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  1. #1
    MC_Merc
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    dont talk if you dont know(if u a wannabe or fake hears a message)

    (verse1)
    muthafuckin peep think that they know everything
    people runnin around like sdizzle wit da bling
    stupid ass bitch say they reppin for they town
    them wannabe mutha fuckas gives me a frown
    you wanna go up and rise, above all those you despise
    it aint an easy road, trust me wit no one by ur side
    you have dreams plottin, to get them bitches rottin
    real or fake, you wanna go from low rep to harlem globetrotin
    but dont rep if you in the bottom, your a bitch playa
    sorry, but remain underground if ya got to many hata
    but slowly you will rise, above your columinata
    maybe it all depends on action and fate bossplaya
    so dont say are talk about wut u want till ya got it
    cause you'll have it worse then muthafukin mofo misfit
    trust me its a crime, to speak ya mind if yo dont know
    tellin about how you gonna rise and defeat ya foe
    dont rep about that fact unless playa ya no fo sho
    wut wut wut i'm sayin is dont talk if ya dont know

    (chorus)x2
    look at those bitches talkin like hoes
    "i'm gonna get him fucked dats fo sho"
    well dont rep that until you do
    other whys you will look like a foo


    (verse2)
    people talking and rappin about a bunch of tragedies
    yet none experience tha pain it inflictd ,the animostity
    people sayin a feel bad for those who died in 9/11
    then rep bout it, but they life is like a personal heaven
    never had nobody lost then they go and sing about it
    saying we need changes, they live in a mansion man
    peope sayin wut they dont feel makes me really mad
    fuck all you phonies, when you die, god i'll be glad
    picture this, britney spears singing about lost relations
    she ditched JT cause he had a tiny wink and told the nation
    people tryin to be wut they no, no need for comfort
    you dont feel bad so dont try and imitating a convert
    wut i'm tryin to say to all you dums ass fuckin loes
    wut wut wut just shut tha fuck up if ya dont know

    (chorus)x2
    look at those bitches talkin like hoes
    "i'm gonna get him fucked dats fo sho"
    well dont rep that until you do
    other whys you will look like a foo

    ok you punk fucks who say u somthing just go home and die
    or contemplate and decide who you really are then you might deserve
    to live. I dont care if you a suicidal freak, if you fit my description
    you need a new plan, this i support more then anything, you can be more thugged out the bone thugs and still be a fake rep, and if you are fuk you.

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    wow...this sucked...

    flow was wack...rhyme scheme was simple as hell for most of the time...ex. know loe

    but the topic is just shit...i dont really wanna read u poppin off about fakes and shit...

    ur hook was garbage..."im gonna get him fucked dats fo sho"...i mean, damn...

    RB Help Center....thats all i gotta say...

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    this really wasnt that good
    look,practice! I write some everday and it elevates your skill alot-write ever chance you get.If somethin jogs you mind,lyrically describe it.carry a note pad around to rhyme with yo thoughts.trust me,with work and a dream you can do whatever you want.so just practice and youll get better.
    good luck

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    MC_Merc
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    wow, i though it was mediocre
    and whats wrong wit da flow

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    you need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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