xXFresHXx vs. Alias minded

[Fresh]

10 Lines Due by 11:59PM Tonight. It is 8:20 where I am.
Keep it below the belt.
Good luck man!

[Fresh]

I'll force this tired rapper to spiral faster downwards
than the entire cast of Howard Sterns should.
This guy is gay, but his style is "straight" wack
The only way hes winning is with votes from his lame claque,
You won't flip this shit little kid, because all you do is talk back,
Closest you'll get to a punchline is by sniffin Chris Niels Jock strap,
You don't stand a chance, and I really don't have to prove it doofus,
Cause you'd have to get smarter just for me to call you stupid,
Thats it, I'm done, now I'll stop shitting on this rapper,
I'ma take my leave now like I was getting off the crapper,

[Fresh]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...353/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...522/index.html

[Alias Minded]

Alright look,

Fresh your soft as shit, my lyrics raw like meat
You a transvestite look a like how you nothing to beat
Im a veteran youngin, you need to get your fucking weight up
Fresh winning is a dream, thats when his verse gets made up
Ive been around, LLL, TNL, you need to get your words right
Back in the day RB made LLL"jr" for your type
Thats why I wrote this in a minute, I got nothin to worry
Ill leave you alone in this thread like Andy from Toy Story
Get it, your my toy.. see im just toyin with you Fresh
How the fuck you spit fire with that listerine on your breath

[Alias Minded]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=470421

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...308/index.html

[Child-Raising Badass]

Fresh your soft as shit, my lyrics raw like meat
You a transvestite look a like how you nothing to beat
Im a veteran youngin, you need to get your fucking weight up
Fresh winning is a dream, thats when his verse gets made up
Ive been around, LLL, TNL, you need to get your words right
Back in the day RB made LLL"jr" for your type
Thats why I wrote this in a minute, I got nothin to worry
Ill leave you alone in this thread like Andy from Toy Story
Get it, your my toy.. see im just toyin with you Fresh
How the fuck you spit fire with that listerine on your breath

vs

Nothing

VOTE DQ'd - explain it better.

v Alias

[Fresh]

^^^^^Thats not a fucking vote you useless twat, all you said was "that vs nothing" get the fuck outta here. I'd be saying the same thing if he voted for me, this isn't bitching about who he voted for this is bitching about how he voted.

[Rosetti Frost]

I'll force this tired rapper to spiral faster downwards
than the entire cast of Howard Sterns should.

eh

This guy is gay, but his style is "straight" wack
The only way hes winning is with votes from his lame claque,

ehh..its aight

You won't flip this shit little kid, because all you do is talk back,
Closest you'll get to a punchline is by sniffin Chris Niels Jock strap,

eh

You don't stand a chance, and I really don't have to prove it doofus,
Cause you'd have to get smarter just for me to call you stupid,

lol…I thought this was your best line so far

Thats it, I'm done, now I'll stop shitting on this rapper,
I'ma take my leave now like I was getting off the crapper,

ehh…not a strong finish.



vs.



Fresh your soft as shit, my lyrics raw like meat
You a transvestite look a like how you nothing to beat

aight

Im a veteran youngin, you need to get your fucking weight up
Fresh winning is a dream, thats when his verse gets made up

eh

Ive been around, LLL, TNL, you need to get your words right
Back in the day RB made LLL"jr" for your type

nice punch…I've was here back in the days..I remember seeing that

Thats why I wrote this in a minute, I got nothin to worry
Ill leave you alone in this thread like Andy from Toy Story

nice..

Get it, your my toy.. see im just toyin with you Fresh
How the fuck you spit fire with that listerine on your breath

aight closer




both had their strong points, and weak points..IMO this had to come down to consistency…thats why my vote goes to..


v - Alias minded

I can see what Fresh was going for at times, but Alias was more consistent.

