ya go in a coma
Im versatile, flexabile somethin like yoga
I arc when I spit flows and split em like Noah cuz
Imma hard hitter eyes left in glaucoma
cuz I'm coming for my title, Rocky Balboa

Im a "phenomenon" rip ya "face/off", "john travolta"
I "pulp fiction" when my punch hit ya lungs, Pneumonia
Im cancer with a rapture thats growing, carcinoma
Im what people hate makin the stink face like ammonia
cuz im potent with what I say, Lyrics way in outerspace
Cuz my flow gives life you can say it is a flower vase
I make people hoot and holler same noise that owls make
Cuz im ill, & I numb up the track like how powder taste
People Hate wit a sourface, imma warhead
a warvet with a hardhead turnin heads leavin soar necks
Boys got foreheads size of george foreman with horseheads
Cuz they all got big heads size of dinosaur eggs
So I bake em like cornbread give em heat, exothermic
I leave people with aphasia cuz my raps leave em wordless
i spit it so perfect with a purpose, imma guillotine
fresh as listerine im nicotine cuz u stay listenin

Imma hard hitter eyes left in glaucoma
cuz I'm coming for my title, Rocky Balboa
My lyrics king kobra worthy of diplomas
Way my punches hit hard make ya go in a coma
Im versatile, flexabile somethin like yoga
I arc when I spit flows and split em like Noah cuz
Imma hard hitter eyes left in glaucoma
cuz I'm coming for my title, Rocky Balboa

Im colder than the arctic shore fuck ham imma carnivore
Imma god of war bringin more dope than narcotic stores,
Imma lord with the flows and i flow to ya speakers
flows in the beakers - mixing more soul than some sneakers
on a hunt like easter cuz im eager to hold down music
combinations of music on point like the ends of toothpick
Im unique when i speak but I have my own technique
i take critique each week and leave boys dusted like antiques
My rap physique is mystique at a high peek of my pinnacle
With a flow so digital leaving 3-D tracks of visuals
To rappers im invisible, they're typical - im merciless
like trainin bras theyre purposeless weight on my shoulders, hercules
I go walt disney I go Mickey the way i wheel this beat
I spit heat, im throwing it all at the game, Strip Tease
im that ill, Disease! yea Believe it or not, Ripleys -
I murdered the track so You'd swear it was 6 feet

Imma hard hitter eyes left in glaucoma
cuz I'm coming for my title, Rocky Balboa
My lyrics king kobra worthy of diplomas
Way my punches hit hard make ya go in a coma
Im versatile, flexabile somethin like yoga
I arc when I spit flows and split em like Noah cuz
Imma hard hitter eyes left in glaucoma
cuz I'm coming for my title, Rocky Balboa

-(D. Money Verse)

Imma hard hitter eyes left in glaucoma
cuz I'm coming for my title, Rocky Balboa
My lyrics king kobra worthy of diplomas
Way my punches hit hard make ya go in a coma
Im versatile, flexabile somethin like yoga
I arc when I spit flows and split em like Noah cuz
Imma hard hitter eyes left in glaucoma
cuz I'm coming for my title, Rocky Balboa


(Getting links will have em up in a few minutes)

[Emperor F Ect]

My links
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...893/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...99#post8311899
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...718/index.html

[Phiend]

Your flow is really good, i like it.
But, your syllables are barely keeping up. Fuck it, you pulled it off lol.
Your lyrics are really dope.
In the 2nd verse, your structure was a bit off, though, it still sounds pretty cool.
And the hook is pretty catchy haha.

D Moneys verse went in too.

[Emperor F Ect]

Your flow is really good, i like it.
But, your syllables are barely keeping up. Fuck it, you pulled it off lol.
Your lyrics are really dope.
In the 2nd verse, your structure was a bit off, though, it still sounds pretty cool.
And the hook is pretty catchy haha.

D Moneys verse went in too.

I noticed that too.. due to the mixing - but I fixed it up (I hope lol).. just waiting for D Money to get the update so he can overlay his vocals again nd i can update on soundclick

[Phiend]

I noticed that too.. due to the mixing - but I fixed it up (I hope lol).. just waiting for D Money to get the update so he can overlay his vocals again nd i can update on soundclick

lol iight man, keep me updated!

-Phiend

[Joe Boston]

loving the first verse man flow was nice as fuck some ill metaphores vocab was nice personality was ill on the mic as well as energy. 2nd verse coulda had a little more energy and flow overall was a little choppy. D moneys verse was ill as shit too lyrically was very nice. The hook was real nice too very catchy. overall nice track here. both have ill potential. like to see more.
rtf thanks
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...043/index.html

[Emperor F Ect]

appreciate the feed man, imma get to your link right now

[spacejam]

slow it down!
your lyricism shows a lot of hard work and your vision came to life but i feel like in the delivery you're sometimes out of breath. sometimes the way you approach the beat has a huge effect on your style and you're spitting so hard and fast on it, but it's not easy to recognize your lines and let that wordplay really get into the ears, you don't need to pack SO much into each bar. well done

[spacejam]

double smh

[L.E]

This was pretty solid man.

I thought the flow was on for the most part, but in some spots it sounds real real rushed and its not as smooth as you are wanting it to sound. I know what you are going for, and you are close to hitting the mark, just gotta tighten it up in some spots. The hook was pretty banging though, it was catchy.

Third verse was decent, the vocal quality was a lot worse though.

Mixing could be a lot better, shit is clipping all over the place, but for what it is, this is a pretty solid track.

Keep it up man.

[miracle]

i was feeling this..when u first dropped in i felt it was choppy but it turn around quickly...nice track dude..lyrics were tight..hook was decent
n the quality could have been better but overall this had a nice vibe to it..keep dropping