10-14 lines, due by midnight tonight
Hollatchu
Playmo
3-6Neilson
10-14 lines, due by midnight tonight
Hollatchu
Im checking in, i go first, ok?
Yeah, im a rookie, but i still rap like a pro
And you.. your a veteran, but you rap like a hoe
Im Tupac reborn, my rhymes are real nice
And you, your rappin like vanilla ice
For rappin with me, you will pay a high price
I will shoot ya in the head twice
Aight, im ready for ya, roll the dice
Heres a piece of advice
Battling me? Man you should think twice
I smash you like i do with all the mice
I cook you in the kitchen, you taste like chicken and rice.
If i were you, after this battle i would leave the USA
Your whole text is just a big fucking cliche!
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iight, that was my text, waddya think? Im a real noob... laugh if ya want, i can take it :P
I show ya how to do this, I'll set the plot son
u only 15, ill have to drive the kid, u gettin shotgun...... boom
ya said in a thread "you guys might laugh at my lines" this aint comedy
ur skills suck a mockery, u warning peeps like the national weather advisory
the only thing sweden got is the bitch Tiger wed and hockey
im rude and cocky, you's a dick ridin jockey, this be a KO like Rocky
Playmo you just a figure like play-dough, come out to play hoe
your ryhmes kiss bigger ass then the one on J-Lo
son your rap impairment is apparent, your incoherant
so inherit the skills and start lookin up to your parent
-hollatchu
3-6
you did alot better in this battle
you had harder punches your closer was pretty good
your lines are still stretches though
work on that structure
you had some metas they were aight
your flow was pretty good
overall pretty good
keep elevatin
playmo
work on your punches and that structure
punches were weak
flow was off because of the whack structure
get some better vocab work on that wordplay
read vet battles
elevate
vote/3-6neilson
for a better berse overall
made a typo in line 4, it should read skills "such" a mockery, anyway uppin for votes...........1
we need some votes..............................uppin 2
I killed this kid, could some peeps vote so i can get this battle out the way, uppin 3
can we get some votes please, drop a thread and ill tell my opinion, Playmo your gonna need to start uppin for votes so we can close this battle......uppin 4
uppin fo votes ´
uppin fo votes
opener - 3-6....both wack but...this was a better line....
closer - 3-6....both ur closers were ur best lines...but this was a hot one for 3-6...
punches - ehh...3-6...playmo, wtf were u talkin about, "eatin chicken and rice...wtf...
personals - none
multis - playmo...3-6 had none...
flow - playmo...cuz of those wack ass multis
vote - 3-6....all around better verse....he had better punches, and shyt that made sense..lol...u both need vocab and personals in ur verses tho
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uppion for votes
i was feelin nellson he had better punch lines but tha other due was good to
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