That's Fine Featuring JR

[C.Wrighter]

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[Joe Boston]

beat not bad really liking the deep drums in it. first verse to me sounded like it didnt match the beat parts seemed a little rushed at points. hook was ok. 2nd verse thought matched the beat really well had the voice for it. cool little track just need to polish up first verse a bit maybe bring more energy and not rush the flow.

[I-M-E]

beats pretty weak..

1st verse def didnt sound like it flowed, delviery was plain jane, lyrics were pretty typical for this type of beat...
hook was baddd.....especially the fast hi hat sounding like a cd skipping.

second verse was real good for this style, voice sounds like soulja slim kinda haha....lyrics were alright, delivery was good for this


i liked the outro

[MC Motion]

the first verse didnt seem like it matched the song, but i did like how you rapped and how it sounded.. maybe on a different beat. really don't know how i feel right now, about this hook ha. it sounds like a decent commercial type track, gonna need a little work to bring it to the next level. i actually do like the hook, it could just use some more dubs to make it stand out.. break down part at the end was cool too.