-=philosophy=-

[Ambient Light]

-=philosophy=-


Philosophical preaching passed down from ancient scrolls…
Conjuring essence of objects and how dimensions evolved…
The world revolves around an axis, which does not exist…
A dimension of third kind or forth the doctors do insist…
But the missed factuality on dimensions not able to detect…
Materialistic visions they subsist with no volume to reflect…
The dimensions except in deceit unable to portray matter…
With each illusionary object the form of it is much flatter…
Shatter the chimera of an entity trying to focus on all sides…
But only the conspiracy facts of misapprehension reside…
Decide on the unit as being a dimensioned object active…
Essences of the three or four proportions are non-captive…
We cannot catch the delusion and prove it’s justifiable…
However claiming it does not exist is fondly undeniable…
So apiece the materialistic virtue of the existence of reality…
Does anything really exist in a world of profound insanity..?
If factuality is questioned the moral fibres will soon break…
And perhaps so-called dimensions will be realised as fake…
The thesis cannot break, as the edifice of reality would stop…
Leaving a dimensionless divinity of philosophy on top…
Creating a crop of new thoughts to be harvested for mind…
Starting from the new first dimension, the tread of time…

[ELEETE]

Just plain fucking dope! Good shit dawg! This is probably one of the most complex pieces ive ever read.........the style is very different from many of the cats on RB.....You have such an expansive vocabulary...........great job! I look forward to reading your work in the future! I would vote this in legends but theres too many haters out there so id figure fuck it.........but this is a masterpiece no doubt about it peace......

[Penskills]

Best Open Mic to date...wow..can't believe stuff like this is getting slept on..~Click~Click~sig~~~

[Ambient Light]

Nobody wants to reply?

[Ambient Light]

Bump!!

[Knowledge]

all right, time 4 the breakdown:

Vocab - "Holy gosh darn man".very sick.nice to see some individuals pay attention in english class.

Creativity -- very creative and original
flow -- on point, never drifting or breking apart
Topic -- the only of it's type i've ever read...exelent peice
potential -- superb
elevation -- there's always room 4 that
overall -- beautiful drop

sorry it's bein' slept on

peace

[N-Demik]

Are we the Ambient from a year or so ago?

[SMZ]

Nice piece. No not nice - excellent. Flow was on point, Vocab was exceptional, topic was original. You progressed a pretty involved argument within - much props. I guess my only suggestion is to try to put more rhymes in by either double rhyming lines or introducing multis. But I think that would be extremely difficult with a topic like this - so once again nice work. Hit something in my sig, preferably Broken Metamorphosis if you haven't yet.

[Ambient Light]

Nice piece. I guess my only suggestion is to try to put more rhymes in by either double rhyming lines or introducing multis.

^ What an Idoit

[SMZ]

"Idoit"

-good one!

^What a Cretin

[Maven.]

hmmm...this had all the technical aspects, except flow in a few places, but I'm gonna talk about the content. You talked about dimensions and stuff...and the universe...and I guess, how philosophy would come out on top.
Heres the rub: I shouldn't have to guess. It's all well and good to be complex with an immense vocab and intelligent sounding lines, but if the reader can't pull a point from it, or at least feel what you're trying to say, then it defeats the purpose of posting it.
So my advice would be to tone the complexity down a little...it's really cool at first, but once you realize it's just words...with not very much behind them, then it loses it's coolness.

[conquistador]

well you and I came on this site at the same time.....and now you are better than me with fewer posts. I am jealous of you and I should post some hate, but I can't because you are too good man....one day you might get the balls to come to the cypher and there I will bust yo ass. I think you are better than me because you get more replies and they are all dickriding replies, there are no haters to be found, but it is good to know you got better homie.If you are smart you will stay outta my cypher seriously!