i made this piece like in February, so yeah... feedback and all that shit is preciated

To just Make a Name

Hard work is mandatory to just make a name
Ya gotta be hooked, no trust breaks tha chain
Gotta be aggressive to thrust n take tha game
But don't follow roads where guts, rapes and chains
Plague this age, too hallow to swallow nowadays
If that's what you want, lemme ask you how's it great?
You can be a hidden face covered by fake masks
Or instead be a driven grace hovered by great mass
You can have credibility by fans who don't listen
But in the end, reality hits you with facts that you won't glisten
Or be the true you, and soon you will own vision
Watch lyrical bones thickin, and the phone's hittin
No shittin, you want real hip hop heads to think you're full of crap
Cuz you're empty of guns and gats yet you say you're full of straps?
From the front to back you will be stunned and stacked
You try to later play with words but theres no pun intact
Probably because you went the easy way to just make a name
Thoughts it would all be great but in the end it'll plague ya fame

To Just Make A Name Can be Difficult
It Can Range To Being Typical or Being Pitiful
To Just Make A Name Can be Difficult
You Can Be Critical Or Be Known to Split a Fool X2

It can be tough, criticism is like the spittin prism
It can spread in all angles and can be the hittin mission
Hidden vision that will matter if you will scatter
Shatter like clay, or endure it and say it don't matter
You got obstacles that will address and test you
Don't let these monstaz fool you and mess you
To just make a name you gotta know to evade
Or know to withstand, but don't you betray
Your dream, the fifth hand, let your myth land
It's place in reality, don't believe Deathe's scythe can
Misshandle your dreams, gotta learn to shift plans
Some roads don't work, you gotta find it's path
It's not easy, not many people are known planet wide
Takes time to make ya name, don't let grown antics die
Experiment with formulas, we've seen shown tactics fly
There will always be haters, discriminaters and plain fuckz
Who will continue their trash until you finally claim buckz
And will either now love you or be ignorant and say he plain suckz
No one said it was child's play just to make a name
But you can make it by a change or simply stay the same

To Just Make A Name Can be Difficult
It Can Range To Being Typical or Being Pitiful
To Just Make A Name Can be Difficult
You Can Be Critical Or Be Known to Split a Fool X2

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