due friday 11:59 eastern time.
chec kin, go 10-20, agree on it.
i forgot to give BOTH of you battles , lol.
next time just IM me and smack me.
due friday 11:59 eastern time.
chec kin, go 10-20, agree on it.
i forgot to give BOTH of you battles , lol.
next time just IM me and smack me.
Last edited by Richard Parker; April 26th, 2004 at 10:30 PM
LoL...well, technically, it would still stand
Last edited by Lethargic; April 26th, 2004 at 10:38 PM
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^^^
May want to edit that
AI
Gonna get this out of the way
10 lines
I have more important things to do
Blaze Leth, bounce his chin check, left hurt in the face
Type to come in last, since he was wack in the first place
Its the match of the week... A classic duel of vets...
Shit Leth talks about the old days...
...but then again so do his concepts
And when it comes to sex... he like men... god this loser's
Signs of hope have been replaced by detours
We be the movers and shakers... you know text gods
Atleast I am...
...you just move shakers and fill napkins... at ya job
Fuck this slob, look like shit, its obvious you lazy fuck...
Do the math, you ghost for Axe... and he still sucks!
AI
Boo@You..dammit Chrit, I said be serious.
Blessed when dissin? With a biter's respect and recognition
Forget a submission, I put MMA's in Chritical condition
Get left in Michael Jackson's position...your case is hopeless
Your audios turn into joke threads, soundin like DMX minus the dopeness
This bitch'll get broke quick... never legends, your not that nice
In fact... we'd barely get in letting my ass post twice
I guess then, may the best battler win...or maybe the best spitter
But it bugs me that you're on my dick, and if you weren't...I'd smash Chritters
Worship this figure? Fuck newbies and DR'sMy Prey's their idol!
Cuz when it comes to your verses..I'm feelin that custom title.
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Chrit- Your meta's and wordplay was very good here. I liked your
verse a lot just for your word usage. The only personal you put in
which was your closer, still based on opinion, wasn't hard enough.
If you wudda spent more time & hit w/ more personals it wudda been
a hella better verse.
Lethargic- Best attribute here was you hit harder and used more
w/ your personals. Ima personals guy & you just shined better w/
them. Honestly I wasn't really feeling the nameplays. Although
I did like the originality of them. Closer was dope! I had to go
check what it said but I chuckled.
V/Lethargic for a better verse.
Chrit didn't take enogh time.
pZ
thought it was pretty close....i agree though^
chrit should of came more personal...i liked a couple of those punches.....the old concepts punch and detours punches were nice...but u should of switched it up and hit some personals.....leth came strong on the personals.....hit hard with the audio diss and such...i also wasnt really feelin the nameplay but the fact that he had some personals and an ill closer....makes me vote...
leth
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
I didn't see it like ya'll did...
Blaze Leth, bounce his chin check, left hurt in the face
Type to come in last, since he was wack in the first place
vs.
Blessed when dissin? With a biter's respect and recognition
Forget a submission, I put MMA's in Chritical condition
Easily Chrit, the wordplay was good and clowning, Leth came personally, but his nameplay fell short on impact. Wordplay over nameplay
Its the match of the week... A classic duel of vets...
Shit Leth talks about the old days...
...but then again so do his concepts
vs.
Get left in Michael Jackson's position...your case is hopeless
Your audios turn into joke threads, soundin like DMX minus the dopeness
Eh, again Chrit, Leth's is hard to flow with, plus, eh...DMX? Not feeling this (yes, I've heard Chrit), still, weak impact, bad meta. Chrit came with a played concept, but nicely flipped.
And when it comes to sex... he like men... god this loser's
Signs of hope have been replaced by detours
vs.
This bitch'll get broke quick... never legends, your not that nice
In fact... we'd barely get in letting my ass post twice
Fuckin great way to fire back, Leth, nice way to climb back in things...Chrit, wasn't feeling this at all, forced rhyme, choppy flow.
We be the movers and shakers... you know text gods
Atleast I am...
...you just move shakers and fill napkins... at ya job
vs.
I guess then, may the best battler win...or maybe the best spitter
But it bugs me that you're on my dick, and if you weren't...I'd smash Chritters
Chrit coulda and shoulda worded that better but it still came out real funny, effective for clowning. Again nameplay from Leth, just not vibing, man. Real eh to me.
