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Verses due by Saturday 12 PM Eastern!!!
Check ins are due Thursday 12 PM Eastern!!!. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Winner is in the FW match next week.
in...10 lines
EDIT: Yup I'll drop by midnight Central
Last edited by Laureate; May 4th, 2004 at 05:00 PM
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10 it is. I want to drop today. You down? PM me your answer.
Hence Forward
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Get a replacement. I'm out. Sorry.
Hence Forward
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Im in! Im in! Ill write two. Comon.......
^He can have it. I was only in jr to get to LLL. Since I'm in LLL now, I'm done with jr.
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New check Lyric.
Fuck that. Im going sixteen, and if you dont like it, you better drop before I do, or else Im setting the bar.
Last edited by KayOhh; May 5th, 2004 at 06:32 PM
I'm going 10
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This bitch thinks he’s the shit, like he wants to find excuses to fuck up
The bottom of the ladder ‘rung’…
…And you de-elevated a step to pick up!
This kids outta house and home, beggin on the corner fo help sadly
None of ya punches work…
…Kind of like your family!
You got whackness in your blood, constantly circulating in ya spew
Got injected with herbness…
…With whack ‘points’ of view!
You don’t belong here, took Archival’s place jus to defender her
Cause I’m a hard fuckin Pro…
…Your jus a weak Con-tender
Your crew name is said to be dope, but you dun understand it dude
Moron tried to find Electri-City…
…To locate nonexistent Shock Values
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You want to set the low standard of this battle, ... then fine,
Just didnt think I could squeeze, how wack you were in only ten lines;
Lyrics suited for this battle... skirt, haltertop and his newest heels,
Hows this kid gunna advance, when he's AIM'n at suppressed skills?
People say the truth comes out, with the absence of soberness,
Liryc jsut scuks!...<<I was stressed out, and downed a forty over this;
You're IJL's bitch, no you're RB's bitch, how can I take you seriously?
Whenever u say u've gotta "bone to pick", turns out you're hitt'n on me;
Future's bin decided since ur check in, but ur still In to wishin,
Your Leader knew you're gettin smoked, so didnt bother with a prediction;
vote ko...wittier verse, harder punches, better flow, better structure...
simply out classed lyric...
lyric... i was dissapointed with ya verse... u had punches but they didnt hit hard.
^Thats a whack ass vote....and possibly a hate vote.....
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This bitch thinks he’s the shit, like he wants to find excuses to fuck up
The bottom of the ladder ‘rung’…
…And you de-elevated a step to pick up!
too much shit goin on and flow was fucked up
This kids outta house and home, beggin on the corner fo help sadly
None of ya punches work…
…Kind of like your family!
good good. i liked this one alot.
You got whackness in your blood, constantly circulating in ya spew
Got injected with herbness…
…With whack ‘points’ of view!
so what.
You don’t belong here, took Archival’s place jus to defender her
Cause I’m a hard fuckin Pro…
…Your jus a weak Con-tender
kind of good wordplay. decent i guess. at leat you put some thought into it.
Your crew name is said to be dope, but you dun understand it dude
Moron tried to find Electri-City…
…To locate nonexistent Shock Values
no dawg.
You want to set the low standard of this battle, ... then fine,
Just didnt think I could squeeze, how wack you were in only ten lines;
seems played. good hit but come on lets be original here.
and work on your puncuation...u dont need a comma after squeeze...who is your fucking english teacher!?!?
Lyrics suited for this battle... skirt, haltertop and his newest heels,
Hows this kid gunna advance, when he's AIM'n at suppressed skills?
you could of maybe mixed it up a bit. lets try to be clever buddy.
People say the truth comes out, with the absence of soberness,
Liryc jsut scuks!...<<I was stressed out, and downed a forty over this;
that was shitty.
You're IJL's bitch, no you're RB's bitch, how can I take you seriously?
Whenever u say u've gotta "bone to pick", turns out you're hitt'n on me;
shut up that sucked.
Future's bin decided since ur check in, but ur still In to wishin,
Your Leader knew you're gettin smoked, so didnt bother with a prediction;
thats pretty good...but u could of flipped it better
both verses not too impressive. really. KayOhh didnt u drop that dope bar in $pit's hardcore match? about the 2 meters thing? whered that skill go man. both verses were shitty. but i liked the family work punch by lyric. Kayohh could of won this but he failed to creatively flip his punches around. could of been dope but you blew it. pz
vote L
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Dont sway man. Its a vote, I aint complain 'bout your vote.Originally Posted by Lyric
uppin.
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