5 bars
Due 1 hour after check-in
House rules
G/L.
5 bars
Due 1 hour after check-in
House rules
G/L.
1 hour!!! thats long..30 mins both drop?? count this as my check in..
No can do 30 min. Ima start writin' my verse in like 15, coz I'm busy right now.
So yeah, anyhoo, this is my check in.
Pz
Your lowered kid, like poor swarming toilets, but over hits..
..cause ive left your jaw opening..
..where im taking the piss
Its like ive smudged your make up, making congealed marks..
..as your features blushed in red..
..cause ive concealed yah
Kahns left ill, where I insert this sick note to contaminate him..
..now your like ill patients failing..
..as your containing ailing
Im your superior, so Kahn, how will your worthless ways excel..
..cause your only standing out..
..with bruising at levels
Your continuation is now finished, cause of your bad landings..
..now nobody feels yah presence..
..like an invisible man standing
Aight check it...
We got wack fucks on RB callin' people out like they're tough
And you too? Great! Now one Elevation Forum ain't enough!
Your loss'll just be another.............. one of my creations
Never heard of ya, oblivion best describes your reputation!
Dickriding's a talent with this kid, but what's even worse
Is that he doesnt do it for votes, just for peeps to read his verse!
He sucks, won't expect shit from him, except that he'll keep sucking
Checked ur profile, u got somethin in common with it, coz ur nothing!
Comin' thru ur way, coz ya death's just headin to your edge
CT's bullshit, coz after this, you won't be new to whorage!
G/L.
CT = Custom Title
Lol forgot to mention that.
Pz
Up....Up....And Away............................#1
Vote people..Seriously..If i had enough posts..id return the favour...
It was close.
Scriptous- First of all, this had great vocab and smart punches. You had a nice structure and rhyme scheme was tight. Technically, your verse was way better than ILL kahns. Your vocab stood out, it was greatly used and elevated. Your structure was elite and more complex than kahns. Your rhyme scheme was ok overall but some things were sketchy. Your punches is where you kind of lacked, you had smart punches but they just weren't that great, not very hardhitting.
Kahn-You had weaker vocabulary than script and I wont hold that against you but I always expect the older user to have a better vocabulary. Your structure wasn't bad, but it wasn't as elite as scriptures. Your bars were even and good. You're punches seemed played and forced. And many of them were weak, I was really expecting better than this since you battle so much.
Overall I'd have to vote for scripture.
murder murder
Nice vote sharp..ill return the favour on one of your battles when im able to vote..anyways..uppin#3
Sciptious verse:
Your lowered kid, like poor swarming toilets, but over hits..
..cause ive left your jaw opening..
..where im taking the piss Ok..not a great opener
Its like ive smudged your make up, making congealed marks..
..as your features blushed in red..
..cause ive concealed yahwheres the rhyme....or does it rhyme?
Kahns left ill, where I insert this sick note to contaminate him..
..now your like ill patients failing..
..as your containing ailing hmm....not to shabby...ok though
Im your superior, so Kahn, how will your worthless ways excel..
..cause your only standing out..
..with bruising at levelswordplay if it has to rhyme....nice though
Your continuation is now finished, cause of your bad landings..
..now nobody feels yah presence..
..like an invisible man standingOk finisher...not to great but yeah good
kahns verse:
We got wack fucks on RB callin' people out like they're tough
And you too? Great! Now one Elevation Forum ain't enough!lol good opener
Your loss'll just be another.............. one of my creations
Never heard of ya, oblivion best describes your reputation!eh...i dont like that punch..maybe its just me
Dickriding's a talent with this kid, but what's even worse
Is that he doesnt do it for votes, just for peeps to read his verse!LOL....nice
He sucks, won't expect shit from him, except that he'll keep sucking
Checked ur profile, u got somethin in common with it, coz ur nothing!ok...played
Comin' thru ur way, coz ya death's just headin to your edge
CT's bullshit, coz after this, you won't be new to whorage!played a liil..but ok finisher....bla not to great though
overall....i have to give it to kahn...he had a little more persistent and was on the dot but both were ok...just the other guys structe kinda messed it up also..forgot to add that...no hate guyss....Upping for yall to vote my battle..no hate votes please...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134805
^ My battle.
I aint bitching or nothing..votes can be a 1-1..but he like called me gay and your saying its his best punch???..come on..he had better lines than that one..anyways..not my decision to cancel votes..so..1-1..
Scriptious-your flow and structure was a lil shaky. However, you did use good punches with vocabulary. Not enough personals though. But u did have clever wordlplay that was very effective in your strategy. Your complexity also stood out and was more persistant
ill kahn-good flow and good structure. But, your vocabulary was lacking. You did have punches but they were not all that effective. On the other hand you had more personals than Scriptious. Your vocabulary and multis needs to improve as well along with your wordplay. Ya wordplay wasnt the best. Your opener and closure was weak too. Elevate more.
V/Scriptious -more complex persistant vocab
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Cheers for the vote..cant you poll it please..ahhhhh my last up..Can a few people be so generous and vote on this..im sure kahn will vote on a battle#5
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