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    The Scene [ Content, Deacon, Fathom] SF collab

    "The Scene"

    ~Content~
    Some refuse to witness changes in
    so the scenes now apparent to others,

    You cant go through my pain and
    frustration like a seragent mother,

    Im busy giving birth to music
    missed hip hop for a minute
    but the aims a little sharper,

    Once you look at life from different aspects
    you just might witness bigger targets,

    Hip hop is...definately embedded in this
    heart of mine but even with a stage and
    microphone I still cant tell you what I love
    the most im just a ghost lost in the beat of
    time trying to build a garden from the
    street with rhymes since peoples ears are
    screaming just add water and ill be fine...

    When the mic and I divorced I never
    paid a dime for child support,
    Come on now I dont need to carry a torch,

    The burning passion in my eyes is there
    But only a few can see it,
    I'm not a rapper...i'm a fuckin volunteer
    music teacher..

    ~Deacon~
    Why study notes of rhymic melodies
    When nothing you do is compelled to be Anything
    so seamlessly conjuring note pads of fore thoughts
    These records are spinning so endlessly

    Dismissing the origin to record in
    Your stealing a beat recorded before him
    Scenes pounding out sounds that normally drowned
    When artistries released his first hit

    From the beginning to end “its not new”
    Rewind back the tape, its your chance to relate
    Whats valued as truth wont manage your crew
    Through a scene that’s bandaged and bruised….

    Fake wax to attach to every mix ever mastered
    The artist is clueless, sound producings elastic

    You’re an actor, rhyme smooth, you’ll get through it
    Here’s your chance to be you, fuck it we’ll just loop it

    ~Fathom~
    A serene scene broken at the seems
    Over haul of writing, knowing what I mean
    A gleem so glamorous yet transparant
    Only the most blastfamous become apparent
    A lone inhabitant, to yield his voice so true
    & if he only knew they didn't have a clue
    That through the window lies oppurtunity
    Once you've made it you're granted immunity
    From you to me, to put thoughts on paper
    To start a caper that ends with no traitor
    Just one debater hero, he came from zero
    To lead the masses that hear him say "so..
    ..what if I don't conform to your usual views"
    I keep people employed, by feeding more news
    We win, they lose.. unless they try to refuse
    An electric so big it doesn't need a fuse
    So beyond mass demonstraters, let me see
    Predictable haters that find it hard to fight me
    Express w/ glee, that peeps are diggin what I mean
    That of favoured writing among the rap scene.


    Will edit with links!!!!
    Last edited by deacon; April 26th, 2004 at 07:16 PM
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    Wow how dope are we?!?!?! Super Doper.

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    i agree...readers arent dope...we are

    done
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    i liked this... it was a bit of a played concept,, but handled it nice.... content... your verse seemed a bit choppy... the scheme i mean... but i liked the content... opened it up well.... deacon, again thought your scheme was a bit sloppy in places.... but mostly good...
    "Rewind back the tape, its your chance to relate"
    ^^i liked this line
    fathom... out of all i prefered yours... it seemed to flow better... smoother transitions... finished it up nicely... overall good effort... enjoyable read... ~one~
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    our piece was more on a poetry level...so maybe its not the typical rhyme pattern your use to....thanks for the peep
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    U guys deff know how to write.
    Content, i liked your scheme, n' your style
    i liked your depth deacon, always a good read from you
    Fathom.. first time i seen nething from u (unless your an alias)
    nice shit, deff a good read.. nice piece

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    soft focus is dope..
    all three of you hit this off...some parts a little more poetic, but still extreamly dope
    all of you had great verses, would sound good in audio probly...

    Good job guys
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    hell yes.
    you guys rocked this shit...

    1st off Content...
    i can't say it in words how much your writing really impresses me...the way you do it...the meaning within the words is just so strong...stronger than any1 on this site i believe...i loved your part in this

    2nd off deacon...
    deacon i liked the rhyme scheme you had...and you were very in depth in this piece and strait forward...meaningful as much as content's...your writing's are always a good read and this is 1 of the better reads from you seriously

    3rd but not least emotion aka fathom...
    this also may just be 1 of the best i've read from you also...you rocked right with these guys...very well done...the way you ended..those last few lines really caught me...very srtong contributer...


    all in all i can't say who's i liked the most.. and i can honostly say no one let anyone down here...you all did well

    can you guys please hit this up for me?
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125319

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    thank you very much for looking at this
    and replying in the ways that you have,
    deacon and emotion would say the same
    in my place,thank you
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    thanks for looking at this..
    Last edited by Content; May 7th, 2004 at 11:14 PM
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