The Pupil's Pupil

[Bloom.Quist]

The Pupil's Pupil

Bloomquist
Why do we accumulate knowledge if in the end we all die?
Do we need to think when we have deceased? Is that the reason why?
My life has already chosen what to do when I leave
It’s sad, that struggles in school is all that I breathe
Oh god, when will it change? I need to leave this situation
School is only a mirror image, a fake lie, and an imitation
Learning ceases to flow, my mind corrupts into the sinning
Stress keeps winning, I give up, why can’t I go back to the beginning?
Will this help my life to increase? I believe Only time will tell
Walking these shadowed halls alone,School is no different than a cell

Sharp.
Depressed about this Useless work used to hurt
Mind and labor flirt, covered in hard earned dirt
Aesthetic talent is ripped from me relentlessly
Diseased and used feed their undying greed
Crucial brains are set to blame and restrain
Endless pain drips on our souls and stain
Its depressin' to give into the lethargic sin
The world is stressin as it closes in
I can't take the continous session
I'm growing unable to question
Fighting is labeled as futile
Look into the pupil's pupil

[Bloom.Quist]

Uppin. Replies on this collab please.

[Bloom.Quist]

Up this. Dam replies.

[Moniker]

this was a surprising read. Bloom - you've really elevated since last time i read your poetry work. keep at it. the aspect of your verse that stands out to me, is the ability it has to connect with the reader. you were able to capture the emotions towards school that most can relate to.

sharp - your structure was very creative. it worked well with the theme.

overall - very well done, both pieces complemented eachother nicely

[Bloom.Quist]

Thanks for the feedback Mind. Appreaciate it. Uppin on this. STOP SLEEPING!!

[aSap iLL]

this was a surprising read. Bloom - you've really elevated since last time i read your poetry work. keep at it. the aspect of your verse that stands out to me, is the ability it has to connect with the reader. you were able to capture the emotions towards school that most can relate to.

sharp - your structure was very creative. it worked well with the theme.

overall - very well done, both pieces complemented eachother nic

i ahev to agree really liked it alot, had nice emtion's going toward the topic, good sequence, nice rhytem.. overall realyy liked it nice job

[Bloom.Quist]

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