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check due asap.
Versatile.
Fatal Thoughts
12 lines
due by midnight tonight.
check due asap.
check.
This kid isn't an emcee, he's just a poser in this place
If rap was a track meet, this dude would be at the slowest pace
It's V in this bitch, leave this dude with mad stiches of course
I'm active like i played different sports, leave this kid a corpse
Maniac at rapping, that's me and you nothing but a faker
Talking about ur girl? well i'll just fuck her later
Your rapping isn't shit, nothing to brag or boast about
I'm coming with the heat like i just grabbed the toaster out
Fatal's a pussy, he isn't on my level to be a tough guy
One punch from me and this dude will straight up die
Yea, i'm a beast with lyrics and rhymes, here in his prime
I'd rather cut my ears off then listen to another one of his rhymes
sorry for the late post...
its fine...
I got some attacks to make this pussy hurt for a while
Punch him, then stomp him into the ground and make Vers a tile
Time to murk this child and damn you got a hell of a name
But it doesn't fit you well...
............cuz i'm snatching this win like carmello's chain
C'mon dude, i'm making dough like i was working at a bakery
And the amount of what you got...is not even an 1/8th of me
You got no solid traits to see and all your reps gone
This battle is like a walk through my kitchen...
..........................cuz tile's gettin stepped on
You messaged me to battle, but yet you drop with a late post
I don't care though...cuz you'll get cooked like I made toast
I'll shake this kid like a protein shake, then hit the gym
This dude is such a fucking bitch, now give Fatal his 50th win!
vote, leave linkss
Versatile.
This kid isn't an emcee, he's just a poser in this place
If rap was a track meet, this dude would be at the slowest pace
nah
It's V in this bitch, leave this dude with mad stiches of course
I'm active like i played different sports, leave this kid a corpse
nah
Maniac at rapping, that's me and you nothing but a faker
Talking about ur girl? well i'll just fuck her later
weeeak
Your rapping isn't shit, nothing to brag or boast about
I'm coming with the heat like i just grabbed the toaster out
nah
Fatal's a pussy, he isn't on my level to be a tough guy
One punch from me and this dude will straight up die
basic, no punch factor
Yea, i'm a beast with lyrics and rhymes, here in his prime
I'd rather cut my ears off then listen to another one of his rhymes
usin rhymes x2 didnt really help, overall didnt like the bar
vs
Fatal Thoughts
I got some attacks to make this pussy hurt for a while
Punch him, then stomp him into the ground and make Vers a tile
wp's okay..coulda been alot more dope nd harder hittin imo
Time to murk this child and damn you got a hell of a name
But it doesn't fit you well...
............cuz i'm snatching this win like carmello's chain
didnt feel it
C'mon dude, i'm making dough like i was working at a bakery
And the amount of what you got...is not even an 1/8th of me
statement opener with weak closer, not feelin it
You got no solid traits to see and all your reps gone
This battle is like a walk through my kitchen...
..........................cuz tile's gettin stepped on
eh, its aight..
You messaged me to battle, but yet you drop with a late post
I don't care though...cuz you'll get cooked like I made toast
weak
I'll shake this kid like a protein shake, then hit the gym
This dude is such a fucking bitch, now give Fatal his 50th win!
ya ya..lol
Verdict
i'd give this to Fatal for atleast comin with the punches and addin some sort of creativity in his drop with some ok nameplays nd other shit that seemed to be better than Vers' verse.
vers seemed to not really know how to come direct with some personal shit and start roastin the fuck outta FT, for that..he didnt come ready in my opinion.
enjoyment wise for me it wasnt all that i hoped, but its better than some other wack battles i been seein lately.
y'all keep doin ya thing.
Vote-> Fatal Thoughts
INFEKTED PENZ
Pretty weak all around. Versatile was weaker however, his stuff was basic, did't really seem to grasp the notion of throwing punches.
"One punch from me and this dude will straight up die"
"Talking about ur girl? well i'll just fuck her later"
"I'm active like i played different sports, leave this kid a corpse"
Nothing really hit, and was all very basic and simple. Need to be a bit more creative and come hard hitting.
Fatal at least came with better attempts, "tile's gettin stepped on
" and "Punch him, then stomp him into the ground and make Vers a tile" although he wasn't immune to havign weak lines "cuz you'll get cooked like I made toast"
Overall for better constructed battle verse, and better attempts Fatal takes it.
thanks. bump
V.Fatal/overall better verse...versatile's punches were not strong,they were set up right but not executed hard enough
Fatal all he needed was that first line ez win
Versatile was jus making honey no sting
VOTE: FATAL
thanks...bump 3
lets get this shit closeddd
I got some attacks to make this pussy hurt for a while
Punch him, then stomp him into the ground and make Vers a tile
I'll shake this kid like a protein shake, then hit the gym
This dude is such a fucking bitch, now give Fatal his 50th win!
vs.
nothing
well fatal just needed that first bar.. but finisher was kinda funny lol.. versatile keep practicing n' everything. so i give the win to fatal for obv reasons.
v/fatal
I got some attacks to make this pussy hurt for a while
Punch him, then stomp him into the ground and make Vers a tile
I'll shake this kid like a protein shake, then hit the gym
This dude is such a fucking bitch, now give Fatal his 50th win!
vs.
nothing
well fatal just needed that first bar.. but finisher was kinda funny lol.. versatile keep practicing n' everything. so i give the win to fatal for obv reasons.
v/fatal
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