[Fresh]

Up + Chris Niel is the enforcer for the Ottawa Senators, and he punches people alot, thats what that joke means, kinda lame but it does have substance. @Rosetti Frost

[Alias Minded]

@...Celph Taut , ‎@Art. , @‎Brian Pumper , ‎@Child-Raising Badass , ‎@Chrit. , @‎Dadiator , ‎@DEV , ‎@DjFlame , @‎God of War , @‎JimmyBones , ‎@kungpow , ‎@Money Mayweather , ‎@Mordycai , ‎@Phalanx , @‎Ridiculous , ‎@SmokaJoka , ‎@Terrance Joekerr , @‎The Real Spit , @‎Toobzilla , ‎@Untold. Need two votes to close this whose tryna to take a second and vote

[Alias Minded]

2 more votes and it's over don't be lazy
@kungpow @Dadiator

[The Great Father]

xxfreshxx
I'll force this tired rapper to spiral faster downwards
than the entire cast of Howard Sterns should.
That show did fall off a bit.

This guy is gay, but his style is "straight" wack
The only way hes winning is with votes from his lame claque,
Should've continued from the first line here.

You won't flip this shit little kid, because all you do is talk back,
Closest you'll get to a punchline is by sniffin Chris Niels Jock strap,
Terrible imagery... don't do this.

You don't stand a chance, and I really don't have to prove it doofus,
Cause you'd have to get smarter just for me to call you stupid,
I like the concept.

Thats it, I'm done, now I'll stop shitting on this rapper,
I'ma take my leave now like I was getting off the crapper,
I get what you were trying to do, but it didn't come out like you may have intended. Are you pregnant?

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Alias Minded
Fresh your soft as shit, my lyrics raw like meat
You a transvestite look a like how you nothing to beat
This had potential in it's idea, but didn't come out right.

Im a veteran youngin, you need to get your fucking weight up
Fresh winning is a dream, thats when his verse gets made up
well... not quite.

Ive been around, LLL, TNL, you need to get your words right
Back in the day RB made LLL"jr" for your type
LLL jr... that was fun.

Thats why I wrote this in a minute, I got nothin to worry
Ill leave you alone in this thread like Andy from Toy Story
Eh.

Get it, your my toy.. see im just toyin with you Fresh
How the fuck you spit fire with that listerine on your breath
Listerine IS flammable! http://forums.equipped.org/ubbthread...&Number=103581

Also, are you pregnant?

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This was somewhat even. Alias had that backfired punch, though...

however, fresh had lines that weren't creatively formed, in my opinion.

Voting sucks nuts because a lot of it is based on opinion. But my vote goes to;


alias minded.

[Alias Minded]

@Dadiator You forget to hit the poll?

[Will E. Chew]

I'll force this tired rapper to spiral faster downwards
than the entire cast of Howard Sterns should.
Obviously Something Was lost in Traslation
This guy is gay, but his style is "straight" wack
The only way hes winning is with votes from his lame claque,
Corny But Its Logical
You won't flip this shit little kid, because all you do is talk back,
Closest you'll get to a punchline is by sniffin Chris Niels Jock strap,
No...
You don't stand a chance, and I really don't have to prove it doofus,
Cause you'd have to get smarter just for me to call you stupid,

Thats it, I'm done, now I'll stop shitting on this rapper,
I'ma take my leave now like I was getting off the crapper,
Ha Best Bar U Had .. It Was Decent But Funny
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Fresh your soft as shit, my lyrics raw like meat
You a transvestite look a like how you nothing to beat
Eh...
Im a veteran youngin, you need to get your fucking weight up
Fresh winning is a dream, thats when his verse gets made up
Eh...
Ive been around, LLL, TNL, you need to get your words right
Back in the day RB made LLL"jr" for your type
Ha Corny But Made Me Lol
Thats why I wrote this in a minute, I got nothin to worry
Ill leave you alone in this thread like Andy from Toy Story
Eh..
Get it, your my toy.. see im just toyin with you Fresh
How the fuck you spit fire with that listerine on your breath

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Both Are But Atleast Alias Was Less Out Of The Two

Imma Vote - Alias Minded By A Molecule

[Fresh]

one more good battle alias