Fuck this slob, look like shit, its obvious you lazy fuck...
Do the math, you ghost for Axe... and he still sucks!
vs.
Worship this figure? Fuck newbies and DR's My Prey's their idol!
Cuz when it comes to your verses..I'm feelin that custom title
Great personal or fake personal or whatever, it came out dope for Chrit, great avy shot by Leth, real good, but I just don't thin it had as much personal impact as Chrit came with.
Good battle, but I've got Chrit winning this.
Peace
1-2
Imagine if we both had the priviledge of having the time to put forth real effort Leth...
AI
Chrit
Blaze Leth, bounce his chin check, left hurt in the face
Type to come in last, since he was wack in the first place
dopest line, niice
Its the match of the week... A classic duel of vets...
Shit Leth talks about the old days...
...but then again so do his concepts
eh.... similiar to the punch itself
And when it comes to sex... he like men... god this loser's
Signs of hope have been replaced by detours
witty
We be the movers and shakers... you know text gods
Atleast I am...
...you just move shakers and fill napkins... at ya job
blah nah
Fuck this slob, look like shit, its obvious you lazy fuck...
Do the math, you ghost for Axe... and he still sucks!
ok personal, shitty for closer though...
and Leth
Blessed when dissin? With a biter's respect and recognition
Forget a submission, I put MMA's in Chritical condition
ha ha ok liked that
Get left in Michael Jackson's position...your case is hopeless
Your audios turn into joke threads, soundin like DMX minus the dopeness
blah weak
This bitch'll get broke quick... never legends, your not that nice
In fact... we'd barely get in letting my ass post twice
decent
I guess then, may the best battler win...or maybe the best spitter
But it bugs me that you're on my dick, and if you weren't...I'd smash Chritters
chritters on your dick? hmm.... not sure who this hurts
Worship this figure? Fuck newbies and DR's My Prey's their idol!
Cuz when it comes to your verses..I'm feelin that custom title
good personal, nice closer.
This was close, after comparison I'd say Chrit took it... that opeer was the best punch in the battle. Decent by both, but with all the shit I take about my battles, I expect more from the 'text gods' of RB.... didn't see anything really special here.
vote - Chrit
fuck you guys, lol.
lol, dope. 2-2...I told you we shoulda came serious ChritWoulda been a dope battle.
i hate you. i wanted to see dopeness... i saw leth and chrit...
Last edited by Richard Parker; April 30th, 2004 at 12:01 AM
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Blaze Leth, bounce his chin check, left hurt in the face
Type to come in last, since he was wack in the first place
avg..
Its the match of the week... A classic duel of vets...
Shit Leth talks about the old days...
...but then again so do his concepts
slightly above avg
And when it comes to sex... he like men... god this loser's
Signs of hope have been replaced by detours
lol.. nice..
We be the movers and shakers... you know text gods
Atleast I am...
...you just move shakers and fill napkins... at ya job
nah..
Fuck this slob, look like shit, its obvious you lazy fuck...
Do the math, you ghost for Axe... and he still sucks!
avg..
Blessed when dissin? With a biter's respect and recognition
Forget a submission, I put MMA's in Chritical condition
good flow, avg punch..
Get left in Michael Jackson's position...your case is hopeless
Your audios turn into joke threads, soundin like DMX minus the dopeness
nah..
This bitch'll get broke quick... never legends, your not that nice
In fact... we'd barely get in letting my ass post twice
good..
I guess then, may the best battler win...or maybe the best spitter
But it bugs me that you're on my dick, and if you weren't...I'd smash Chritters
good..
Worship this figure? Fuck newbies and DR's My Prey's their idol!
Cuz when it comes to your verses..I'm feelin that custom title
avg..
Leth takes this, barely..
you fuckers need to care...
V/ Lethargic
everything was pretty much said already, very lackluster performance this week though Chrit told me he was gonna ass it this week, Lethargic had the custom line, Chrit gotta get a better rhyme scheme yo, but actually, close battle in my view,
Vote- Lethargic for hitting harder throughout the verse, being more consistent...everything has really been said already...obviously both weren't spending hours writing these verses...haha..
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