10 Lines
No dickriding
No crew votes
No hate votes
No bullshit
Due 20 minutes after checkin...
Ill check in after you...goodluck peace...
10 Lines
No dickriding
No crew votes
No hate votes
No bullshit
Due 20 minutes after checkin...
Ill check in after you...goodluck peace...
Checkin In................................................ .
Ya weak texts can be beaten by filler like the Light’s OUT game…
You’re an embarrassment to RB…
…………………………..So they decided to white out ya name…
Pull out ya rap book, its all dusty, might wanna give it a rinse…
Ya rhymes are so old…
…………They were used back when Burger King was prince…
Cut the meta’s and let’s goes to personals for a switch…
Ya crew name fits you perfectly…
………..…Cause your always out of dopeness bitch…
I’m teaching the basics even though schools don’t start til September…
First off quit reppin a crew…
………………………… When you aint even a member…
Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help…
Could use brail on ya lines…
………………………And they still wouldn’t be felt…
Can i beat you in under 10 mins..well here i go..
I have the lethalist intelligence, to leave L.I’s brain stated mental..
..cause my punches hit on him repeatedly..
..to leave his lays in bent forms
Your a nonentity, coming in like something, wait for the aftermath..
..cause I’d personalise you with horrid speech..
..but ill punch for the crowd to laugh
This kids leaving here on a high, but I mean downwards by swipes..
..cause to say your dope in all forms..
..i must be out of my mind
Beating L.I through with foul syntax, the rest will spoil you later..
..as your verses are shit from when they drop..
..are you missing the toilet paper?
Im the highest vet setting the standard, so you wont walk with a win..
..where you aint got the slightest of chances..
..like unlucky Irishmen betting
Uppin..and yes L.I..i am in this crew...........#1
yes, he's in the crew.
the roster just needs to be updated
yo i pick script jus because of dat burger king line, dat wuz tight
^ that was me kid....and learn how to explain ur votes..............................up 1
It wasnt my line..you can vote yet..now go away and dont post in here..
La la la la......................................#2
Not bad of a battle.
I'm not gona poll vote though, I'll just give some feedback.
L.I.'s punches hit harder, seriously, well, they were more personal, which added wit to his verse. He had a good meta too, which added a bit of creativity.
Scriptious' verse wasn't bad. He only had 2 good punches which were witty, but other than that, it was weak.
L.I. took this, just giving some feedback for you guys, lol no poll voting, don't worry lol.
This battle was nice.
L.I.: You had good concepts. It was good flow and good punches, and some of it was witty. Most of it was dry, however. Wordplay was not complex enough for me. Structure couldv'e been way better.
Scriptious: You had good concepts too. You camemore personal than him, and you came with deeper wordplay. Your verse wasn't very witty either. But it was deeper, and in my eyes, you took this.
Vote: Scriptious
Thanks for the vote...remember to poll though...Uppin...#3