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    Spell brother...

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    Brother, I see you..
    Hiding from truth's that have been unraveled,
    putting on this front - that never backs you up.
    A lie becomes two, one for me and vice versa;
    the hurt is minimal on both ends of this stick -
    it's the tree rooted from our families,
    rotting from the inside out - in this reverse world.

    Brother, I hear you..
    Screaming from another day, rushing away from shelter.
    Your confidence lacks hardy; each dose is too much
    to watch. I'll listen & converse while you ignore me.
    Be this machine, mechanized in hell - friend, fiend.
    When your horns protrude, don't let them poke you
    in the ass - that might hurt as much as it has family.

    Brother, I smell you..
    Something's fishy, everyone has caught on..
    Reeling in an invisible shark is tough, especially
    the bite backs, or back stabs in modern lingo.

    Brother, I feel you..
    Wanting the best but providing the worst is just,
    to your mind - scrambled eggs is an equal comparison.
    Financially you're poor & paying more than life -
    it wastes away into a never ending drain,
    but wouldn't you love that...
    They deal you nothing but troubles,
    too bad Deal or No Deal isn't an option clear enough
    for ABC to understand.

    Brother, you taste it...
    Just spit it out.
    Sneeze,
    at least think about what is going on.
    Where have we come?
    Years of memories,
    forgotten behind a prescription.
    Hours of laughter now showered
    by unclean substances.
    A childhood - now broken,
    for what?
    A spell that is nearly irreversible?
    I guess I created a monster,
    & I've cast’d my spell on you...
    But if I could go back in time as a witch,
    I'd now turn you into a frog...

    R.I.P Jared Christopher
    June 9, 1992 - Present
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    Re: Spell brother...

    Dedicated to someone I consider closer than family. My brother, Jared.
    He has become a victom to drug abuse in small town, USA.
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    Very deep track bro. Jared isnt Heychoo is he? Eitherway sorry for your loss. The language and diction in this poem was really creative and original. Reminds me of Jim Morrisons poetry. I really wish i could say more but on a beat up droid its a bitch. Deep piece. Hit up mine.

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    He hasn't died, yet. But the road he is going down only leads to jails, institutions, or death. This isn't Heychoo, but we are both mutual friends with Jared. Thanks man.
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    Damn this is straight emotional man fire through brimstone with the emotion is laid flat man. This poem I can't critique this man cause it's straight reality no need to criticize cause this was a brilliant piece with great storytelling with splendid crazy emotion

    Rtf on a reality and deep piece to me as well man
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    Thank you as always man!
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    Re: Spell brother...

    Yeah you know..
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