Someone's watching you
Every move you make
Someone see's what you do
Someone see's everything that is real or fake
Everyone is being watched
Critisized and judged by someone
Everyone is watching
Watching what is done
Even now as I write this
You think I haven't a clue
But I know someone see's me
For this I who is watching you
^Simple..Yet..another meaningful Poem..I wish everyone wrote like this..Originally Posted by Marek
*Somebodys Watching me~~~~~~~~~*
Thanx.
Up.
short..nonetheless sweet.
had everything a short meaningful poem needs.
keep it up
mos def- an ill poem.....I like stuff like that....makes you WANT to think...
Thanx...And...Up.
peace.
yaqh, very simple, very very simple, not a lot of vocab but not alot of room for t, flow was consistent, yah it is kinda creepy, haha this makes me wanna write a poem on this topic but i wont...soon, neway, nice n simple keep it up
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nyce drop man............it would be redundant to say this piece is simple..........lol, but it is........i lyke tha idea..........sorry i dont really judge poems, but i like tha idea that you got people to think with about 12 short ass bars.........nyce job, peace, 1
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